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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Finally I can comment but still having some problemsAngry
Just read from chapter 22-27 n lemme tell ya that there's only two things i noticed the most...the way this story is shaping up is amazingly PERFECT n the MIND BLOWING ITALIAN...i don't think I've noticed anything else...or maybe i just ignored them cause girl the way Sujal makes Italian sooo lovable that everything else becomes a blurLOL
Drunk Sujal speaks a lot but whatever he speaks o boy! I'm kinda speechlessEmbarrassed
but sober Sujal is sometimes a mean weirdo n mean weirdo don't deserve Kash
Poor Kash just because she don't drink,the girl has to face not only Sujal's but others idiocy also...ugh so much for not drinking.
Raj n Sujal aaannd...their bromance is hilariousLOLLOLLOL
Kash IS a sensible girl that's why she didn't kiss him...yippie...oooppss did i say that out loudWink
Ria go to your Zach n Raj keep your wonder pills to yourself...leave our couple alone but guess that won't help cause it's Vegas babyLOL
Now i wonder which Sujal is the real one...sober one or drunk one????
Whatever just don't make her cry...n everything will be happy like a daisy or at least I'll beEmbarrassed
you see i've not read all the chapters so i know you won't like my comment but plz don't mind.
Oh one more thing i'm happy  that you kept my request...i hope you remember!
Sis you're AWESOME!!!

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 10:34am | IP Logged

PART 33

k- S.Sujal!!

Awaaz bhi nai nikal rahi Kashish ki achanak..

k- Chalo bahar aaoo.. w..we are laet.. ch..chalo!!

Swing hawa se apne aap hil rahi hai

Uss bade se tree ka bada sa shade aa raha hai

Owls tree se udd rahe hain

k-SUJAL!! tt.tum nahi aoge to main jaa rahi hoon!!

'Meowww'...ek bili

k-Aah!!! Sujal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kashsih is shouting!!

k-Shuu shuu..

Shooing the billi away

Ek huge shadow uske peeche hai

Kashish whirls around.. getting spooked hair on her neck raised getting goosebumps

Sujal khada hai peeche

k - Sujal!!

Sujal mazze se grin kar raha hai

s-Yes...that's my name

She runs to him and punches him on the chest..

k-Itna time lagta hai tumhe aane mein!!

Sujal who was grinning, suddenly stiffens and and his eyes widen and his expression turning of pure fright

s-WAHAAN KYA HHHAIII

Points behind her

k-Kya kahan!!

Kashish turns around fully scared scream ready to shout for help

Sujal burst with laughter

k-Tumko mazze aa rahe hai na bahut!!! HAINA!!!???

He is still laughing

She glares at him

Sujal ki thodi der baad hassi rukti hai

She has stopped looking at him. or talking to him, ignore kar rahi hai..

s-Care for some food?

k- No

Bhooki mar jayegi lekin baat nahi karegi , naa hi smile karegi chahe daant toot jaye

Ek third grade type bar type hai saamne; bar cum motel

s-Fine I am going in...

Sujal chal leta hai

Kashsih idhar udhar dekhti hai bahar ka crowd bhi aisa hi ganda sa hai

So she also quickly follows him

Sujal orders a beer and a burger

s-A pint beer and a ham burger. You Kash?

Kashsih hup chap Sujal ke bagal mein baithi hai

She shakes he head in a no

A cleavage showing waitress looks atSujal

s-We need 2 rooms

Waitress-One room available dude

Waitress gives Sujal a sultry smile thoda bends to show off; her cleavage are tattooed

s-ok...give the one.

Waitress- Handsome you can stay with me if you want

The waitress whispers in his ears

Sujal shakes his head in denial

s- Thanks its really nice of you to offer. But no thanks. Please bring the keys

Waitress frowns and brings the keys

s-Kashish, tum room mein jao.Take rest

Kashish ne socha to tha full naraaz hona ka lekin... ab yahan iss dayaan ke sath Sujal ko kaise chod de...

k- Tum?

s-You go...I'll be here

k- Tum bhi aa jao

s-Nahi..main yahin thik hoon..tum jao

k- Aa jao

s-No , I'll be drinking some. I'll manage

k- Drink karna hai to bottle le kar aa jao

He raises an eyebrow

She has a blank face, stubbornness shining in her eyes

s-Bottle leke aa jaun? Tumhare kame mein?

k-Humara kamra hai

Shee gets up and hold his hand pulling him to come with her

s-Kya hua? Hamara kamra?

k-Tumhara dimaag jahan hai piine mein wahin tak rakho zyada mat socho.. pehle bhi rahe hain 1 kamre mein tum drunk and me asleep, no big deal

s-Tumhe darr lag raha hai yaa mujhe miss kar rahi ho

Kashish ko durr wali wall phir bohot tempting lag rahi hai..

k- Aana hai to aa jaana.. !

Sujal ka haath chod deti hai wo. Chabi pakad kar starts to go and search for her room.

Itni bhi darpok nahi hai..apne gaon se akele aakar rahi thi bade sheher meni, sab dhoonda apne aap...koi topp nahi hai Vegas ka motel

Idhar ghoom kar getting catcalls she finally finds the room

Wo dim si lighting room mein, 1 double bed.. stale se smell kamre meni...bathroom bhi zyada saaf nahi, tv ke saamne po*n movies ka schedule pada hai

Kashish bed dekh leti hai ki wo to saaf hai naa..

Sujal sms her-'Call me...if u feel uncomfy'

Finally sab kuch jhad jhud kar let jati hai ar Sujal ka sms padti hai.

Usko reply karti hai- 'I am vry cmfrtbl I have a whl dbl bed to myslf. u can warm ur ass on the bar stool dwnstrs. Gud nite'

Gussa aa raha hai usko Sujal pe...saari bakwas karwa lo  se.. live in ki baat karwa lo.. lekin ek raat platonically sober mode mein sath kamre mein nai kaat sakta.. Randy goat!



Edited by storywriter - 10 September 2012 at 10:34am

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 10:40am | IP Logged
part 33
stubborn people...
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 10:44am | IP Logged
Nice update Tongue

Both are stubborn .

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
nice part...

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
nice part cont soon

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 12:03am | IP Logged
poor them ...can they stay for 1 hour atleast without fighting LOLLOLLOL first they are all goody goody next hour fighting LOLLOLLOL god help them LOLLOLLOL 

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PART 34

Wo dim si lighting room mein, 1 double bed.. stale se smell kamre meni...bathroom bhi zyada saaf nahi, tv ke saamne po*n movies ka schedule pada hai

Kashish bed dekh leti hai ki wo to saaf hai naa..

Sujal sms her-'Call me...if u feel uncomfy'

Finally sab kuch jhad jhud kar let jati hai ar Sujal ka sms padti hai.

Usko reply karti hai- 'I am vry cmfrtbl I have a whl dbl bed to myslf. u can warm ur ass on the bar stool dwnstrs. Gud nite'

Gssa aa raha hai usko Sujal pe...saari bakwas karwa lo  se.. live in ki baat karwa lo.. lekin ek raat platonically sober mode mein sath kamre mein nai kaat sakta.. Randy goat!

Ab 2 ghane ho gaye

Raat ke 2 se baj gaye

Kashish bhi halki neend mein so ragi thi

Dham se door opens

Kashish uth jaati hai grabbing the bed side lamp

Sujal stumbles inside almost falling down

k- Tum!

Lamp rakh kar gets up to support him

s-I am fine...fine..-hic-...jst came to...jzt to chk

He gives a thumbs up...his feet taking him back wards

k- I am fine too

Kashish bitha deti hai use bed par pakad kar

k- Thodi der ruk kar chale jana

s-Kazzz..I am fine...really

k- Did I say you are not? Thoda rest kar lo

Kashish baitha deti hai Sujal ko

s-Angelo [Angel]...I am..zorry...I didn't wanna..hez zrunk-hic-

Kashish looks tired .. chalu ho gai iski Italian

s-Really

She nods-

k-I know I know.. it's ok

s-u knw...how...hic

She puts a pillow behind his head

k-How?

s-Nooo...dnt..wanna sleep...I...I'll go...go

k- Haan to mat so bas sit comfortably

s-Nooo...

k-Kya no? Meri company itni gandi hai?

s-Why dtz...u zk me..in..ur armz...-hic-...huh...y diz u...leave..me

He complaints like a kid

k-Maine kab choda tumhe? Tumhe kaha to tumhara mann nhai to zabardasti thodi karti main. Mujhe laga tum irritate hoge if I insisted

He shakes his head...

s-u dn undztnd ..a...zin ...hic-hic-

k-Tum bhi to sab raat mein nasshe mein Italian mein samjhana chalu karte ho

He laughs drunkly

s-u..u knw...I had...18 pints...18

k-You had 18 pints?

s-Yuppp...for u...

k- Mere naam par to mat piyo atleast...

s-goz zis for u

Ek bell si nikalta hai

She takes the bell..

k-For me?

s-Yuppp

She smiles

k-Thanks, it  is very cute

She kisses his cheek on an impulse

Sujal ka face flushes

He holds her face giving her a huge kisss on cheek

k- why are you kissing me? Thanks to maine kaha naa...

She says smiling at him and his drunk antics

He keeps on kissing her...ankhein khul nahi rahi hain par kiss zarur karna hai

Kashish dheere se pulls away

Keeps her fingers on his lips

k- I get it, you said "you are welcome.."

He sucks her finger

She keeps her head on his shoulder

k- Sujal...

s-eighzeen pinz..jzt for u...Kazz...jzt...-hic-

k- Don't drink for me anymore please. Mujhe achaa nahi lagta; bilkul acha nahi lagta

s-I cn zrink...all the alcohol..in zis world..for u...hun...bavy...il mio amore...-HIC-

k-And I wish you wont...

She strokes his chin, his cheek and his hair trying to soothe him..

s-I cn...even...dieee.foz..u...die...for...u ...HIC-

k- Chup. Aisi bakwas nahi. Bilkul chup

She keeps her palm on his lips..

He kisses her palm

Usse pata hai ki naashe meni badbada raha hai.. lekin wo sochna bhi nahi chahti ki Sujal ko kuch ho..

s-kizz me...love..me...-HIC-

k- When you are sober. When you are sober

s-nooo nowww nowww

k- You won't remember it in the morning if I kiss you now

He jerks his hand...losing balance..almost rolling off the bed

Kashish jaise taise wapas bed par letati hai mushkilse bhari pahad ko utha kar

s-wanna...stay...wiz...u foever...-HIC-

k- Ok we'll stay together forever

Kashish ne to man ke secret armaan keh diye

s-i..come...home...zunk..and..u...love..me...everzay...blisss foever

She nods imaging him coming home after work and them spending the evening and night together

s-i'l...love..u every zecon...every moment ...HIC- will...u...love..me?

k- Itna payr karte ho?

s-huh? ...HIC-

k- I will love you forever; only you and no one else ever

She says; dil ke armann reh reh kar bahar aa gaye

He has a drunk smile and sucks her lower lip between his lips

He is trying to kiss her

Kashish puts a closed lip kiss on his lips and pulls away.. even with a drunk she doesn't trust herself..

Sujal ke to hosh aise hi nahi hain.. wo bhi  emotional ho gai hai.. kuch bhi hoga agar to galti Kashish ki hi hogi

k-  You smell...

Kashish bahaana maar deti hai

He hugs her tighttt crushing her in his arms

She is all placid and loose and soft in his arms not resisting even though her mind is shouting warning signals.. move away wale

Lekin Kashish ko laga ki sober mode mein ye sab romance to possible nahi... jo ha thoda bahut mil raha hai le lo...

He digs his face in the curve of her neck

She knows ki Sujal to shayad sober mode mein bhi reday ho jaaye par phir she is not comfortable ki abhi to jo hua Sjal woudn't remember much and itna jhamela nahi itni tension nahi ki what next ab kya.. abhi to Kashish ko pata hai ki Sujal would fall asleep kuch  nahi hoga...and she gets to be near him without risking him breaking her heart

Usse agta hai ki Sujal likes her enough for a year long fling lekin usse kuch zyada nahi .. and Kashish is so fallen for him ki she would this time jump from bridge ki bachne ke chance hi naa ho jab Sujal  would break up with her aur marne ka shauk nahi hai Kashish ko ab

One pessimistic side of Kashish says ki Sujal just likes her aur ye forever wala true love nahi hai but her optimistic side says may be possible hai...live in ke baad kya iske answer mein Sujal ne negative nahi kaha naa...may be he would marry her par agar Sjal differently feel kart hai then he should be a man about it and say it all when he is sober and not mince his word and slobber all over her when he is drunk.

Sujal to so hi gaya tha, Kashish bhi so jaati hai thodi der baad

Sujal ka phone bajne lagta hai beech raat

Kashish Sujal ki bahon mein qaid hai

TRIIING

TRINGGG

Kashish gets up with a start

k-Sujal Sujal!!! Phone !!!

Sujal to ghode bechke aaram se snoozing

She tries getting up and away poking him with her elbow in process upar se uthane ki koshishein alag

Sujal murmers something..ahfgtdk..khhd...in his slumber

Kashish do teen laga deti hai s ke

Sujal opens his eyes for moment ...tightens his grip on her aur upar pad jaata hai Kashish ke kissing her on the curve of her neck

k-What???? ?!!Sujal!!!!!! SUJAL UTHO!!!!! What do you think you are doing?!!

She tries pushing him away and get away from him..

TRIIINNG

Phone aur bajna band nahi ho raha upar se...ring ring alag irritation

Kashish dhoondhne ke koshish karti hai ki phone hai kahan

Phone nikalti hai Sujal ki pocket se caller id dekhti hai

It says HOME

k-Sujal ghar se phone hai; ghar se!!!

Sujal ke kaan mein chilla rahi hai

Par wo tass se mass nahi ho raha



Edited by storywriter - 14 September 2012 at 1:27pm

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