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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 24)

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
two homeless people wonder what they will do now to time pass LOLLOLLOL

LOL LOL quite strange to see both proposing each other indirectly LOLLOLLOL guess for sujal drink is talking & for kashish her headache LOLLOLLOL but live in for them sounds good atleast they can stay together TongueTongue

So, Sujal wud be taking her to Italy TongueLOL..if it wud have been a typical Indian soap LOLLOL we wud say...boy wants to take the girl to meet his mother LOLLOLLOL...wonder what sujal has in his mind TongueLOLLOL


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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 1:29am | IP Logged
part 31
sab ke sab bigad gaye Vegas mein...
but Sujal is sweet...
cont soon...

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 5:52am | IP Logged
she talks sense when half out of mind...LOL

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 12:00pm | IP Logged

PART 32

s-Homeless?

k- Chalo kahin chalte hain..

Sujal nods in reply

k-Logon ko tameez hi nahi hai.. sochte hi nahi hai ki room mein koi aur bhi hai uska kya.. God !! Bas pii lo aur phir ek hi cheez ghumti hai dimag mein phir hosh kyun rahega.. doosre ke bare mei kyun sochein..

s-Sab log aren't like you, Kash

k- Of couse nai hia.. main aise kaam nahi karti.. mujhe thodi zyada sharam hai abhi

s-hmm...tum darpok ho

k-Main darpok nahi hoon! Mujhe public mein ye sab karna pasand nahi hai. Hote hain exhibitionist main nhai hoon

s-You have been in Vegas for so many days...you haven't boozed, didn't get wild...didn't even kissed

k- Well I did see people practicality having sex and almost strip show..got dunked by a barrell full of spirits...upar se I had my wild day on my b'day. I know now what I like and what I don't. Tumhe bhi to hall meni uthkar dance pasand nahi.. this is wildness for me Mr Grewal

Sujal has a smile thinking about her bday while walking under the starry night sky

k- To main darpok nahi hoon..

s-To kya ho?

Again his intense eyes on her

k- Tum hi bata do... main to jo bhi bolungi tumhe contradict kana hi hoga

s-Nah! I think you are  beautiful, sweet, lovely, hot, sexy, pretty, nice and you are red coz of blushing

She shakes her head to hide behind curtain of her hair

Sujal smile kar deta hai

They reach a children's part while walking

Kashish ko jhoole dikhte hawo in auruchal padti hai

k- oh!!! Chalo jhoola jhulte hain!!

s-hmm..you carry on

Kashish pakad leti hai Sujal ka haath dragging him around

k-Nahi nahi aise kaise!!

Jakar usse swing par baitha deti aur khud side wale jhoole pe baith jaati hai

Bechara odd sa feel kar raha hai...he is big for the little jhula...fit nahi ho raha...khada ho jata hai

k- Nahi nahi baitho lets compete who goes higher

s-No no..its for kids...it will break..

k- Kuch nai hoga baitho!

Kashish baitha deti hai phir Sujal ko phir peeche se jakar dhakka deti hai to get him start swinging

Phir kud jakar jhulne lagti hai..

k-The loser is monkey!!

She shouts joyfully pushing her wing high

s-I am happy to be a monkey

Sujal utar jaata hai...starts pushing her swing

k- Nahi nahi this is no fun...

Kashish bhi ruk jati hai..

k-Chalo kuch aur jhoolenge phir

She grabs hi hand wahan slids hain see saw hai... slide mei wo honge nahi fit, see saw me Kashish upar hi atak jayegi

Wahan ek chota sa labyrinth[bhool bhulaiya] bhi hota hai, jiski walls Sujal ke shoulders tak hi atai hain

k- Chalo chalo isme chalte hain!!

Kashish  tip toe par khadi hai wall ke upar se dekh sakti hai

Usmein 2 entrance hai beech mein fountain

k- Tum wahan se joa main yahan se, dekhte  hainpehle kaun pohonchta hai beceh mein

She says pushing him inside and bhaag jaati hai doosre entrance ke andar

Suja; to pareshaan sa ho gaya...ki Kashish aisi childish bhi ho sakti hai

Kashish idhar uhdhar bhag bhag kar raasta dhoond dhoond kar pohonch gai 4-5 min mein

Sujal lazily aata hai after a minute

Sujal ko to sab dikh raha tha Kashish bhaag rahi hai coz of his height

Wahan beech  mei 1 fountain sa hai jiski edge par you can sit to Kashish wahin baithi hai paani mei pair dalke.. copying Sujal

Sujal comes without making a sound...slightly taps her shoulder

k- HUH?!!

Kashish almost falls in water as she jumps in fright... poora shower le leti hai fountai ka 1 sec to

He holds her

k- Oh mujhe dara diya!! Awaaz karke nahi chal sakte?!!

She says keeping a hand over her heart

s-Tumhari tarah thode main Bheem ki tarah chalta hoon. I have grace and poise

She opens her mouth to retort but closes it again sputtering over words

k-Miai- main.. Bheem.. main!! Ohh! You are impossible!

Kashish uthkar dham dham pair patakti hui jati hai lekin wapas ati hai phir doosre raste ghustoo hai wo bhi dead end

Sujal was giggling under his breath

Phir aati hai galat dead end mein ghuskar

s-Turn right

She glares at him

k- Main to Bheemm hoon na.. deewar hi tod dungi ... tumhare direction nahi chahiye

s-Todo todo, phir police pakad ke le jaaye to mujhe mat kehna

Kashish feels like tearing her hair out

s-Waise soch raha tha ek lounge le lete hain

k- Lounge kisliye?

She say turning right

s-Room in a lounge wher will we stay in the night

k-hmm theek hai..lekin its business season lounge khali milega?

s-Some small dandy lounge wld be empty

k-Tum mujhe table mein mat rukwana lounge ke naam par

Kashish says.. idhar udhar rasta dhundhte hue

s-Haan haan aapke lie to honeymoon suite hai, madam

Achanak she disappears

Sujal frowns

s-Kash !!!!!!!!???

He is looking for her

s-Kashhh this isn't funny ! Kashish

Kashish wapas se reappears

k-Uff kya hai? Sandal mein kuch ghus gaya tha nikal rahi thi jhuk kar

s-You are just...nothing

k- Kahan jaungi main iske andar? Raasta to mil nahi raha mujhe

s-Turns left then left then  right

Kashish nikal jati hai bahar following his directions

s-Waise  the place is nice. Achcha silent saa khopcha hai, koi dhund bhi nahi sakta

He deliberately leads her to some dead end and follosw her there

k-Arre ye kahan pahocha diya!!

She says turning around..

Sujal ki direction follow karke to she has lost all sense of direction..

He sits on the floor

s-Achi jagah naa. It's silent. Lot of privacy, nice atmosphere

k- To yahin basna hai kya?

s-Bass jaate hain..[with a grin]

k-Chalo na.. yahan dead end par kyun le aaye?

s-It's actually..haan what gals say...yup romantic

k- Mazak karwa lo tumse... saara sene of humor phoot phoot kar Vegas mei bahar aa raha hai tumhara. Ye?romantic? Kaisi ladkiyon ke saath rehte ho tum? Andhera kahin jaane ko jagah nahi kya romantic?

s-What can be more romantic than that? You don't know what romance is. I can give you some tuitions

k-Mr Grewal there is difference between seduction and romance.. and I don't want lessons in seduction...

She says trying to peek over the walls standing on her tiptoes

s-O...then gimme lessons in romance

He moves forward and tickles her calve

Kashish jumps.

k- Aah!! Would you stop scaring me like that!! Mujhe laga pata nahi kya janwar hai. Wahan door baitho. mujhe raasta dhondhne do

She says moving away looking for route out

s-Kya karoge raasta dhundke. Jagah achi hai

Kashish looks at Sujal straight in the eyes..

k- Fine! I agree jagah achi hai...mauka bhi acha hai aur lighting effect bhi achha hai bas ek problem hai

He looks at her with questioning eyes

k- Its. not. comfortable.

She say folding her arms

s-Well...come to me..I'll make you comfortable

k-Maan lo ki agar...I come there...and we start something...and then things progress..to...prob 1 kapde gande, prob 2 no protection, prob3 we would be on dirt and mall stone..kuch bhi chub gaya to socho... you'll be in biggg pain...

Kashish keh rahi hai upar jhakt hue

k- and finally... the biggest thing

s-ohhh man...you wre thinkin about sexxx

k-Mujhe rasta mil gay!!

Kashish bhag gai

s-You have a dirty mind...ewww...you can rape me

k-Can't rape the willing a

Awaaz aati hai Kahsish ki kisi diwaar ke peeche se

Kashish to bhaag gai..Sujal naa aaya

She didn't realize..the park looked indeed spooky in the night when alone and lull

Bahar nikal ke she stops at the entrance ki yahin se bahar ayega wahin wait kar rahi hai

k- Sujal!!!! Kahan ho!!

Bahar se chilati hai

Kashish kea as-paas jhingur ki awaaz aa rahi hai

Hawa se jhadiya hil rahi hain

k- S.Sujal!!

Awaaz bhi nai nikal rahi Kashish ki achanak..

k- Chalo bahar aaoo.. w..we are laet.. ch..chalo!!

Swing hawa se apne aap hil rahi hai

Uss bade se tree ka bada sa shade aa raha hai

Owls tree se udd rahe hain

k-SUJAL!! tt.tum nahi aoge to main jaa rahi hoon!!



Edited by storywriter - 09 September 2012 at 12:07pm

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
Hey, finally read all the updates.

Sorry , I was not being regular on FB and couldn't read the update...a BIG SORRY Hug.

But now completed and up to date with the updates.

Loved the Sujal and Kashish...but I think I love the more sensible and caring Sujal Embarrassed LOL Hope Kashish too will become a bit for sensible in the near future LOL

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
he is lost in her...i nher actions...

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 12:29am | IP Logged
guess sujal is in mood to play chuppa chuppi LOLLOL no problem they have whole night to play that since Sujal isn't having dirty mind like kashish WinkWinkLOL ...& i dont think he isn't having plans either TongueTongueLOLLOL ...

wonder sujal raasta bhool gaya or may be he is in too much in love with the place LOLLOLcome back soon sujal LOLLOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 2:26am | IP Logged
part 32
nice part...
is she lost?
i dont think so Sujal hai na...
cont soon dear...

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