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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 23)

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LOL LOL couple having a tiff TongueLOL...poor souls Hug they need to clear up soon TongueLOL...i guess dono apne apne kamre mein band hone se acha hai ...lock them in one room WinkLOLLOL both can take away each others headache TongueEmbarrassedLOL

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part 29
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oh kitna caring hai hes...
cont soon dear...

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PART 30

s-Maine kya kaha tumhe sunai nahi dia. Kashish!

 Kashish goes chup chap not answering or acknowledging

Sujal bhaagke jaake grabs her

s-Samajh mein aata nahi hai tumhe?

k-Nai aata. Leave me

s-Chup chap kamre mein jao. I'll get the medicine

k- o please don't bother. Ican help myself

She says putting a hand over head.. closing her eyes briefly

s-Kashish! Inside now!

k- Shh chillaa kyun rahe ho? Huh? Jaadu ho jaega chillaane se?

s-Kyunki tum sunn nahi rahi ho. Get inside. Take rest. I'll get the medicine

k-Kyun jaun anadar.. kya hai aisa bahar ki main nhai dekh sakti?

s-Tumhe kuch samajh mein to aata nahi...you don't even understand simple sentences

Kashish looks at him.

k-Muijhe hndi aur englisj aati hai Italian nahi

s-I didn't speak in Italian

k--yah right... aur main tumhe itna bother nahi karna chahti. Mujhe wasie bhi aur samaan lana tha, so don't bother...

s-Fine...come with me

Kashish is speechless for a moment

k- Tum kyun takleef kar rahe ho...waise bhi tumhe meri baatien pasand nah hain

s-Why do you like playing mind games..huh?

k- Kya?!!

Bechari Kashish ki bass ki nahi mind game khelna...

Dono hathon se sarr pakad leti hai

k-Theek hai fine.. saath chalna hai chalo... mujhe nahi pata ki tum kya chahte ho.. I give up trying to make sense

s-Hold my hand

Kashish pakad leti hai haath

Sujal guides her to the medical shop

s-Kya lena hai lo

Kashish kehti 1-2 dawai ke naam.. 2-3 mouth fresheners.. 1 toothbrush..

Shop wala change mein condoms pakda deta hai

Sujal can't help a smile seeing the condoms

s-Give her candies

Shop keeper looks ki kya???candy kaun mangta hai...and Kashish was really not caring

k- Nahi nahi its fine

Sab ek sweep mein bag ke andar

k- Let's go

Sujal ka haath pakad kar tugs him towards hotel

Sjal lights a cigarette on the way. Everything was so vague and undefined. He needed some ease

Kashsih gives him a silent murderous look

He looks at her

s-What?

She just shakes her head choking back her coughs and coming head ache due to irritation of fumes...deewar dhoond rahi hai sarr phodkar permanent illaaj karne ke liye

2 minute baad she starts coughing helplessly

Samjh nahi aa raha ki sir pakde ya muh par haath lagaye

He throws the cigarette away

Kashish ki khasi bhi jati jati..jati hai...

Shee looks a bit pale too

s-You should have said

Kashish kuch nahi kehti.. decide kiya hai ki bakwas nhai karegi as long ass possible

He looks at her

s-Kya hua? Time pass hai naa. oh time pass ho raha hai naa ye

Kashish chup hai

s-TUMSE BAAT KAR RAHA HOON MAIN

Kashish ruk jati hai , eyes crunched shut

k- Kya sunna chahte ho bata do.. kya karun aini bata do.. koi game nahi.. koi ladai nahi.. jo chahiye wo saaf saaf bolo.. main de saki to de dungi warna mana kar dungi...

Sujal is heaving

k- Say it

In a second she is in his arms

Kashish bhi ro deti hai saari tension sari frustration sara headache coming out through her tears

She is muttering

k- Kya karoon main..kya karoon...kya karoon main...nahi ladna mujhe... bolo kya karoon

She is sobbing in his chest

He lifts her in his arm and carries her quietly

She is sniffing crying all the way

Jo waterworks on hue off ho se nahi rahe despite her best efforts

He takes her to his room

s-Ab waterfall start mat karo. I don't know what to do , when girls do thta'

She nods-

k- Sorry.. I am.. I'll stop...don't worry...

Ponchti hai asoon.. chup hone ki kafi koshish karti hai.. par chuup ho si nahi pa rahi

s-Kash, no. I didn't mean that. Damn! I just can't make you understand. I don't like when you cry

Kashish nods

k-T-trying

He sits near her

Kashish apn face apne palms mein chupa kar baithi hai

He removes her hands

Pins her to his chest

s-Shhh. Hushh Shhh Kash

15 min baad Kashish chup hoti hai

k-I am fine now..

Sshe says to his chest

s-Have the medicine

Usko deta hai paani aur medicine

Kashish le leti hai

k- I don't why I.. I didn't mean to cry...

He holds her face and slowly kisses her forehead

She closes her eyes..

k-Don't act so nice to me..

s-Well..Ii am a nice ma..why shouldn't I act nice to you

Kashish nods in agreement

k-You are a nice a man..

s-Yup...so that's why I should act nice to you too

She shakes her head

s-No? why?

k-Coz...tum .. tumhare jaisa aur koi hai nahi na...I'll get used to you to mera kya hoga?



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now dat sounded & looked nice TongueLOL...atleast some nice moment from nice couple LOLLOLLOL...nice man taking care nicely Big smileTongue...hope he is able to clear her doubts WinkWink in hindi/english not in italian LOLLOL bechari ne dictionary bhi nahi kharidi LOLLOLLOL...
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part 30
lovely...
hes so caring...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 2:04pm | IP Logged

PART 31

k-You are a nice a man..

s-Yup...so that's why I should act nice to you too

She shakes her head

s-No? why?

k-Coz...tum .. tumhare jaisa aur koi hai nahi na...I'll get used to you to mera kya hoga?

s-Kya hona hai..matlab?

k-Matlab kuch nahi... dimag phir raha hai idhar se udhar.. I dunno what I am saying..I think I should go sleep

Kashish kehti hai getting up

s-Kash

k-Hmm?

He hugs her

s-Don't worry

She hugs him back...

s-Everything would be alright. Just fine

She shakes her head... but says

k- Of course it will be.. tumhare sath sab acha hi hona chahiye

s-I am talking about you, rather us...hum dono ke saath acha hona chahie

k-Is there a us?...eh... main jaati hoon

s-You know..I never befriended an Indian girl ever. You are the first and I really like you

k- Coz you never came to India before. I  like you too Sujal...my first Italian friend, God promise

s-I am an Indian-Italian

k-Same thing, Same thing

s-I didn't befriend any Indian gals in Italy

k-All Indian girls in Italy are half Italian Sujal.. I am the fist whole Indian piece you met...

s-Yeah whatever, but I like you better than any Indian gal

k- Well thanks .. I like you better than all Indian guys too..

He smiles

s-I am honored, Madame

k-Oh the ...honor is all mine?

s-How about coming to Italy then?

k- Huh? Italy? Serious?

s-Yup, serious. I have to go to home..for some small work then will go to India. Why don't you come long

k-Well I.. I would really like to but... are you sure..? Jhel loge mujhe itne lambe time ke liye?

s-Any doubts? It's a pleasure

Kashish laughs...

k.- Slick Italiano

s-I want you with me...islie to le jaa raha hoon

k-Kitne din ka kaam hai?

s-Dunno, wo wahan jaake pata lagega. I guess my younger bro's girlfriend is pregnant or something too or they are getting married..something like that

k-Guess!! You are guessing?!! Sujal tum mazak kar rahe ho??

s-Why would I joke?

k-Tumhe pata nahi hai ki tumhara bhai kya kar raha hai? Real bhai? Aisi kya ladai hai usse?

s-Ladai? Why would we fight?

k-So why don't you talk?

s-I talk

k-To tumphe pata kyun nahi hai? Guess kyun kar rahe ho? Or this is some Italian thing?

s-It's his personal thing. I guess he had a fling or something with this gal. He is dumb as he is slept with her or something. She is pregnant I guess. So guess they will marry

Kashish's jaw drops

k-What?

Phir Kashish muhh band kar leti hai

k- Kuch nahi

s-Say it

k-Tumahra bhai bhi ek item piece hai.

s-He is dumb. Can't he use condom

k-Half Italian item piece, josh mein hosh kho diye..

s-Hmm hota hai, tumhe kya pata

k-...bass pata hai...

s-What do you know?

k-Tumhe step by step description sunna hai?

s-Yesss sunao

k-Sorry maine dawai li hai sona hai.. kabhi aur sunaugi...

She says saccharine sweet

s-I think Kash...you should get married now

Kashish freezes for a second hearing him

k-oh ohhh OHH! Achha! Kyun?

s-Tumhari family ko tumhari shaadi ki chinta nhi hai kya?

k-Unko...unko meri ab kisi cheez ki chinta nahi hai..kyunki maine unki bezzati kari hai aur unhone mujhe ghar se nikaal diya hai.. ab main kuch bhi karun naa karun.. unhe chinta nahi hai..

s-Kaisi beizati?

k-I left home to work, akele rahi anjaan sheher mein, bade sher mein...jeans pehni, skirt pehni..bohot badnami hui...mere profession par bhi question uthe...phir mera affair bhi hua.. sab ne jo kuch shaq kiye.. sab sach ho gaya...ghar se pehle hi nikal diya.. ab gaon mein bhi shayad hi ghusne de..ab kisi ko tension tabhi hogi mere liye agar main gaon ke kisi ladke se shaadi karne baithi..

Kashish laughs ironically

s-Khair...main hoon naa...I'll search  a suitable match for you

She look at Sujal...unreadable expression ke saath

k- Tum dhundoge?

s-Yuppp

k-Mat dhundo, aise he khush hoon main..shaadi karke aisa kya mil jayega... jo shaadi ke bina nahi milega

s-Husband

k-Huh.. name tag se kya hota hai?

s-Well gals like love care baby and nametag etc

k-Love-care marriage guarantee nahi deti.. I don't care for tags and baby can happen without marriage

s-Tell me what kind of man do you like

k- I like you...ab?

Kashish looks at Sujal

Sujal looks at her

She shrugs.

k.-Kaha tha, mat bigaado mujhe

s-Well..is that a proposal from the lovely lady

k-No... just answer to your question.. maine kaha naa.. shaadi nahi karni hai just for sake of it..

s-To shaadi karni hi nahi hai?

k- Jab koi milega tab hi.. zabardasti tag ke liye nahi..

s-How about a live in?

k-Live in.. I dunno.. kya pata fir koi use karke chod de... so my answer would be no...except in case I n could really trust the guy.. to maybe haan...

s-With me?

Kahsish looks at Sujal upar se neeche.. scan...

k-Aur live in ke 5 saal bad kya?

s-Kya pata, you say

k- Well.. is that a sort of maybe proposal from the handsome rake?

s-Yes, may be

Kashish smiles...

k- Sahi timing hai tumhari...mera dimag waise band.. tum adhi bottle ghatak chuke ho...dono ke hosh aadhe ude hue hain...but you know; if its you ... then yes... but I don't want to lose our friendship if I say yes...I don't want to lose anything if I say yes... very selfish but kya karoon...par phir live in ke baad ek bohot badi problem hai

s-What problem?

k- Meri shaadi kaise hogi phir?

s-You said..you don't believe in marriage, see you are contradicting yourslf

Sujal pasar gaya aaram se

k-Maine aisa nai kaha.. I said I don't believe in marriage jus for namesake...agar do log genuinely ek doosre se bohot pyaar karein to unhe zarur shadi karni chahiye... phir bachche shaadi ke bina ho to jaenge.. lekin its difficult for the child to cope with peer pressure of having a single unmarried parent...

s-Ufff kitna sochti ho tum; this and that , that and this

Kashish smiles...

k-Well...it proves that girls have brain

s-But no sense

Kashish uth jaati hai..

k-I should got to sleep now... maybe someday it'll make sense to you...goodnight Sujal

Kehke jaane lagti hai Kashish

Tabhi wo bevda party enter staggering and stumbling

k- oh tum log bhi aa gaye...

Sujal holds her wrist and pulls her back

k- Kya?

She looks at his hand and then at him

Raj was snogging crystal

k- oh ye to.. oh... umm well.. you never know...

Raj and Crystal fall on bed...while almost making out

k- I have to go

Sujal gets up and gets out of the room, shutting the door behind nd taking Kashish along

k- umm tum kahan jaoge? Mere room aana hai?

Sujal shrugs

s-You go...I'll manage

k-bolo..jaldi chalo warna Ria ghus jaegi

Kashish ke room mein to Zach aur Ria full dum mein love making kar rahe hain floor par gire pade

k- ewww!!!! Ria!!! Tum Zach ke yahan kyun nahi jaati ho!!!!

Kashish chilla rahi hai gate par khadi hokar

Par koi sunn hi nahi raha, they are sooo busy

Kashish gate dham band kar deti hai

Sujal deewar se tek lagake pocket mein haath daalke khada hua hai

s-Homeless?

k- Chalo kahin chalte hain..

Sujal nods in reply

k-Logon ko tameez hi nahi hai.. sochte hi nahi hai ki room mein koi aur bhi hai uska kya.. God !! Bas pii lo aur phir ek hi cheez ghumti hai dimag mein phir hosh kyun rahega.. doosre ke bare mei kyun sochein..

s-Sab log aren't like you, Kash



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