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PART 28

k- Aaj hum log kahan jayenge?

He looks Kashish

s-Wherever you say

Sujal ki ankhein intensely Kashish ko dekh rahi hain

k- Mai kya bolun.. muhe to kuch samjh hi nahi aata, itni mushkil se kal koi jagah dhoondi socha ki kuch aacha aur naya dekhne ko milga.. pata chal strip show hai...sab aisa hi hai yahan Vegas mein kuch bhi karlo..

He chuckles seeing her pout unconsciously

k-To main kya kahun ki kahan jaana hai. Tum log bhi to kuch kaho main koi tour guide hoon kya

s-Kya kare sabko nanga nach dekhne mein hi mazze aate hain, Kash

Kashish gives him stern look.. lekin hass deti hai thoda..

s-Aaj to tumhe chand pe bhi janaa ho to wahan bhi le jaunga...[says in a low whispering voice]

k- uh.. nahi.. matlab...

She gets all flustered again .. over this Italian low voice smoky intense eyes thing he does..

k- umm jahan tum jana chahte ho wahan chalte hain..

s-Main kahan jaana chahta hoon

k- Bolo...batao

He smirks while his eyes ooze sensuality and mischief

k- Batao batao.. main sabko bol dungi sab taiyaar ho jaenge, phir chalte hain

s-Sab nahi..bass main...[again smoky intense eyes and low tone]

Kashish frowns-

k-Llekin sab kyn nahi? Hum sabke saath ghumne aaye hain naa.. aur waise bhi kahin bhi jayein I am sure wahan kuch to aisa waisa ho hi raha hoga.. sab bhi dekh lenge..

s-Nah...everybody doesn't have the right...just I do; only me

He is moving his face closer to her; puts behind a wild strand of hair behind her ear

k- Rr..right? Matlab koi exclusive entry wala club hai?

She says leaning back a little

s-umm..hmm

k-oh...

He is coming closer real slowly

Kashish is moving back and back...leaning away and away at the same rate

k- Aisi kaunsi jagah hai?

He firmly grabs her waist

She collides to his strong wall lik chest

Kashish is concentrating on taking deep breaths and not forgetting to breath and blacking out

k- Ye kya...Sujal?

s-hmm

k-Ye tum..

She is squirming slightly trying to get a little distance between them...

Zyada try bhi nai kar satki..1 to itna mann bhi nahi doosra pani mein girne ka darr

k-Sujal.. let go...

s-Shhh quiet

k-But .. ye.. Sujal this is...chodo please

He leaves her

Bass peche hoke giri paani mein

k-oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Again he pulls her with great force

She collides again to his chest

This time Kashish saare social rules and etiquette bhool kar pakd leti hai

She puts her hand around his neck ki phir galti se bhi gir naa jaye

k- Kya kar rahe the tum!! Main gir jaati to!!

He smiles

s-Nahi girogi. Main hoon naa, pakad lunga kass ke

k-Hanso mat it's no funny. Kya mujhe daraane mein itne mazze aate hain tumhe?

She says pouting

s-Nah

k-Bas sab milkar mere mazze le lo...

She rests her head on his shoulder

k-Tum aise he better ho, less drunk..

s-Hmm? Really?

Kashish nods rubbing her cheek on his chest

He starts moving his hand on her spine

k- Tum naa bohot achhe ho.. bas jab kabhi kabhi stubbornly kisi bhi baat par atak jate ho aur kisi ki sunte hi nahi ho...

s-Hmm really? We also have a solution

k- Kya?

She says looking up but not moving away

s- [Whisper] You just have to claim my lips

She narrows her eyes...

k-How is that a solution?

s-Try it

k-Phir mazze lene chalu kar diye tumne mere

She says pulling away from him

s-Sach keh raha hoon..dil se

He holds her hand and puts it on his heart

Kashish is repeating Italian tricks Italian tricks in her mind

She shakes her head

k- Yaa to tumne pii rakhi hai ya tum mere mazze le rahe ho

He clicks his tongue

k- Warna main jab tumhe itne time se pasand nahi aayi  to 2 din mein kya jaadu hoga.. waise bhi kal to tum Crystal ke sath jaa rahe the..ab wo nahi hai to lo.. Kashish hi sai... issi ke sath time pass kar lete hain

She says looking away..

He holds her face

s-Tumhe lagta hain main tumhare saath time pass karta hoon

He looks into her eyes for a moment

Kashish shrugs...looking down

He leaves her abruptly and goes to stand at a corner

Kashish baithi rehti hai wahin aur thodi der..lekin wahan bhi phir kuch ladke aa kar bhin bhinane lagte hain

To wo uth kar Sujal ke paas hi chali jaati hai..

Sujal was feeling offended

k- Dekho main.. I ... you are what every girl can dream of.. tum mujhe kyun pasand karoge, it's not logical...bass yahi baat hai...so being friends I understand.. but uske aage..

She shrugs again

Sujal bina kuch kahe chala jaata hai

Kashish follows him

k- Suja tum aise kyun jaa rahe ho...please tum gussa mat ho mujhse

s-Why would I be angry? Main to time pas karta hoon naa. Time pass, right?

k-To tumne kabhi kaha ki main pasand ho tumhe? Kaha that you are serious? Jab piite ho bas tab hi meri yaad aati hai. Thode dino pehle mujhse baat nahi kar rahe the.. kabhi Ria pasand hai kabhi Crystal pasand hai...3 din ke liye main pasand hoon bas yahi naa. Theek hai ho tum serious...maybe 1 poore week le liye serious ho. Thaek hai!

s-YOUUU!!!

He crunches his fist and shuts his eyes for s second

s-You just, just leave it!

He walks away

k- Haan fine leave it! You need another drink now.

She shouts after him but doesn't follow him, gussa agaya Kashish ko bhi..

He turns to her

s-Nooo I need a whole tank. You have a problem?????? k- Haan jakar doob jao usmein.. sochna mat ki ho kya raha hai.. keh kya rahe ho.. just float around in numb washed out reality

s-I took you here for a walk thinking acha time spend karenge. I came to this place for you with your stupid friends!!! But Yooouuu!!!

k-My stupid friends??? Bhai bann gaya Raj to tumhara. My stupid friends?? To jao.. kyun yahan ruk kar sabki tarah pagalon wali harkatien kar rahe ho? Mujhe bhi acha nahi lagta hai tumhe sabke saath aise nashe mei dekhna.. nahi aana chahti thi main bhi...par socha ki thoda break loon so I can start again.. socha tum hoge to koi to hoga

Kashish says her eyes getting a bit watery

s-Mujhe naashe mein dekhna?????? Meri life? Meri drink, mera mooh, mujhpe nasha, tumhe kyaaa???

k-Haan mujhe kya, mera hi dimaag ghaas charne chala gaya tha...poori life hi meri -.. jao tum jaakar sharaab mei dubki maar lo

Kashish says tuning away and walking away brushing her eyes

s-COMPLETE YOUR DAMN SENTENCE

Kashish bhag ke jali ja rai hai...running away at full speed



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wow amazing part cont soon

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awesome...

they were spending such a nice time together n then again fought...

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Part 27

Good to saee kashish taking care of himEmbarrassedEmbarrassed ... drunk confession from sujal was cute  EmbarrassedEmbarrassed wonder how much seriously kashish took it LOLLOLLOL & how much serious sujal was TongueTongue i doubt even if he remembers what he said TongueLOL...

& guess sometimes Sujal's italian saves his life TongueLOL if kashish understood it kashish wud have beaten up if she came to know wat was going on his head LOLLOLLOL

Ria's idea is good TongueTongue wonder if kashish will implement it Wink

Part 28

i wonder where on moon sujal was planning to take her LOLTongue...par kashish darling messed it up LOLLOL...cant blame her too she has too many inner demons inside LOLLOL...sufferred a lot Ouch

hope they clear out the mess soon SmileSmileSmile who will take the first step Tongue



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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 8:42am | IP Logged
part 28
oh they fought...
Kahsish thinks Sujal is just time passing and Sujal ko gussa aagaya...
araey Sujal peeche peeche ja uske...
she will get los tin Vegas...
cont soon dear...

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PART 29

k-My stupid friends??? Bhai bann gaya Raj to tumhara. My stupid friends?? To jao.. kyun yahan ruk kar sabki tarah pagalon wali harkatien kar rahe ho? Mujhe bhi acha nahi lagta hai tumhe sabke saath aise nashe mei dekhna.. nahi aana chahti thi main bhi... par socha ki thoda break loon so I can start again.. socha tum hoge to koi to hoga

Kashish says her eyes getting a bit watery

s-Mujhe naashe mein dekhna?????? Meri life? Meri drink, mera mooh, mujhpe nasha, tumhe kyaaa???

k-Haan mujhe kya, mera hi dimaag ghaas charne chala gaya tha...poori life hi meri -.. jao tum jaakar sharaab mei dubki maar lo

Kashish says tuning away and walking away brushing her eyes

s-COMPLETE YOUR DAMN SENTENCE

Kashish bhag ke jali ja rai hai...running away at full speed

Apne room mein jaa kar lock kar leti hai...samajh nahi aya usse ki ladai hui kyon...matlab she gets ki kyun hui lekin exactly kyun hui.. arr wo bhi aise tezz chila chila kar.. bina kisi reason ke... and wo ro kyun rahi hai , itna hurt kyun feel kar rahi hai

Ria starts banging ki

r-Room khol. Kya kar rahi hai? Khana khaale

Kashish says ki bhook nahi ha,  wo baad mein kha legi

r-Door to khol. Andar kyun ghussi baithi hai?

k- I am not well..sarr dard hai mera. Let me sleep it off

Kashish says gate khole bina

Ria door kholke aati hai. She had keys

Kashish leti hui hai blanket muhh ke upar daal kar

r-Waise Sujal ko dekha kya? Kahan gaya? Not even picking phone

k- Mujhe kya !! Kahin jakar piiye!!

r-Kya? Tujhe kya hua?

k-Sarr dard

r-Tablet doon?

k-Nahi. Le li maine

r-Ok. Nahi I was thinking akela kahan gaya Sujal. Hotel mein nahi hai

Kashish sits up as she realizes ki jhagda hue 2 ghanta ho gaya ar wo tab se kahin chala gaya hai

r-Wo Crystal dhundne aai thi usse

k-Mujhe kya.. nahi milna hoga uske Crystal se to main kya karoon

r-Nahi par jayega kahan. Crystal yahan hain aur hum sab bhi, to kahan jaa sakta hai aise bina bataye

k- Main maa hoon uski? Fairy godmother? Oracle?

r-Arre puch rahi hoon bass. Chal you take rest

k-Mujhe kya pata? Infact mujhse kyun pooch rahi hai, mujhe kyun pata hoga? Main kya lagti hoon uski?

r-Ufff chilla kyun rahi hai?

Ria goes

Lekin ab Kashish ko bhi chain kahan...5-10 min idhar udhar.. bad badana phir picks up her phone and calls Sujal

Uska phone switched off hai

Aur bad badati hai

Shaam ho jaati hai par Sujal ka phone nahi lagta

Sab decide kar rahe hote hain idhar jayennge aaj udhar jayenge

Kashish bhi bahar aakar idhar udhar bahar hi ghumti hai ki kahin dikh jaye Sujal

As she sees people deciding to go out she opposes

k-Lekin Sujal aaya nahi hai. Humein uska wait karna chahiye. Hum uske bina nahi jayenge. Infact hum sab ko plot up hokar usse dhundna chahiye

r-He isn't a kid. Aa jayega wo. Hoga kisi ke saath

k- Lekin kisi problem mei nbhi ho sakt hai.. or maybe he is too drunk to come back on his own...bachcha nahi hai lekin superman bhi nahi hai naa

Sab aapas mein phir group discussion start kar dete hain

Kashish convince karne ki koshish kar rahi hai ki jakar Sujal ko dhundte hain par koi sunn hi nhi raha Kashish ki, yahan jaan nikalne lagi hai Kashish ki

Kashish chilaa deti hai

k- Tum logon sharam atai hai ki nahi!!! Agar nahi ja raha koi to theek hai mein hi akele jakar dhund leti hon..!!!!

Sab chup

Angrily Kashish stomps of getting ready wondering ki kahan se dhondna chalu kare

Crystal bhi wahin thi

Crystal-Call him

k-It's switched off . Do you think I am mad that I won't have have tried

Kashish chillake chali gai Crystal pe as she thinks they are wasting time

Kashish ne to hotel wale se city ka map maanga aur taxi hire karne lagi thi

She knows ki chala to jayega nahi...aur agar ladai hui bhi hai to theek hai its her fault ki yahan laai.. wapas India 1 piece meni pohonch jaye phir she would never bother him again... chahe kuch bhi ho

Kashish nikal rahi thi ki Sujal ghus raha tha hotel

Kashish ruk jati hai  phir marches up to him

k- Kahan the?! Pata hai sab kitne pareshaan the? Aur phone kyun switch off kiya?

He was smelling of alcohol and was drenched, ballbikhre hue

He stares at her and resumes walking past her

Kashish ko gussa to aa hi raha tha...

She pulls his leeves hard.. rokti hai and walks around to face him!!

k- Ayee! Tumse baat kar rahi hoon

He narrows his eyes

k-Phone kyun off kiya? Samajh nahi aata ki log pareshaan hote hain

s-Nahi aata. Mere liye koi pareshaan nahi hota

k- Yeh kya bol rahe ho..? Huh? Kyun nahi parehsaan hota  koi bhi tumhare liye? Sab hote hain. Sab dhoondh rahe the tumhe. Main bhi dhond rahi thi dekho

He shows him the map and the list of names of all the pubs

He looks at her with his smoking intense eyes

k-Why wouldn't anyone care? Sab pasand karte hain tumhe

s-hmm..hatto raaste se

k-Kya?!

s- Move aside

k- Fine!

Kashish mudh ke walks off

He holds her wrist

s-Kahan jaa rahi ho?

Kashish ko sarr jar diwaar par phodne ka mann kar raha hai

k- Kyun, tumne hi kahan haa hatne ko to jaa rahi hoon. Tumhe bhi jahan jana hai jao.. fikar karo to nahi pasan,  naa karo to complain suno.. aur jo genuine fikar hai wo to dhari ki dhari alag ek kone mei

He drags her along with him

k-Ab kya chahiye? Kahan le ja rahe ho? Uff  Sujal I can walk stop dragging me around like a prisoner

Sujal pohonchta hai rooms ke paas

Darwaza kholke Kashish ko uske room mein ghussa deta hai

Ria's jaw drops witnessing the scene as she making her way put to leave for party

k- Kya hua hai? Kuch bologe? Yahan kyun laye ho? Sab jaa rahe hain, tumhe nahi jaana unke saath?

Kashish shouts after him

Ria-Arre baap re ! Kya hua isko? Itna gussa

Kashish bhi kamre se bahar nikalt hai following him

k-Kya? Kya matlab hai? Bol kyun nahi rahe ho? Nahi jaun main kahin? Is that it? Yahi kamre mein baithun akele?!! Fine!!!

Kashish bang zor se apne kamre ka gate band kar deti hai and jakar turns on tv at full volume banging her head on the pillow to vent out her frustration

Saare log hairaan..dono ko itne gusse mein kabhi naa dekha

Sujal bhi also locks himself

Sujal ko laga Kashish akele kahin jaa rahi hai islie kamre tak chod aaya

He doesn't like the idea of Kashish going out in Vegas alone...yaa to uske saath jayegi yaa phir nahi jayegi

Sab dost leave

Kashish karme ki deewar par sarr tika kar baithi hai.. ab to genuine headache ho gaya hai usko

Aati hai wo thodi der mein Sujal ke paas

Knocks on his door

He doesn't open for a while

Kashish knows 2-3 baar

Phir laga ki so raha hoga to starts to leave

The door clucks open

Sujal phir bed se tek lagake zameen par shirtless baith jaata hai, side mein ek bottle si adhi padi hui

Kashish ignores everything... ceiling bohot interesting hai..

k- Sorry disturb kar rahi hoon

s-Bako

k- Main poochne aayi thi ki asprin hai?:|

Sujal looks at her

s-Check in the cupboard

Kashish jakar cupboard kholti hai...

Janjaal hai wo, cupboard kahan hai

Sujal ke smell wale kapde, cologne

Sujal ne undergarments bhi upar phek rakhe hain

k-Ishh!!! Kya haal bana rakha hai

She  mutters..automatically straightening things as she starts searching for asprin

Kuch 10-15 min yahi karti hai.. nai milti dawai par almari saaf ho jati hai

k- Nahi hai tumahare pass...main bahar jaa rahi hoon lane. Tumahre liye kuch laana hai?

s-Bahar? Kahan?             

He asks with a no non-sense expression taking two swigs off from the bottle

k-Medical shop. Dawaai lane

s-Kahan hai medical shop?

k-Reception se pochongi

s-Koi zarurat nahi hai jaane ki

Kashish narrows her eyes slightly fir walks out without a word...sarr dard bahut badh gaya hai bechari ka. Lekin deewar ab bhi utni tempting lag rahi hai apna sarr phodne ke liye

Sujal gets up quickly

s-Maine kya kaha tumhe sunai nahi dia. Kashish!

 Kashish goes chup chap not answering or acknowledging

Sujal bhaagke jaake grabs her

s-Samajh mein aata nahi hai tumhe?

k-Nai aata. Leave me

s-Chup chap kamre mein jao. I'll get the medicine

k- o please don't bother. Ican help myself

She says putting a hand over head.. closing her eyes briefly

s-Kashish! Inside now!



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nice part cont soon

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so he cant even let her go alone...hmm...

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