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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 1:52am | IP Logged
part 26
nice part...
all are so lost in the nasha...
only Kashish is sober...
poor her...
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 2:12am | IP Logged

PART 27

He grabs her hand, opens her palm and puts his hand under her

Pours the liquor on her palm and starts licking and sucking her hand

Ab Kashish kya kare...she is enjoying all the sensations it is bringing her.. but chahti bi nahi ki  Sujal aur piye

s-You..you..-hic-...you..make..me..drunkkk...you...you..Kazzz-hic-

k- Haan sab meri hi galti hai

She says... finally morality winning

She takes he hand away and tries to take the drink out of his hand

s-Kazzz...kiss me...kiss me...I..I am drunkkk-hic-...bacio [kiss]

k- Yes sure you are drunk. I'll kiss you when you are sober.. you stink

s-Kizzz

k-No kiss. No il mi, no bachio till you are drunk

s-Voglio fare l'amore con u [I want to make love with you] Kazzz pleaseee Kazzz

Kashish is like huh ?!! kya!!!KYA!! par kuch kehti nahi

k- No..you are drunk; that's your punishment for drinking

s-Suzzzal likez..Kazzz

He again keeps his head on her lap

s-Likezzz her a lorrr -hic -really likez

She strokes his hair..

k-If that is so then why don't you ever listen to me? You don;t do anything for the person you like, you don't like me you are just saying that...

s-Suzaal -hic- Suzaal is lonely..needs..Kazzz...Kazzz

k-Kashish wlil be with Sujal when he acts properly like a gentle man...

Dil par pathar rakh kar she says

Sujal ankhein band kar leta hai murmuring..Kazz..Kazzz

Kashish sehla sehla kar sula dete hai ... beech mein humming some tune.. to help him sleep aur baalon mein hath pher pher ke..

Thodi der to baithti hai waise hi lekin Sujal ka sarr bhi bhari hai, pair so gaye Kashish ke

So kafi mehnat ki jaati hai uthne mein bina disturb kiye

Sujal ke sarr ke neeche takiya rakha, chaadar udaaya usse, takes off his watch and wallet, jaakar saari drinks ki bottle chupa deti ha, agra khali kar di to pay karna pad jayega.. Kashish ko aise bekaar ke kharche pasand nahi

Kashish ko pata hai ki chupaane se bhi Sujal rukega nahi, kahin aur hake pii lega par kam se kam jav tak uske kamre mein hoga tab tak to nahi piyega naa

Kashish ne itna bhi nahi socha ki Sujal ke pine ka ye faida hai ki wo Crystal ke pass nahi jaata...par Kashish nadaan hai itna socha kahan

Ab agli subah

Ria aati hai wapas kamre mein

Sujal to wahin pada hua hai sofe pe

Kashish bed pe soyi hui thi

Ria aake key se door kholti hai zor se awaaz karke

Kashish uth jati hai awaaz se-

k-Hai kaun what?

Looking idhar udhaur...

Ria is looking at Sujal

k- oh tum aa gai

Ria-oh he was with you.

k-- haan Kal Raj ne gate andar se lock kiya aur khola hi nahi

Ria-I guess, you two should shift together

k- What? Tum bhi piikar bakwas kar lo, sab to wiase hi bakwas karte rehte hain

ria-What did I say? He is always Kazz Kazz. I am with Zach. Ypu two can pair up

Kashish uh jaati hai, kapde nikalti hai nahane dhone frsh hone ko

Ria-Have fun with him, usse bhi kyun sukha rakh rahi hai

k- Please Ria.. I don't.. he isn't ...don't be crude... main aise hi kisi ke bhi saath... ek baar galti kar chuki hoon phir se bas kise 2nd motive ke lie kisi ke saath kuch nahi karungi and waise bhi Sujal responsible type ka ladka hai... he would feel too responsible if anything happens.. main nahi chahti ki jo friendship hai wo bhi tut jaaye

Ria-You told me you like him

k- Like karna alga hai.. I like him and I don't want to lose him because of some silly thing or senseless fling

r-You can date him

k- Agar koi sober ho to kuch ho...

She says getting irritated and frustrated... jaise uska man nahi karta kya... Sujal to saare open signal deraha hai.. par Kashish to drunk nahi hai naa.. nahi keh saki ki main nashe mein thi to maine kiss kar diya.

r-Ask him for a date and you know...he is sooo cute when he is drunk

k- Tum 1 ko choose nahi kar sakti ho kya ... seriously Ria leave him alone now.. you had your chance and you blew it

r-Can't I admire a good looking man?

Kashish wants to say not Sujal...but only says

k- I am against shameless ogling. Main jaa rahi hoon nahane . Stay away from him!

Kashish says frowning and going into the bathroom..

Ria shrugs

Kashish jaldi se 15-20 min mein sab karke bahar aa jaati hai

Ria bed pe so gai thi

Kashish ke baal se cheetein Sujal par padti hain

He opens his eyes

Kashish apna breakfast order kar rahi hoti hai phone par ek hath se apne baal jhatakte hue.. seedhe karte hue...usse to pata hi nahi ki Sujal par cheetein aa rahi hain

Sujal straightens up and stretches himself

Kashish phone rakh kar turns to dekha ki Sujal uth gaya

k- oh tum uth gaye, good! [she smiles] Tea?coffee? :)

s-Tea

Kashish order kar deti hai

s-Kash

k- Hmm?

s-Come here

Kashish jaati hai Sujal ke paas

k- Kya hau? Kaise ho? Do you have a hang over? Pata hai kitni pii leihi ka-

He hugs her...resting his chin on her shoulder snuggling around her hair a bit

Kashish chup.. kuch 10 seconds ke liye

He kisses her cheek...

s-Thanks..you are the best

Kashish is shocked into silence

k- uh.. huh.. ahem. hm.. ohh okkk...thanks I guess...I.. tum brush kar lo

She moes away..

Breakfast bhi aa jata hai to Kashish laga deti hai sab table par

Sujal gets up and looks at himself in mirror

s-Man! Not much hangover...wonder pill [He thinks to himself]

Sujal ko pasand aa gai goli.. and about thankin Kashish wo uska do din khayal rakhne ke liye kiya as Kashish naa hoti to wo surely gutter mein hi pada hota

He knows ki chapad  chapad ke piche she cares and takes care no matter kitna bhi soche ki ab ignore karegi...he knows islie islie to chpad chapad sehta h warna kab ka suna deta, F*** off keh deta, vaffanculo...in Italian..

Bathroom mein Sujal brush karne gaya to realize hua ki uska toothbrush to doosre room mein hai

Kashish ne breakfast laga diya to dekha ki Sujal brush karte karte bahar aa gaya

k- Tumhari chai aa  gai.. tum kuch MERA BRUSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ewww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SUJAAALLL!!!!

He looks at her innocently...jaise wo to bhola bhala bachcha hai

s-Huh? What?

k- Tum mera tooth brush kyun use kar rahe ho!!

s-Well..to brush my teeth

She marches to him taking the brush out of his mouth

k-Mera hai!!!

Sujal jaake dhoke aata hai mooh..showing his teeth

k-Apna use karo.. nahi hai to hotel ka use karo, nahi hai to apni ungi use karo

Kashish ke haath mein Sujal ka saliva aur paste laga hua brush

k-eww ...

Kashish jaaakr hath dhoti hai ar brush bhi...

Sujal mand mand muskura raha hai

k- Dimag to sharaab ki bottle mei doob gaya hai tumahra..

s-WellIi got to taste your mouth

Sujal bade aaram se tea leke keh deta hai

Kashish gaps...muh khul gaya Kashish ka ki kya bawkas kar raha hai in somewhat sober mode

k-I...you... tum... Sujal ye...-tum...tum mujhe naya brush dilaoge bass!

He nods

s-But you can also use mine

Kashish narrows her eyes

k-No, thank you. I don't like tasting alcohol or its remains...

s-Vome on...my mouth doesn't taste bad

k-Alcohol does

s-Or you can enjoy the taste directly

He smiles

k-No, I don't want the additional smell too

She gives him a plastic mocking smile

Sujal hasne lag jaata hai, he loves teasing her

Kashish is all flustered and slightly red... ab usse lag raha hai ki isse achha to drunk Sujal ke sath hi bakwas kar le at least then he doesn't embarrass her too much

s-Care for a walk Kash?

Kashish nods

k-Sure

He holds her hand

s-Come

Kahsish chal padti hai, happy holding hands with him

They go to the pool side, wahan jahan pehle din gaye the

Sujal bhi aage badke puts his arm around her shoulder

Kashish ek bar to dekhti hai ki isse kya hua, phir she also shrug ki kath rakhne mein kya hai..

So she put her hand around his waist

Uss pool ka haal aaj bhi uss din jaisa hi hai

Sujal jaake phir pool ke paani mein pair duboke baith jaat hai

Kashish bhi baith jaati hai

k- Aaj hum log kahan jayenge?

He looks Kashish

s-Wherever you say

Sujal ki ankhein intensely Kashish ko dekh rahi hain

k- Mai kya bolun.. mujhe to kuch samjh hi nahi aata, itni mushkil se kal koi jagah dhoondi socha ki kuch aacha aur naya dekhne ko milga.. pata chal strip show hai...sab aisa hi hai yahan Vegas mein kuch bhi karlo..

He chuckles seeing her pout unconsciously



Edited by storywriter - 02 September 2012 at 2:14am

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 9:43am | IP Logged
part 25
 
chalo finally sab bewde logo ne drug le li hai taki woh log guttar main naa pade hue mile
seriously yeh log kuch zyada hi drunk hai
ab dance ki baari, Kashish ka idea hai
par yeh kya????strip dance
ek to sab ke sab bewde upar se aisa hot dance
Sujal ko lagta hai woh pee kar zyada hot ho jaata hai, arre no darling, tum sober hi bohut acche lagte ho
Crystal ne Sujal ke drunk hone ke wajah se mana kar diya
yeppy
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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 9:51am | IP Logged
part 26
 
Kashish ko immediately Italian sikhna parega
lekin ek baat hai Sujal clearly signal de raha hai Kashish ko ki woh kya chahta hai.
pyaar kitna karta hai pata nahin, par woh chiz zaroor karna chahta hai.
Kashish kya itni naa samajh hai??? yaa phir samajh kar bhi ignore kar rahi hai.
Sujal aur Raj Devdas Chunilal, woww, yeh wala sach main brillaint hai Neelu
Raj ne door bandh kiya
now Sujal in Kashish 's room
last part kaafi hot tha
but now i think seriously kashish ko koi decision lena parega
Sujal out of control ho raha hai.
good one
nice part.
 
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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 10:02am | IP Logged
part 27
 
thank God, ki sujal ne i want to make love with u wala line Italian main bola, warna peetta
Kashish Sujal ka sihnal samajh raha hai, par koi decision nahin le paa rahi hai,
lagta hai, first time garbaad hone ke baad woh aur ek heart break afford nahin kar sakti.
Ria ne accha kiya, Sujal wala line chod diya
woh samajh gaayi kuch nahin hoga yaha, intelligent girl
ab Kashish ne bhi usse mana kar diya Sujal se dur raho.
finally subah hoti hai, Thank God Sujal ne uth kar yeh nahin kaha I want drink, tea liya
yeh magic pill kaam kar gaayi
not much hangover, infact sober
Kashish ki brush use kar li usne, yaha par bhi Sujal ne clear indication diya, sober halat main
not in italian, in English
but yes, next yeh log kaha jaate hai dekhna parega in wild Vegas
nice part
beautifully written
waiting for the next
 
by the way Neelu, u know Italian???? if no, then brillaint job.itna research, well done dear.main bhi kuch Italian word sikh rahi hoon. Thanks.
 
 
 
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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 12:25am | IP Logged
part 27
awesome...
Sujal is in love with Kashish?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 7:33am | IP Logged
wow really cute part cont soon

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