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PART 25

s-What damn it?

Raj-I told youuu...the thing that won't let us pas out

s-Drug?

Raj-Well...it's not drug...drug..but...yeah kinda and don't tell Kash about it..she'll freak out

s-Have you tried it?

Raj-Well..no Zach has tried it. We can try it today. It's f***** awesome, I heard. It's just a pill kinda thing. What's  your say? It's better to have it than...pass out in a gutter and make a fool of yourself. It's not narcotic

s-Any side effects?

Raj-Nope

s- So how do we get it? Any side effect?

Raj-Nopeee side effects.I have it with me

s-How much  do I pay for that?

Raj-oh shut up! Pop in

Raj throws the medicine towards him

Sujal ek le leta hai

Aise 1 dedh ghante baad Ria knocks

Ria-Should I come?

Dono Ria ko andar bula lete hain..

Raj Ria ko bhi pills offer karta hai

Dono pii rahe the tv par koi movie dekh rahe the... Kashish bhi peeche peeche aa jaati hai

Teeno pasre hue the, peete hue lazy lamhe

Ria a beech mein dono ke

k-Yeh kya kar rahe ho?

Sujal to reply nahi karta...shehzaadon ki tarah pada hua hai

Ria-Aise hi lete hain. Aaja

Kashish jakar nudges Sujal-

k-Ye kya kar rahe tum log aise kyon pade ho?? Chalo na sab bahar chalte hain.. yahan baithne thodi aaye hai nandar...chalo ab kahin ghoom ke aate hain

s-ok..chalo...kahan jaana hai..[He takes a giant swig and gets up]

k- Ishhh ye kya hai!! Tum log din mein bhi pii rahe ho?!! Bottle chodo.. yahan sirf peene aye ho kya!

s-So? Is drinking reserved for night only?

Raj-Ab to pii chuke...Sujal puri vodka ghatak lia aur main adhi rum...ye Ria abhi beer pe hi sip laga rahi hai

Three of them chuckle

k- Tum log pagal ho gaye ho kya!! Chodo sab chodo..

Kashish jakar sab ke hath bottle cheenti hai.. alag rakhne ko

Ria-Par jaa kahan rahe hain?

Sujal to bottle Kashish ki reach se bahar kar deta hai

k-oh maine suna hai koi ahaa dance show hone wala hai kisi mein wahan chalte hain

Kashish says to Ria uchal uchal ke bottle lene ki koshiish kar rai hai Sujal ke haath se

Dance to Kashish ne padh liya.. par wo exotic dance  show hai wo nahi pata Kashish ko

Sujal  mischief wali grin ke saath Raj ko dekhta hai

s-Achcha dance show..sahi hai..let's go

k- Haan han chalo chalo..  aba tayar ho jao... din bhar iss gand mein rahne se to acha hai

Sujal takes a huge swig aur bottle khali karke Kashish ko finally de deta hai

s-Go and change

Kashish frowns at bottle and then at Sujal.. cutely pout karte hue..

k- Aur mat pio please

s-Gimme a solid reason

k- It's useless? Matlab kya mil jaega tumhe peekar jo aise nai milega?

He comes closerrr to Kashish...touching his nose to her and whispers

Kashish is stunned ki ho kya raha hai

s-I become hotter when i am drunk...you know

He moves back takes his clothes and goes to change

k- huh...?

Kashish goes after him what ?What was that? Matlab kya hai? Kya hotter? Temperature badhana hai jakar kitchen mein baith jao!!

s-You actually wanna know?

k-Main pooch to rahi hoon

He turns to face her..without the shirt

She shakes gulping, lowering her eye to thef loor

She remembers ki kal raat hug kiya tha...and kuch bhi ho he was there for her...uppar se bura bhi nai dikhta...hye koi to rok lo

Sujal walks into the washroom throwing the shirt he removed on her that is full of his smell

She pulls the shirt off her face

k- Seriously, bekaar ke baatein mat karo

She was going to drop it or throw away the shirt par pakad raki hai cradling the bunch to her chest

k- Sab pagal ho gaye hain...tum bhi pagalon ki tarah mat piyo...Main nahi keh rahi ki bilkul mat piyo lekin hosh to rahe.. .aise poore time piina sahi nahi hai.. upar se agar tabiyat kharab ho gai to? Huh?  Tumse baat kar rahi hoon!!!

Kashish shouts jab Sujal kuch nai bolta

Sujal nikal ke aata hai washroom se

Kashish to ab bhi shirt pakde khadi hai

He looks at his shirt and the place where it is with halki wali grin

Kashish bhi looks down ki kya dekh raha hai...

k-Kya? Poorani shirt pehnni hai? Don't tell me tumhare paas saaf kapde bhi nahi hain...ufff!! Maine aaj subah hi to dekhe the..

s-You should have told me that you love my smell so much

k-Kya? What?

Then she realized ki kar kya rahi thi...

k- oh ye.. nahi ..wo mei..wo..wo to maine.. laundry mein dene ke liye pakad rakhi hai..

Sujal aaram se grin karte hue tashan mein nikal jaata hai

k-Tum sab to pure din piite ho... ye kaam bhi mujhe karna pad raha hai

Bahar Raj Ria aur Zach wait kar rahe hain

Kashish aati hai bhagte hue catch up karti hai.

She gives Sujal a killing glare ki jab se wo samjhane ki koshish kar rahi hai sunn hi nahi raha.. ignore upar se

Aate hi Zach announces

z-Avoid hangover ! Stay drunk !!!!!!!!!

All repeat in chorus

k- Tch idiot!

They reach the place

z-Man you know what...there's is place where they serve 1024 cocktails. Wicked isn't it!

Sujal nods happily floating in his bubble of cloud contentment

s-Let's go there tomorrow

Ria kisses Zach,

Ria-oh u have so much knowledge

k-Pagal, sab ke sab pagal..

Kashish is muttering sullenly..

Ab wo bhi baat nahi kar rahi Sujal se since Sujal usse aise ignore kar raha tha

They reach and sit on the round tables, dim lit jagah hai

Kashish is happy ki chalo kisi achhi jagah aye hain..

But she notices skimpy kapde pehnke waitresses drinks serve kar rahi hain

Lights off ho jaati hain and the dance starts

Ss dance starts Raj announces ki

Raj-Let's start a competition. Dance ke start se akhir tak short lagayenge non stop

Sab agree

k-NO! Hum yahan isliye nhai aaye hain. Ye kya matlab hai..?

Par koi sunta hai kya kabhi bechari Kashish ki

Dance hota rehta hai to hooting start ho gai thi as kapde utar rahe the dancers ke

Par itna andhera tha ki samajhna mushkil tha ki kaun kya kar raha hai

Kashish is getting embarrassed by the moment...

Socha ki uthkar chali jaun as it gets really skimpy

Par realize hua ki itna andhera hai, kahan jayegi

She tries to leave lekin jaa nahi pati  to side ghumkar ankhein table par gada kar baith jati haai

Par zara curiousiti Kashish ko bhi hai, thoda vulgar hai par dance to acha kar rahi hain...

Kashish thoda hichkichai phir socha dekh leti hoon, mujhe kya main bhi to ladki hoon, sab dekh sakte hain main kyun nahi

To side long glances se dek bhi rahi hai beech bech mein and getting shocked at every new item being removed..

Ab dance chalta hai 2 ghante

Lights jalti hain

She is red as tomato

Kashish ke table pe to baaki log adhe ludke aadhe gire se pade hue the

It looked lik a glass ka kabaad khaana

Sab talli se ho rakhe hain and they are all thanking ki wah Kashish mazze agaye tum to bhadiya show mein le aayi, kal bhi hai kya aisa kuch..iska repeat kab hai

Piike sab to ludke se pade hain table pe koi chair pe koi zameen pe...koi blabbering..koi laughing...koi kissing...

Zach and Ria are kissing

Sujal was reaching another shot

Sujal ka phone baja

s-Huh? ...hic-...

Ankhein si kholta hai, searching for his phone

Jaise taise tatolke milta hai

Kashish bhi khush hai ki phone baj gaya ab nahi piyega..

He glares hard to understand the keypad

Crystal- Hey handsome..

s-Heyyy -hic-kryszzzal

c- Are you drunk?

s-emm...jzt...buzzed...

c- Are u sure.. I mean I thought we were getting together tonight.. but I guessed you are too buzzed to really do anything...

s-Yuppp...we are...-hic-rivvishhh..try meee...I tor you..I ger hotter..when I am drrrunk

c-Eew Sujal.. really..Ii don't want a drunk slobbering over me.. goodnie

<click>

She hangs up

s-huh? b****

k- What?!

He puts away the phone nd takes another swig

k-Tum gali kisse de rahe ho?!

She grabs the drink out f his hand, usse laga ki sko ko kuch ulta seedha keh raha hai

Sujal turns his head drunkly and looks at her with his red intoxicated eyes

She looks angrily at him



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bechari kashish apna idea khud hi blooper hogaya LOLLOLLOL now she must be regretting the dance show LOLLOLLOL...

dont know if sujal gets hotter after being drunk or not but he surely goes crazy LOLLOL & starts his italian LOLLOLconfusing poor girl LOLLOLLOL

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part 25
OMG honestly these people have lost it...
Kashish had an affair with a married man and shes behaving as if shes too naive...
i dint understand this...
they are in a live in relationship right?
cont soon...
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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 2:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

part 25
OMG honestly these people have lost it...
Kashish had an affair with a married man and shes behaving as if shes too naive...
i dint understand this...
they are in a live in relationship right?
cont soon...


Cm on dear, hvin an affr dsnt mk her a s**t...shez hvin live in with whm?...shz lng ovr with boss aft her suicide attpt...n abt this wildness...yes shz naive

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PART 26

s-huh? b****

k- What?!

He puts away the phone nd takes another swig

k-Tum gali kisse de rahe ho?!

Kashishgrabs the drink out of his hand, usse laga ki usko ko kuch ulta seedha keh raha hai

Sujal turns his head drunkly and looks at her with his red intoxicated eyes

She looks angrily at him

s-Huh?...[Starts laughing drunkly..] K..Kashhh...-hi-c...Kash...Kazzz

k-Are you ok?

Kashish asks

s-Shhh...shhh

k- Huh? Chupp kyun kara rahe ho?

He walks his two fingers on the table towards her

She looks down at his hand.. ki ye kya naya game hai

Phir Kashish ko bhi lagta hai ki at least piine se to better hi hai, wo bhi 2 ungli rakh deti hai tapping one slightly in waiting gesture

He grabs her hand

k- Kya? Chodo haath mera..

She tries to pull away her hand...par otna bhi try nai kar rahi

s-Shhh shhh

Puts his finger on her lips

She is all quite, she even stops trying to pull hand away

s-Shhh bo..boht..bohot...boltzi..ho...bohot-hic-

k- Tum bhi bohot pii rahe ho na.. just giving you competition..

She says iwith a wistful smile dheere se pulling away her hand out of his grip..

He smirks

s-tum...tumhari wajah se...tumhari..

 k-kya?!! Kyun?! Maine kab kha piina ko?

s-Muj..mujhe...do..do cheezein ..do se sukoon..milta h...tum..aur ek..al..alcohol...tum zo...milti nhi..kya karu...peeni...padti h

k- I. main... I am with you.. nahi hoon kya...

s-Nah ! Nah !

Againn his drunk laughter

s-Khuz ko...mere hawale..karzo

k-Sujal seriouly.. piikar naa pata nahi kya kya bolte ho..

Then she smiles bada wala at least aaj Italian to nai bol raha lekin.. Thank God

k-Tumne p rakhi hai, tumhare hawale kyun karun.. jiss sin sober hoge uss din whatever you say

s-What..whateve..? huh?

k- Huh exactly. Ab chalo yahan se.. bohot pii li. Tumhe bathroom mein band karna chahiye paani ke alawa kuch nahi milega piine ko

Kashish pakadkar takes him outside baki sab ko bhi bahar nikaalti hai wahan se, chapad chapd daante hue all the time... Ria aur Zach ko keh deti hai nahi chale to police aa jaegi, Raj ke liye..."fire " kaam karta hai, Sujal ko support khud hi kar diya... aas paa thoda gurad se bhi keh diya ki thodi help kar do

Sujal aur Raj to ek saath ek dusre ko pakadke do dost stagger kar rahe hain singing a drunk song and with huge bottles in their hands

Raj-Pata..hsi..bey...s****

s-Huh?

Kashish badi walsi limo type ki taxi hire karti hai.. sab usme aa jaate hain

Raj and Sujal take another swig

Raj-Tu..tu naa.,..tu s**** devdas hai aur..aur..mai na...-hic...chunnilal

Kashish dono ko dekhti hai ki kya bakwas kar rahe hain..Sujal ko to devdas aur chunni lal pata bhi nahi hoga ki kaun hai

Sab gadi mei bhare hue hain jab ye baat ho rahi hain... Ria and Zach making out on side...opposite seat mein Sujal beeche mein, Kashish khidki ke bahar dekh rahi hai and Raj bakwas. kar raha  hai

s- Huh?

r-Avveyyy devdasss sheeshe se sheesha takrayeee

Apni bottle se Sujal ko pila deta hai

s- Cheers?

Sujal bhi apni bpttle Raj ko offer karta hai pilata hai kuch kuch girata hai

Kashish poora ignore kar rai hai

r-Suzzal..yar..tu..tu..mera..dozt nhi...bhai hai...bhaiii h tu meraaa

Raj hugs Sujal

s-Fratello!!![Brother!!!!]

Sujal yells and hugs Raj back

Kashish ko lagta hai gay ho gaye dono talli hoke

They reach

k- Ria tum Zach ke yahan jao

Raj crawls out

Sujal struggles to hold his weight but falls down

Kashish pakad leti hai bhag ke

s-Caduto[fell]...sono caduto...[I fell]

He blabbers laughing drunkly

k- Piyo aur piyo. Jab thobda kharab hoga tab hi akkal ayegi

s-Sono caduto... Kazzz

He keeps on laughing

k-Tum mujhe thanks bolne ka bajaye kya bakwas keh rahe ho Italian mein? Main hi pagal hoon, tumhari tension leti rehti hoon

s-Il mio Kazzz [My Kazzz]

Sujal is glaring at Kashish drunkly

k- Ilmio kyo hota hai?

Sujal phir uthte hue gir gaya, abki baar baith gaya goes to take another swig par bottle to khatam

Kashish uthane ki koshish karti hai

Sujal bottle jhatak raha hai kahin se nikal jaaye

s-I WANT MORE DRRRINKKK

k- SHUTT  UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!

s-BEREEE [DRINKKK]

k- Sujal chup!

s-KAZZZ

k-Khade ho!

She tries to pull him up

s-Kazzz

He shakes his head vigorously

k-Sujal please khade hone ki try karo...

She says sweetly...trying everything anger, daant , laad...

s-Khade????? ...hic-khaaa..khade..???? huh?

Sujal ki hindi idhar udhar ho gai piike

k-Stand? Stand up.. please...

He shakes his head with drunk wali smile

k- Please. For me?

s-Love ...love..me...amore [Love]

Kashish nods ki  haan haan  zarur kyun nahi whatever gets him to his room

s-Loveee meee

k- Of course I do... warna yahan thod hoti tumhare saath

s-Loveee...love me nowww nowww ...hic-

k-Now? What do you  mean.. I do love you...what else? C'mon please stand up lets go .. please

s- Kizz me...kizz me baby

Kashish ko lag raha hai ki usko Crystal samajh raha hoga..

k- If you stand up and got to your room

Sujal phir uthte he knees pe gir saa jaata hai

Kashsih thodi aur try karti hai.. nahi utha to help bula kar laegi, aisa bahar natak achha nahi lagta.. and she knows ki agar Sujal sober hota to usse bhi bahar humiliation hoti

s-Kazzz

He hugs her tight

Kashish pe weight rakh ke jaise taise khada hota hai

She stokes his hair..

k-Sujal chalo na yahan se ...

Dono girte padte phochte hain Sujal ke room tak ..

Raj accidently locks the room andar se aur so gaya

Kashish Raj ka door baja rahi hai with full might par koi response nahi..

k- Uff ab isse kya hua..

She tries even calling him but he is drunk like dead to the world

Kashish looks at Sujals

k-Kahan jaoge ab? Mere saath aaoge?

She looks at him jaise to bache ko indulge kari rahi ho

Sujal gives his drunk wali pyaari si smile

k- Kya karoon main tumhara?

s-Kazzz...il mio Kazzz [My Kazzz]

Points at her

k-Yah yah.. il mio Sujal.. jo bhi

Wapas se she takes his weight and somehow manages to drag him to he rroom

s-Bello Kazzz [Beautiful Kazzz]

Kashish gate holkar andar lati hai

k-Bello??

s-Piuttosto Kazzz [Pretty Kazzz]

Kashish bechari soch rahi hai ki dictionary kahan se milegi Vegas mei

s-Il mio Kazzz...kazzz...Suzal e Kazzz

k-Yes yes Sujal il mio Kashish.. and Kashish il mio Sujal.. right?

Kashish leta deti hai bed par Sujal ko, takes off his shoes and socks...

Sjal uth jaata hai...roaming aimlessly in the room..it's effect of pill working on him

Kashish thak haar kar sofe par baith jati hai.. looking wearily at Sujal

He opens the mini bar and takes out another bottle

k- oh Sujal..please not anymore.. so jao naa thodi der.. kal pii lena..

He walks to her and sits near her feet keeping his head on her lap

s-Kazzz-hic-Kazzz-hic-

k-Sujal...

s--hic-

She keeps her hand on his cheek stroking his cheek

s--hic-

He kisses her palm

She is a bit shocked but happy also embarrassed

She thinks it's some Italian French thing all the kissing and complimenting...

He grabs her hand, opens her palm and puts his hand under her

Pours the liquor on her palm and starts licking and sucking her hand

Ab Kashish kya kare...she is enjoying all the sensations it is bringing her.. but chahti bi nahi ki  Sujal aur piye

s-You..you..-hic-...you..make..me..drunkkk...you...you..Kazzz-hic-

k- Haan sab meri hi galti hai



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My poor sujal gaya kaam se LOLLOLLOL...
Kashish darling seriously in  need of french dictionary LOLLOLLOL...or better Sujal shud start giving her classes teaching her french LOLLOLLOL...

yday she in his room today he LOLLOLLOL wonder how he will react in morning LOLLOL

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