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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 2)

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 5:50am | IP Logged
Nice fic..

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 9:14am | IP Logged
so new FF
tumse to umeed hamesha high hota hai
refeshing concept
thoda Metro film ka yaad dilaya, but i know yaha bhi sirf tumhara creativity hi humhe dekhne ko milega
good start
Kashish hai bohut modern & independent, but pyaar ke mamle main kaafi old
uske character ke hisab se suicide attempt???well, insaan ke character main bohut shade hota hai, ek update main samajhna muskil hai
but bohut fast story ka development ho raha hai.
nice update
waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 10:18am | IP Logged

 PART 2

Kashish Sujal ko dekh ke mooh chupa leti hai...she doesn't wanna face him

Dost kehta hai ki isko hospital mein rakhunga to panga hoga. Ghar le jaa. Take care of her and don't let her use her hand for a month

Sujal le laata hai Kashish ko ghar pe...he jst thinks faltu mein akeli ladki pareshan hogi, she looks vulnerable

Ab Kashish ko bed rest hai

Sujal office jaata hai to apni kam wali bai se kaha hai Kashish ke lie bhi khana bana de...office ke baad roz usse dekhne aata h, uska haal chaal puchne aata h

Thoda bohot baat karte hain

Kashish ko bohot sharam aati haito face him because of her harkaat

First day she just murmurs a 'thanks' to him

He just says...have your soup, have your medicine...just like that...zyada nahi puchta

Ab ek din Kashish saare baal leke upar ponytail bana rahi thi

Sujal enters

s-What are you doing???????

k-Huh? Tying my hair

s-Don't you know...you are not supposed to use your hand

k-But my hairs are all messy I need to tie them

Kashish bed pe baithi hai aur Sujal comb leke uske ke sar pe hal chala raha hai

Saare baal at last upar pakad liye

s-Where is your rubber band?

She points to a direction

Eek haath se Sujal ne Kashish ke baal pakde hain aur udhar dusre haath se trying to reach rubber band

Jitna Sujal bend ho raha hai, Kashish pura khinchi chali aa rahi hai

Kashish bechari bed se latak sa gai hai

Ab rubber band to le lia par thode baal nikal gaye hain

Ab phir hal chalana start

Kashish ke saare baal face ke saamne kar die

Sujal bade concentration se ek ponytail bana deta hai

He smiles looking at his work

Ponytail tedi hai but decides on remaining silent

Kashish mand mand muskura rahi hai as saamne mirror tha aur Sujal dikh raha tha

Pure concentration se pony banate hue uski tongue thodi si nikal gai without him realizing

Aab dheere dheere Sujal-Kashish roz milte hain, baat karte hain thoda bohot...dosti ho si rahi hai

Aise Sujal office se aaya tha aur dono batiya rahe the

'Kashish!'

Sujal turns to see the boss and Kashish looks upset

Boss-Kaisi ho tum? I heard...I heard

Sujal excuses himself and goes

k-Idhar aaiye sir. Mere kareeb aaiye

Boss aata hai

Kashish lete lete

TISHHH!!!!

1 tight slap

k-Get out. Just get out

Boss goes

Sujal reluctantly aata hai thodi der baad

s-emm..dinner

They generally shared the dinner together]

She nods

He was having his food silently while Kashish is looking at him

 k-I did it because of him

He looks at her

k-We...we were together... [Her eyes are welling up]...you...must be thinking...I...I am...s**t

She can't meet his eyes

He doesn't reply

Wo nahi puchta about the whole incident...it's her personal life. He isn't intriguing types...even if he had a little intrest but he brushes it off

s-Finish the dinner

After a while when he was going after saying good night

k-Sujal

He stops

k-I am glad to have a friend like you

Next day subah, Sujal aata hai bye bolne ke lie ki wo jaa raha hai office

k-I have a request. Side table pe ek pen drive hai uske matter ka print out leke post kar doge mere office address mein?

He nods and takes the pd with him

Sujal aaj jaldi aata hai office se

s-Why did you resign?

Sujal ko  atpata laga aise achanak impulsive decision ki baad mein naa pachtaye as she doesn't have anything in hand

k-I just felt like. I am fed up of it  .I want to live like myself, do what I feel like

Sujal is just glaring at her

She smiles

k-Why are you so serious? You look as if you are unemployed not me

He keeps gazing at her...he looks devastated may be coz he cares

 



Edited by storywriter - 24 July 2012 at 10:19am

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 10:46am | IP Logged
I'm first to comment!!!!
Ooo i like Kash,she is awesome...it's true that she has done some bad things but damn I'm happy that she's not all broken...I'm sure she'll be a hell of a character...Sujal is just perfect.
It's different  from those stories where they fall in love at first sight n get married n yada yada...
Everyone is classy...n she slapped her boss,YAY! that guy deserves more.
Another thing i liked is that Sujal didn't do anything there but gave them privacy.
This is why i like your story...they are very realistic n amazing!!
Glad to know that Sujal cares about Kash...n this time the chapter was not rocketLOL
LOVED it...Continue soon.

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 10:58am | IP Logged
congrats honey...
wow another story...
and its our love Sujal Kashish...
thanks dear...

part 1
nice start...
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 11:01am | IP Logged
part 2
wow that was so nice...
finally the jerk got a slap but Kashish was all ready then...
now Sujal is helping her out...
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Thanks for a nice update...

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 11:32am | IP Logged
hi
the up is good
so sujal is taking good care of kashish
and kashish she is liking it
but again that jerk came to kashish 's house but kashish she did a good job she taught him the right lesson and now she is resigning
good kashish i appreciate ur decission and no one have the right to underestimate a woman
plz cont soon

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