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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 3:15am | IP Logged
part 21
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PART 22

Sujal ke lips ke paas thoda drink drip sa ho raha tha

Kashish haath se usko saaf karti hai

k-Laga tha

She smiles

Sujal to hah pakad kar hath kiss kar deta hai...-yumm

Kashish gasps a little but it was ok...it was Italian way she thought

Aise hi dance chalta hai.. ab loog kuch thak gaye kuch make out ki next stage ke liye privacy mein chale gaye...

Sujal ne bhi kaafi iie aur wo bhi nashe mei thoda ab jyada hi stagger kar raha tha. to usse bhi lagta hai ki theek hai maze aa rahe hain dance mein bahut lekin Kashish kahin nahi jaa rai rahi, kal ka din bhi hai to ab chalna chahiye

To wo Kashish ko rokta hai

k-Are you ok...[pehli baar pure din mein pyaar se baat kari]

s- I think we should go... or do you want to stay?

k-No...we can go. But mere room ki keys are with Ria..and..where is she?

She looks around

s-Come with me then...

He says as a natural conclusion aur Kashish ka hath pakadkar  chal padta hai

Wo lift pakadke pohonchte hain Sujla ke room ke paas...whan wo saari pockets check karta hai..chaabi chaabi chaabi...to finally mil jati hai...pehle baar miss ho gai thi...

Gate kholkar he invites Kashish inside...

Raj ke bare mein Sujal ne itna socha nahi... aur Raj abhi kisi agnrez ke sath neeche hi kisi khopche mei busy busy tha

Sujal ko to aadat thi  akele room lene ki aur aaj din bhi pehla.. Raj ki yaad kyun ayegi...

Wahan Sujal kehta hai ki tum baith aram karo.. usse bhi ganda dirty sa feel hota hai to wo nahane dhone chala jata hai

Aata hai.. ab usse bhayankar wali neend aa rahi hai...par usse laga ki aise bad manners hai ki koi aaya hua hai aur tum samne so jao..

k-Suno

She holds his hand

s-Hmm?

She looks down

k-Aaj bohot pareshaan kiya naa maine. Tum...Crystal ko sorry keh dena

Sujal ka dimag bhi bass basic operations kar raha hai..zyada sochne wochne ka kaam nahi hoga..

s- Kaun? Kyun?

k-Kyun matlab? Crysral aur kaun

He frowns hard ki kaun mari Crystal.. kya Crystal...

He shrugs- nahi pata

Kashish smiles

k-Chalo kuch khaate hain..bhook lagi hai

Pasar ke baith gai

Sujal ko aakein kholna mushkil ho raha hai lekin ab ghar mein sikhaya hai ki khana khilana chahiye aise.. aur dinner table par sote nahi

To Sujal ne bada dimag lagaya ki khana kahan se aaye...koi naukar bi nahi.. fridge bhi nahi...idhar udhar dekh raha hai to phone dikha yad aaya ki hotel mein hai

Kashish looks at Sujal...

k-Are you...like..really..drunk Sujal?

s- No no..let's order

l-emm..ok sit or..I could just...you can take rest

s- No no...you order

Drunk si smile also he manages

Italians have this thing about manners and being good hosts and manners

k-ok..i'll order. You come here and lay down

He smiles politely but sar hila kar mana kar det hai..usse pata hai let gaya to so jayega and sleeping like this just isn't done

She quickly orders some sandwiches. As they arrive. She offers to Sujal

She also offers him some luke warm water

Sujal uthata hai and  nibbles a corner of sandwhich..

k-You won't feel sick

s- Ye, I won't. Why should I?

k-Because...well you just drank quite a lot

s- Not enough to one sick, sciocco [silly]

k-Oh..then how much is enough? I saw all of them getting wasted

He shrugs usse nahi pata, he was hardly ever sick...haan ...hangover hua hai  but no queasiness

Kashish lete gai to Sujal bhi jahan baitha tha wahan  thoda pasar leta hai

Kashish AC on karke chadar odhke ankh band kar leti h

Sujal ko lagta hai ki Kashish so gai to wo bhi araam se ankh band kar leta hai and fallls asleep immediately

Ab kuch der baad wo sab bevde wapas aate hain

Saare drunks ek saath aaye the, ek dusre ko sambhalte hue

Raj stumbled inside

Dhama se darwaza khola Raj ne...wo to nazara dekh ke almost fell on his feet

Wahan Sujal aur Kashish to dono alag alag so rahe hain; Kashish bed par aur Sujal sofe par

Idhar udhar hilta dhulta kuch giraata hai Raj

Kashish jaag jaati hai..awaaz se, Sujal to thodi jyada gehri neend mei hai abhi

k-Oh !!!!!! emm..oh..emm...sorry Raj wo..Ria aa gai?

Raj falls on the bed

Kashish bhaag ke goes to her room as she felt awkward

As she goes towards her room she finds Ria was struggling with the lock

k-Aye Ria !

Kashish realizes Ria isn't alone...she's got company...

Kashish chaunk jaati h...Ria ki commpany bhi dekh ke

Ria ko laga ki Kashish pehe khisak li to kahin aur rahegi to wo raat ke liye company le aayi

k-Ria !

t- uhh.. tummm... oh uhm... tumhe apna room nahi mil raha?

k-Ye mera hi room hai

Ria was falling drunk, Kashish helps her get up

She goes pto Kashish and whispers

Ria-Arre tum aaj kisi aur ke saath adjust ho sakti ho kya please

k-Ye kaun hai?

Kashish asks looking at the gy with Ria

t- My friend Zacch

k-Did you dive on the alcohol pond? You are so..

Udhar Sujal aur Raj pade hue hain wahan Ria gid gida rahi hai

k-Tell Zach to go to his place...say thanks ki he escorted you

Ria givees Kashish an angry look

Kashish frowns and looks at Zach

Ria Zach se kuch kehti hai kaan mein

Zach bhi hass ke keh deta hai

Zach-Izz alwright hon...

To wo dono ek doosre ki kamar mei hath dale wahan se jaane lagte hain, Ria Kashish ko chaabi de deti hai

k-Heyyy where are you going?

Ria looks ki Kashish ka dimag kharab hai, isn't it obvious...

Ria- Sight seeing

She answers sarcastically

k-You are just..you two are drunk...you won't be able to even do it. Fineee I am going!

Ria:Aww love you babes

Keh kar pulls Zachh inside aur dham Kashish ke muhh par gate band

Kashish is ab kya kare, kahan jaye

She calls Sujal, her only sachcha dost

Sujal needon mein-

s- Si??[Yes??]

k-Sujal...sujal..mere paas aa jao...I am waiting for you outside your room. I need you pleasee

s-Chi questo? [Who is this?]

k-Sujaaal, this is Kashish

Aadha back to sleep ki Kashish ke chilane se neend khuli

s-Kashish ?What happened?

He gets up

s-Kahan  ho?

k-Bahar...room ke bahar

Sujal aata hai

Wo bath rob mein hi so gaya tha nahaane ki baad..

Kashish was feeling so alone and disturbed

She hugs Sujal immediately out of relief, tightly shutting her eyes as if he is her life line

Sujal ko bhi laga ki sapna hai matlab raat ko Kashish call kar ke, bahar bula kar hug kyn karne lagi?

To Sujal ne bhi socha sapna hai...kya jaa raha hai...to wo bhi achhe se baat kar le...

k-ohhh...you are a sweetheart..I love you..you are so nice...thank you

She keeps blabbering out of impulse and gratefulness that she isn't alone

He soothingly storks her hair out of her face

k-Wear something no...we will go out

s-Il mio amore [My love]

k-What? Sujal..I don't understand Italian, English. English please

s-ti amo troppo [I love you too]. I love you too

He says hugging her back, aadhi neend aadha nasha addha sapna...kissing her forehead

She smiles

k-You are chooo nice. My best frienddd. Change into something decent naa...wanna go out?

s-Tch...

k-No?

s-Il mio amore

k-Then?

s-My love...

Sujal friend ke liye mana karke lover kehna chah raha tha

k-la amio what? I don't know what you said

s-My love...

He says resting his face in her hair, his hands roaming down her spine and then back up

k-Huh?

Her body shivers a little with his touch

k-Sujal...

She pulls back a bit

k-emm...how about going out?

s-Out?

She nods

k-out

s-Perche? [Why?] Why?

k-Out becase...Ria is with a friend..so...and Raj is in your room..so..what should I..actually we do whole night?



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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 3:51am | IP Logged
kashish darling let sujal rest LOLLOLhe is sleepy Sleepy & drunkLOL
ab adhi raat ko kaha bahar jaoge LOLLOL ... if even they go ...wonder what will happen WinkWinkLOL why take risk LOLLOLLOL 

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
part 22
nice part dear...
lovely...
cont soon...

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 8:12am | IP Logged
Part 17 & 18
I wonder what was she thinking while she bought the dress...trying to gift it to her boss's wife n all,really??
There two things came to my mind...maybe she was trying to take revenge by becoming his boss's wife's friend and team up against him or maybe she is just foolish but innocent to think that everything will be okay if she tried to make friendship with her,well whatever she planned it's doomed.
Huh,how I thought the dress was for her boss...so much for my imaginationEmbarrassed
Kash was crying because she got humiliated n Sujal was shocked enough to do nothing...well it's okay that he didn't do anything,i mean what is he supposed to do??yell n fight?
It's good that he took her home n gave her some time to recover...nothing like trying to comfort or giving meaningless dialouges.
So he called Ria who is head over heels for him...that girl...instead of trying to know what's wrong with Kash she's dancing around Sujal.
Kash ,my brave girl..I'm so happy that she wasn't crying in front of them.
Kash didn't change her expression when Ria kissed Sujal n that's ...good!
"Lets knock together,come"ROFL

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 9:00am | IP Logged
Part 19 20 & 21
Three hilarious chapters...so Kash planned to help Ria but it didn't work because she's not into 'long term' thing.
Well Vegas trip...sounds good but not so good for Kash cause the girl is feeling damn uncomfortable around all those monkeys.
Everybody is trying have a chance with Kash...Sujal on the other hand enjoying the trip,obviously he will...after all he got all the girls there.
Poor Kash...don't know what to do...seems like Sujal is her only option to have a decent conversation.
The guy was getting lucky,Kash!!!! n you ruined it...poor CrystalLOL
Huh,Raj telling Sujal to get drunk n allROFL nice choice of nameWink
But what did Kash do to deserve the rain of cocktail?LOL guess nobody wanted anybody to spoil their so called party mood...did that make any sense?LOLLOL
Sujal boy...showing Kash as his possession,huh...but he's dancing decently so it's good n it's even better that Kash didn't took his gesture thinking about something romantic or yada yada.
Ya girl,Italian gestureWink
Loved it,continue soon.

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 10:24am | IP Logged

PART 23

k-emm...how about going out?

s-Out?

She nods

k-out

s-Perche? [Why?] Why?

k-Out becase...Ria is with a friend..so...and Raj is in your room..so..what should I..actually we do whole night?

Sujal looks at Kashish curiously..ki poochna kya hai ki kya kar  ahai raat bhar.. malab uski dream hai to kamra khaali kyun  nahi hai... ye sab formality kyun ho rahi hai

k-Come naaa. Don't waste time

Sujal andar jhankta hai... sach mein Raj wahan hai

 Ab Sjal ki bhi itni haalat nhai ki wo bahar jaye to wo anadar jata hai Kashish ko lekar

k-No no..but Raj

Sujal Raj ko thok peeta kar uthata hai

Raj- Hain ? Kya ?Kaun?

k-No don't do that. We will go out

s-  Infiammare!!!!! uhhh umm.. inflamm... umm FIRE!! Run!!

Kashish glares at Sujal

Raj-Hai kya aag?!!!! Bhago

Raj bhag jata hai room ke bahar Vegas ke hotel corridor mein aag aag chilata hua

 k-Arre Raj! Par...

Wahan Sujalsmugly gate band kar leta hai andar se..

s-All ours

k-Ye kya kiya..why did you do that? Bechara Raj, oh God!

Sujal ko samjh nahi aa raha ki uske sapne mein Raj se itni sympathy kyun?

k-Oh God bechara..khair..you sleep on the bed..I'll take the couch

Jo Kashish ke chillane se jo adrenalin rush hua tha wo bhi fade hone laga to Sujal aur neend mein ho aaya

Kashish looks at him

She holds his face

k- Are you ok?

s-Si..[Yes]

k- [asks in a low voice] Are you sick? Do you want anything?

s-No. You?

k-I am fine

She answers with a smile but Sujal meant that he wants her

She makes him sit

 k-Be comfortable

s-No no...vogilo[want] you

He says pulling her to sit with him

k-Yes..yes..I am fine. You sleep..I'll put the blanket

He brushes her cheek with his fingers

She smiles

k-Thank you so much. You are so sweet

s-Rimanere [stay]

k-You are indeed my besttt friend

s-No...!!

He says frowning in confusion

k-I hope you always stay with me

She holds his hand while she pulls the pillow with other hand

k-Be comfortable and take a nice nap

s-Questo il mio sogno!!  [This is my dream..]

He pulls her closer and doesn't let her go..

s-No friend..we..we...

k-eh..?..what are you..? What are you doing? Do you feel sick? You want water?

s-We..amante [lover] si? [Yes]

k-Yes yes..whatever

Sujal smiles..

k-Yes...good night Sujal

s-Good

k-Good

Sujal pulls her close to kisses her on the lips

As s came closer..Kashish jhuk gai as uski earring gir gai aur honth milne se pehle she bends to get her earring

k-Arre abhi kho jaata

He only kisses air, samajh nahi aaya ki hua kya

k-Mr Italian...won't you sleep?

Sujal nods.. ki ab thak gaya abechara.. so he finally falls back and goes to sleep

She makes him comfy patting on his head

Kashish thinks even if I try to ignore you why fate does something ending us together

Sujal ka mooh khul gaya tha sote sote,  Kashish slowly closes it

Kashish slept on the couch Sujal ko comfortably sula ke

She wondered Raj ka kya hua, aur Ria ka kya hua, aur unn couple ka, aur Crystal ka; she cursed her under breath

Next morning-

Kashish pehle uth jaati hai coz she was the only sober person

Wo uthti hai thodi confused ye kahna aa gai fir yaad aaya ki kya hua..

Sujal to pada hua hai abhi bhi

Pehle se Kashish like to karti hi thi Sujal ko...aur trust bhi karti thi.. but somehow he has become even more dependable, adorable and his worth as a person had increased in her eye  as she watches him sleep..sochti hai uthaun naa uthaun

Sochti hai ki nahi pareshaan nahi karna chahiye aur.. Kashish ko bhi mann to hai ki believe kare ki Sujal bhi uske liye wahi feel karta hai jo wo karti hai.. lekin she knows it's not true...

Kashish kaafi teepni karti hai sote hue Sujal ko nihar nihar kar fir jati hai kamre ke bahar do not disturb ka sign laga ke

Usse pukka nahi hai ki uska rrom bhi ab tak khaali hua hoga ki nai to wo knock karti hai   bohot...par koi kholta hi nhi

Ab kya kare no chaabi na koi gate khole raha hai..kal se jo gande kapde pehne thi jispar logon ne drum bhar drinks daal di thi wahi pehne hai...stink and sticky ..yucky si feeling

Kashish wapas Sujal ke room mein jaati hai...

Ab bathrobe bhi 1 hi tha jo Sujal pehen ke so raha tha to kaafi soch vichar indecision and confusion.. ke baad jab kapde itch karne lage...to Kashish ne Sujal ke kapde nikale aur ghus gai bathroom mein

Sujal ki full sleeves ki shirt jiski sleeves fold karti karti wo thak gai aur jiski lengh Kashish ke knee se thoda upar thi wo pehenke ache se naha dhoke shampoo karke bahar aai

Sujal abhi bhi pada pada so raha hai

Ab Kashish 10 minute idhar udhar mandra li.. ab wo bore...socha tv dethein lekin awaaz se Sujal disturb ho jayega..asie kapdo mein bahar ghumne nahi jaa sakti...to kya karien kya karien to jakar baith jati hai ekdum Sujal ke paas, neeche zameen par so that their faces are at the same level..socha ki fursaat se usse hi dekh le...aise to wo pata nahi kya sochega ki Kashish ko kya hua why is she staring at him...lekin.. ab chehra bhi itna handsome.. ki Kashish bade dheere se dhyan se 1 ungli se trances the planes of hi face...resist he nahi hua...

Sujal ki scratchy se cheek and chin...uske ache se baal

A small sleepy smile comes over his face

Uski smile dekh ek bar to she pulls back her hand..darr jaati hai...lekin phir khayal aaya ki hasa kyun..

Kashish also smiles a little and starts tracing his face again...ab thoda lingering on his lips...

Sujal dreamily parts his lips

Although he smells of liquor lekin phir bhi thodi thodi uski original aftershave aur deo ki mixed unique scent hai wo aa rahi hai

Kashish bhi reaction enjoy kar rai hai...samjhne ki koshish ki kya karne se kya ho raha hi par mazze bade aa rahe hain Kashish ko

Slowly she slides her finger to his jaw down his neck.. slooowlyyy...neeche neechee...throat... to.. collar bones..

s-umm...uh...

He is liking it...moaning in sleep

Waise hi bathrobe pehenkar so raha tha.. thoda loose ho gaya tha.. to ek patli si line  exposed thi  navel tak

Wahan Kashish ruk jati.. samjhi nahi ki smile se moan kyin.. kahi lagi  hui thi jo usne ne touch kar diya...

s-uh...uh...[a dreamy erotic smile]...innamorato...[sweetheart]

Kashish n esoch liya hai kuch ho bass  ek Italian dictionary to kharidni hi hai

Kashish Sujal ko thoda gently nudge karti hai

k-Are you ok? Are you in pain?

Karibann 12 bajj gaye...R aj enters the room looking like zombie

Wahan Raj ko achanak dekh she screams ..right in Sujal's  face

Sujal hadhbadhake uth gaya

Bechara pehle hi buri halaat mein tha aur Kashish horror film ki heroine ki tarah subah subah chillane lag gai

She recognized ki it was Raj to chup ho gai hand clamped over her mouth

s-HUH????????? CHE COSA?????????? [WHAT????]

k-oh..Raj...

s-Che ? [Who?]

Sujal and Raj were equally shocked and flabbergasted

Raj looking at Kashish from top to bottom

Kashish is looking between Sujal and Raj  ki ho kya raha hai

r-emm...sorry..I invaded your privacy..I'll come aft a...

k- No no..I am sorry ..I-

Raj bhag gaya

Sujal frowns harddd kuch register sa nahi hua

Kashish turns and looks at Sujal

k- Tum theek ho?

s-Quello che successo? [What happened?]

k-Please no Italian. Pata naih kal raat kya bole jaa rahe the..amante... something.. pata nahi kya kya..

s-Amante? Did I say amante?

k-Mujhe nai aati Italian tumne hi kaha tha

s-Urghhh!!![Holds his head]..I must have been very drunk

k- You need something for hangover?

She says.. gently rubbing his head to ease some pain

He looks at Kashish and realizes her attire

s-What the hell are you doing in my clothes..and in my room?

He asks checking her out shamelessly

k- oh... I... umm

s-yuppp..[He closes his eyes and rests his head back]

k- I just borrowed them for a awhile..

s-You look..se-...you look nice



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