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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 14)

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 9:50am | IP Logged
Part 14 & 15
Kash planned to get drunk so Ria helped her by calling some of her own friends who are obviously the experts of drinking...forcing Kash to drink n all.
Everyone got drunk n went to Ria's house...poor Kash feeling dizzy n light headed...
I'm glad she didn't face any problem like somebody abducting her or taking advantage of her drunken state...i mean that would've been cliche n filmy.
Here she called Sujal and told him to take her home...a good decision made while being drunk,wow!LOL
Sujal didn't took any advantage but acted like a proper gentleman and took her home safely but with a lot difficultyLOLLOL
O Kash must be cursing her boss...huh,guess the guy deserves it..may be getting drunk is not that bad after all Kash is taking out all her pent up frustration n anger...she needed it.
Let me tell you that those three Italian words just killed me...just reading it felt sooo amazing...yeah i get happiness in these small little things.
Aaannnd "aaj raat couch zindabaad"ROFL

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Part 16
Kash is all awake n embarrassed for her previous behaviour and Sujal is not showing any sign of anger or discomfort but being polite all the way.
Well I'm guessing it was her boss whom she called n may be the new dress is for himLOLLOLLOL  WHAT??? I can imagine, right?
Aah how much i love your story...they are behaving just in the way i want them to be...not lovey-dovey but realistic...they know what they're doing especially Sujal who's character is totally understandable,the way he answers n handles any situation is impressive n so far I'm liking it.
Don't know about others but this chapter is perfect in my opinion.
Ooohh and don't let them fall in love before chapter 100 or something...I mean don't even let them have crush on each other n I'm serious...but don't listen to me it's your story.Smile
LOVED IT...continue soon.

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 10:35am | IP Logged

PART 17

She enters a designer showroom. She again checks her watch. She is a bit in sweats

The sales woman was showing her the petite size dress...that was her size

k-No..get me the large size

She again checks the watch

k-Yup...this is nice..what do you think Sujal?

She again wipes her sweat of her forehead

Sujal isn't paying attention enough to notice.. idhar udhar mobil mei...

k-Sujal!

s-Hmm yah sure..whatever you like

k-yeah..ok..gift wrap it

She tells the sales women

s-That's all you gonna buy?

She nods

Sujal nods too and shrugs...

s- Where to now then?

k-Chalo..we have to go to...[checks her mobile]...to..sea weed restaurant

s-Sea weed?

He says and starts to walk with her

s-Is there where we are meeting this person?

She nods

k-Do you think she will like the gift?

s- How I can tell what a woman may like or not

k-No..I mean its good naa

s-Sure u have a nice taste

Kashish smiles...

k-Thanks and thanks you came...I couldn't have done this alone

s- I don't see why you can't select a piece of clothing on your own

k-No...not about that...about the meeting thing. I didn't have the courage to do it alone

They reach the lavish restaurant and take a seat

k-I know she is nice ..but...she was really nice on phone. I hope she likes what I got

Sujal just nods...jo bhi pata chal jaega..usse pehle poocha tha.. tab nahi bataya. Usse umeed nahi hai ki ab bhi batayegi... waise bhi he is done begging and cajoling...and in a while he would find out for himself.. so little patience is all he needs

Kashish is checking the watch again and again and playing with the tissue to curb her nervousness

s-Shall we order?

k-Huh?

k-See, we can wait for Mrs. Gupta

s- Do I know her?

k-May be, she is Mr. Gupta's wife

She looks at him...and bites her lips in nervousness

s-Do I know Mr. Gupta?

She nods

k-He was my boss

s-I don't recall knowing the man, enlighten me

Sujal ko strike nahi kiya ho ki Kashish apne boss jiske sath uska affair reh chuka hai usi Mr. Gupta ki wife se mil rahi hai...usse bechare ki strike hi  nahi kiya ki Kashish ye kaam bhi kar sakti hai

k-I told you...she is Sumair Gupta's wife

s- You mean you are meeting with the wife of the man you had an affair with?

He says gazing at her with his black eyes which had turned stony; his lips are pursed in a thin line

She nods looking down

s- To do what?

k-I called her...and had apologized to her and she wanted to meet me

s- And i am here to assure her that there isn't anything more between him and you

k-No no, you are just here as my friend and she is a very nice lady. She was very nice to me on phone

Sujal nods mutely...he is not happy to be present.. he doesn't wanna tangle between two women.. who sleep with the same man

Kashsih looks up happily as a woman walks in with her brigade of shrewd looking women consisting of 5-6 more women

Kashish gets up with a smile

k-Hi

TISHHH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kashish is slapped hard

Mrs. Gupta-U B*********** !!!!!!!!!!

Kashish is perplexed

Mrs Gupta-YOU W************* SLEEPING WITH MY HUSBAND HUH! YOU CHARACTERLESS @$%$$%

TISHHH !!!!!!!!!! TISHHH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She pulls Kashish's hair mercilessly

k-Aaah!

She cries with pain

Sujal gets up...looking here and there; shocked himself

Mrs. Gupta-WE WILL ALL TEACH YOU A LESSON

The waiter comes with his tray

They get handful of raw eggs

Kashish ke upar saari ladies milke ande maarne lagti hain

Mrs. Gupta announce to the people around that Kashish is a home breaker, isle she is teaching her a lesson  and all women should join her

Kashish ke sarr pe ande maar maar ke sana dia aur 2-4 maarke nikal gai

Kashish bechari dubki padi thi helplessly...wo to bechari bhala karne gai thi

Kashish mooh chupake ro rahi hai

Sujal Kashish ka haath pakad kar usse wahan se bahar le jaata hai

Kashish has hidden her face in her hands in the trama while Sujal is giving her direction holding her hand

He takes her to some other section of the mall

He takes into the washroom and bolts the door

He can bend her head in the basin and wash off the egg from her face and bits of hair as much as he can...hath sleeves sab dhulwata hai hai...usse pochne ko kehta hai tissue laakar

He makes her wait there and goes to get some clean clothes to wear aise bahar nikelgi to sab stare karenge...

She was sobbing like a helpless baby all the while

Sujal aata hai 10 minte mein.. jo usse sabse theek 1 peice dikha wo utha kar...jakar he givs it to Kashish and tells her to change it

She was sobbing shutting the door of one of the stalls

k-You..you go..I..will..manage...you..you..don't have...to..help me...please

She doesn't want him to stick to her in this ultra embarrassing and messy situation as that's humiliating for him too

s-Change , then I'll take u back

k-Please...you..don't have to say...

She sounds as if she can have a nervous breakdown any moment

s- Look, you can change and we can leave or you can no change and we can leave...your choice dear

She changes and come out while looking pitiable; her face is swollen red and smeared with tears

She walks out with her head down

Sujal uska haath casually pakadta hai and then bade araam se use bahar lekar ataa hai

He opens the car door for her and then starts driving

She feels she would die of shame. As she is recalling the incidence; she is shivering slightly

s- You want to go to your place or your friends place?

k-Huh? M..my...p..place

s- ok

Sujal ghar le jata hai

Wahan he walks her to her place

She squeaks a thanks and shuts herself inside

Sujal uske gate band karne se pehla kehta hai  ki

s-Don't worry too much about it..they were...crazy women...they shouldn't have done that...you didn't deserve any of it

She nods slightly and shuts the door

s-Let me know if you need me

He says gate ke bahar se and he goes back to his place

He is worried ki Kashish depression mein aakar phr koi harkat na kar le and he is convinced that Indian women are crazy

He also thinks Kashish is foolish to think that something like patching up with your ex's wife can happen



Edited by storywriter - 19 August 2012 at 10:37am

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that was really bad...

poor K...but y did she try to make amends...i mean it was foolish on her part...

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sad to see wat kash went through cont soon

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
part 17
u know what all the while i thought Kashish has bird brain and eratic mind and a fool but after this shes a certified fool on Earth...
why on earth did she try to do this?
doesnt she have any sense?
she should be glad that the women just did that else they would have handed her to the police...
fool she is really...
cont soon dear...

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LIST PLUS UPDATE

Hi dear...

I am gonna update the pm list for all my fics. Please do respond if you want notification for update.

The fics including links those I am gonna continue are-

Love They Neighbor-

Bad Couple-

Jaded Prince-

Any feedback and comments are most welcome...will be waiting for your response...tc

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PART 18

Sujal uske gate band karne se pehla kehta hai  ki

s-Don't worry too much about it..they were...crazy women...they shouldn't have done that...you didn't deserve any of it

She nods slightly and shuts the door

s-Let me know if you need me

He says gate ke bahar se and he goes back to his place

He is worried ki Kashish depression mein aakar phr koi harkat na kar le and he is convinced that Indian women are crazy

He also thinks Kashish is foolish to think that something like patching up with your ex's wife can happen

Sujal raat mein Ria ko phone karta hai ki wo aaye and check up on Kashish...as clearly Kashish Sujal ko to avoid kar rhai thi sharam ke mare

Sujal dials Ria

Ria-Hello

s-Hi, this is Sujal...umm Kahish's friend

f-Hi Sujal...[She says getting exited and grinning happily].Off course I remember. How are you?

Ria to pighal gai

s-I am fine. I hope I am no disturbing you and you are good too?

Ria-Off course you are not disturbing me. Yes, I am good and I am free too. Well...are you free?

s-Well then, can you probably come over to Kashish's place and spend some time with her.. she had some woman misbehave with her today and she is feeling ... I just don't want her to do something stupid. Can you come and maybe talk to her and give her some company...

Ria-Ohhh what happened?

s- Some ladies misbehaved with her at a public place

Ria-Oh..why...how? well leave it, I am coming

Thodi der bad there's a knock at Sujal's door

Ria has come

Ria-Hi Sujal

Sujal is surprised ki wo uske door par kyn knock karr rahi hai

s- Hello

Ria-Hiii...Sujal...[She loses herself at his sight]

s- Hello?Did you see Kashish?

Ria-Huh? Oh haan...Kashish..her..her...door is locked

s- That's why I called you so you can probably make her let you inside and give her company.. I thought you were good friends

Ria-Ok let's knock together. Come

She holds his arm and drags him along her and knocks at her door

s-If she would have wanted me there she wouldn't have locked me out in the first place.. you should go and se to her

Sujal draws back and steps away

Kashish opens the door

Ria-Hi Kaaash

k-Hiii

Sjal to chup chap dekh raha hai.. soch raha ki kya kiya jaye...

k-Aao na andar. Sujal aao naa. Come come

Dono ko ghussa leti hai andar khushi khushi, jaise kuch celebration se khush ho

Sujal gets suspicious ki itni bhi khush kyun ho rahi hai.. zarur kuch panga hai

Ria is happy ki Kashish is fine

Kashish goes to make some coffee

Ria-See ..she is perfectly fine. Sujal you are just extra caring

s-She is just putting up a front. Can't you even tell that much? I thought you were her friend

f-Kaashhh ! Are you ok dear?

k-Yeahhh, mujhe kya hoga?

She brings the coffee and some snacks, aake baithti hai all smiley

Sab baithe hue hain coffee pii rahe hain...

Ria pooch hi leti hai ki

Ria-Aaj koi panga hua kya?

k-Panga? Nahi to

Ria- To koi lottery lagi hai kya?

k-Kya?

Ria-Itni kush lag rahi hai.. kuch to baat hai.. humein bhi batao...

k-Nahi ...nothing

She shrugs

Ria gets a call and leaves

Sujal and Kashish are now alone

Kashish is looking here and there

s-So you are ok?

She nods vigorously...

k-Of course!

s- You sure? Those ladies.. they were a mad bunch back there.. don't make much of it

She gives a he grin bt her eyes are swimming in tears

s-You don't have to pretend in front of me

k-I..am...ok...:...ok...I am..sorry..I involved you..in all this..I..am..I..am..just..sorry

s-It's ok. It's no big deal. Maybe seeing you with me.. they will not try and anything like this again...

k-Huh?

s-I mean now she can be sure that... you are not with him anymore

She nods

k-Sujal...thanks

s- As I said it's not a big deal. Tell me how is your job hunting going?

Ria comes back and both of them quieten seeing her

Ria-Kash baby...I am sleeping over at your place

s-Well then I'll take my leave..ladies...

He says getting up

Ria-Byeee Sujal. Good night hunnn

Ria gives a peck on Sujal's cheek and Kashish mumbles a quiet 'Good night'

Sujal gives Ria a tight smile at her enthusiastic kiss

s- Good night

He turns to Kashish

s-Buonanotte [Good Night]

Kashish looks questioningly at Sujal, not understanding what he said

k-Same to you

Sujal smiles and picks up Kashish's hand and kisses its back

k-Goodnight

Kashish gives a tight smile and Sujal goes



Edited by storywriter - 20 August 2012 at 10:29am

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