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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 13)

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 7:24am | IP Logged
part 15
nice part...
bechara Sujal...
shes tough to handle...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 10:56am | IP Logged

Hey please...guys comment...the fic is suffering frm low comments...plz recommend it to ur frnds if u like it and if u dnt then please let me know the reason y...please dears need u all

PART 16

She sits up with her disheveled hair and badlyyy aching head

He puts the glass in her hand, sits next to her and makes her drink

s- Piyo

k-Hmm

She looks at him then again lowers her eyelashes

 k-Thanks

Sujal just nods- hmm

Sab kuch pila kar he gets up

She gets up..Sujal ke side se

k-I should go

s- No stay rest..main tumahri friend ko keh deta hoon ki tum yahi ho ab..

k-Nahi..emm..I.Ii am fine [She is red with embarrassment]

s- Rest

He say patting her shoulder and backing her to bed gently

k-I'll go...thanks for everything and sorry

s- It was nothing.Thodi der aur lete jao..par agar tumhe jaana hai to theek hai... main tayar ho kar aata hoon..then I'll drop you

k-No..I..I'll manage...I'll take a cab

s- Kashish sit back relax.. tumhari tabiyat warna kharab ho jaegi. I'll drop you

k-Nahi..I can take care of myself...I am fine

Sujal feels she is hesitant and embarrassed for the first time ever

She gives him a polite smile

s- I did not say you can't take care of yourself; I just asking you to take it easy. I guess tumhe kuch zarui kaam hoga

Sujal jaata hai and brings Kashish's sandals aur de deta hai usse

k-Thanks

Sujal calls for a taxi to dekhta hai wo number jispar Kashish ne call kiya tha.. it was a unknown number to socha ki puch liya jaye

s- By the way whose no is this?

He says showing her the number

Kashish looks over her shoulder and is horror struck

k-How..how did you..get..this nmber?

s- You used my phone last night to abuse the person this number belongs to

Kashish numb and white as sheet...jaise abhi ro degi...last limit of embarrassment

She claps her hand to her mouth in horror

s-Aisa kiska no. hai?

k-oh God! oh God I am so sorry

s-Sorry?

Her eyes are hazing with tears

k-I am..so..sorry

s-kashish kya hua hai/kiska no hai? Why are you apologizing all of a sudden?

Sujal makes her sit down

s-Talk to me. Batao kya hua hai

k-I am sorry...I...I'll call and apologize..I..Its nothing..I..guess I..should go...don't worry..I'll sort this out

Sujal khada hua hai Kashish ke samne rasta block karke as she is sitting on his bed he is towering high over her

s-You'll sort it out after you answer my question and while we are at it.. why did you get so drunk last night? Did someone force you to drink that much that you felt sick?

k-It's getting late for your office...you are not unemployed like me. You should go to office

s-Don't patronize please its irritating... if you don't want me to be late wont you rather answer quickly than dodge the question?

k-No..I..it's nothing like that...I am  sorry to have bothered you. You shouldn't pay heed next time...if it ever happens againn

Sujal crosses his arms around his chest not moving and giving an inch

Kashish looks at him and sighs

k-Stop worrying about me..I am not a baby and you are not my care taker

s-No I am not, I wouldn't have even insisted on interfering this deeply after so much of refusal and resentment from your side but I guess I was just being polite.. I could have called the no. myself. But since you are going such great length to avoid all human concern and help then fine

Sujal phone se no. delete kar deta hai dialled no.s list se

s- Tumhe jo theek lage karo. Agar kisi friend ki zarurat ho to I am there for you.

Sjal chala jata hai kamre ke bahar

k-Wait

s-What?

k-Where are you going?

s-To make my breakfast

k-I'll make it for you

s- No thank you

k-I always do

s- I have been used to it for my whole life and since you are not going to be here anyways...I better stop spoiling myself.. besides..I don't accept charity

Sjal jakar starts  making poached eggs for himself

k-If someone asks me to stay I can

s- You have been asked and you have refused. I respect people's decision and don't badger them plus you are not a kid to be ordered

k-When was I asked? And people order those who they feel are close to them

s- Then call it a cultural difference coz we order only kids; adults have calm discussion..and you don't remember me asking you to stay coz you probably don't want to stay

k-Close people have right on each other. But you won't agree; so be it. I guess Italians know better

s-Italians are Italians.. I grew up that way.. if you expect me to change and break my habits overnight...

He shrugs and leaves the sentence hanging

k-Who am I to expect

s- I offered friendship..its yours to accept and refuse..

Kashish ka phone rings. It's her friend. She is getting frantic

k-Hmm...thik hoon...Sujal ke ghar...aa rahi hu...thik hai

Kashish phone rakh deti hai

k-Thank you again..and sorry againn...good bye..have a nice day

Kashish mud jaati hai

s- You don't have to apologize.. bye

Sujal neechte tak Kashish ko chod kar aata hai

Kashish phonchti hai friend ke wahan grim sa chehra banake

Sujal comes in the eving frm office and finds the door of Kashish's place unlocked

But he pretends to not care and ignores.. coz of the way she had been acting lately

Kashish nikallti hai wearing a casual dress

k-Hi

Sujal just nod sat his like a friendly neighbor..opens his door and goes in

k-I am going out...will you come?

But he went in before he could hear

She knocks at his door

He opens

k-I am going out, will you come...with me?

s-Do you need a ride?

k-I want you to come with me

s- Where are you planning to go?

k-just..come no

s-Look if you don't particularly need an escort then I'd rather not go, I had a long day at work

k-I have to get some groceries and..have to meet someone..please..I insist

s- Can't you tell me who you have to meet? I am in mood for wild goose chase

k-Just someone. Come

She drags him

k-Sujal, I am really sorry about my mindless behavior. We are still fiend, aren't we?

She looks at him with a puppy face

s-We are friends when it conveniences you

He has narrowed eye shrewd look

She looks down and retrieves her steps

But he doesn't feel guilty

k-I really wished...you would have come

s- I would come if you really need an escort... I'd rather not just come if it's an ordinary outing as I am tired. Why do you think I was asking you? Apart from that I am no one to force anyone

s-I asked u clearly... and you wouldn't tell...dio le donne! [God women!] Fine I'll come

k-Dio what?

She smiles

k-Thanks

He goes in picks up his coat and keys..mobile and comes back out

s-Where to?

The mall

They get in his car and go to the mall

She checks the watch as they finally reach

She enters a designer showroom. She again checks her watch. She is a bit in sweats

The sales woman was showing her the petite size dress...that was her size

k-No..get me the large size

She again checks the watch

k-Yup...this is nice..what do you think Sujal?

She again wipes her sweat of her forehead

Sujal isn't paying attention enough to notice.. idhar udhar mobile mein...

k-Sujal!

s-Hmm yah sure..whatever you like

k-yeah..ok..gift wrap it

She tells the sales women



Edited by storywriter - 18 August 2012 at 11:00am

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for whom is she waiting...

continue soon...

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part 16
Kashish is really a fool...
is she trying to patch Sujal and Ria?
then Sujal should really give her some sense in the harsh way...
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 3:49am | IP Logged
 Part 13
guess Ria ki kismat mein sujal se milna likha tha LOL hope she is happy now LOLLOL kabse taras rahi thi LOLLOLLOL

dinner date  TongueTongue all the best girl LOLLOLLOL...Njoy Smile

Part 14

aww poor kashish got drunk TongueTongue ... anyways it benefitted TongueWinkLOLLOL jhagda solve TongueLOLLOL hopefully LOLLOLLOL

Part 15

Lolz i thot one more wish gona complete from the list Wink LOL but sujal seems not ready to fulfill LOLLOLLOL

thank god they reached safe & sound SmileTongue & without fighting TongueLOL poor sujal apne hi room mein nahi so sakta LOLLOL...good to see him taking care of her SmileTongue.i wonder raat ko phone par kiski watt lagi LOLLOLLOL

Part 16

hope they be friends again TongueLOL sujal is being so sweet & accomdating to herTongueBig smile ...now i wonder for whom the gift goes for  TongueTongue ...& is Ria's date still on schedule  LOLLOLLOL




LOLBig smile


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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 9:12am | IP Logged
Part 12 & 13
So Kashs' friend Ria's here...she seems to be a good friend who's worried about Kash and surely got a crush on SujalLOL
But my o my Kash is still angry and i don't think she's acting childish in fact i think she's going perfect...not at all crying or sulking somewhere in the corner.
She knows what she's doing and hopes to carry it on.
I think it was a good decision to return all the items she had of Sujal...here Sujal showing his charms and she's totally unaffected by it, which is great but... someone's not immune to his attractivenessLOLLOL Ria's totally flirting and even got a date...very smooth.
One thing i liked the most here is that Kash is NOT jealous!!!!
She's totally cool with it n just minds her own business.

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