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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 3:49am | IP Logged
 Part 13
guess Ria ki kismat mein sujal se milna likha tha LOL hope she is happy now LOLLOL kabse taras rahi thi LOLLOLLOL

dinner date  TongueTongue all the best girl LOLLOLLOL...Njoy Smile

Part 14

aww poor kashish got drunk TongueTongue ... anyways it benefitted TongueWinkLOLLOL jhagda solve TongueLOLLOL hopefully LOLLOLLOL

Part 15

Lolz i thot one more wish gona complete from the list Wink LOL but sujal seems not ready to fulfill LOLLOLLOL

thank god they reached safe & sound SmileTongue & without fighting TongueLOL poor sujal apne hi room mein nahi so sakta LOLLOL...good to see him taking care of her SmileTongue.i wonder raat ko phone par kiski watt lagi LOLLOLLOL

Part 16

hope they be friends again TongueLOL sujal is being so sweet & accomdating to herTongueBig smile ...now i wonder for whom the gift goes for  TongueTongue ...& is Ria's date still on schedule  LOLLOLLOL




LOLBig smile


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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 9:12am | IP Logged
Part 12 & 13
So Kashs' friend Ria's here...she seems to be a good friend who's worried about Kash and surely got a crush on SujalLOL
But my o my Kash is still angry and i don't think she's acting childish in fact i think she's going perfect...not at all crying or sulking somewhere in the corner.
She knows what she's doing and hopes to carry it on.
I think it was a good decision to return all the items she had of Sujal...here Sujal showing his charms and she's totally unaffected by it, which is great but... someone's not immune to his attractivenessLOLLOL Ria's totally flirting and even got a date...very smooth.
One thing i liked the most here is that Kash is NOT jealous!!!!
She's totally cool with it n just minds her own business.

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 9:50am | IP Logged
Part 14 & 15
Kash planned to get drunk so Ria helped her by calling some of her own friends who are obviously the experts of drinking...forcing Kash to drink n all.
Everyone got drunk n went to Ria's house...poor Kash feeling dizzy n light headed...
I'm glad she didn't face any problem like somebody abducting her or taking advantage of her drunken state...i mean that would've been cliche n filmy.
Here she called Sujal and told him to take her home...a good decision made while being drunk,wow!LOL
Sujal didn't took any advantage but acted like a proper gentleman and took her home safely but with a lot difficultyLOLLOL
O Kash must be cursing her boss...huh,guess the guy deserves it..may be getting drunk is not that bad after all Kash is taking out all her pent up frustration n anger...she needed it.
Let me tell you that those three Italian words just killed me...just reading it felt sooo amazing...yeah i get happiness in these small little things.
Aaannnd "aaj raat couch zindabaad"ROFL

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Part 16
Kash is all awake n embarrassed for her previous behaviour and Sujal is not showing any sign of anger or discomfort but being polite all the way.
Well I'm guessing it was her boss whom she called n may be the new dress is for himLOLLOLLOL  WHAT??? I can imagine, right?
Aah how much i love your story...they are behaving just in the way i want them to be...not lovey-dovey but realistic...they know what they're doing especially Sujal who's character is totally understandable,the way he answers n handles any situation is impressive n so far I'm liking it.
Don't know about others but this chapter is perfect in my opinion.
Ooohh and don't let them fall in love before chapter 100 or something...I mean don't even let them have crush on each other n I'm serious...but don't listen to me it's your story.Smile
LOVED IT...continue soon.

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 10:35am | IP Logged

PART 17

She enters a designer showroom. She again checks her watch. She is a bit in sweats

The sales woman was showing her the petite size dress...that was her size

k-No..get me the large size

She again checks the watch

k-Yup...this is nice..what do you think Sujal?

She again wipes her sweat of her forehead

Sujal isn't paying attention enough to notice.. idhar udhar mobil mei...

k-Sujal!

s-Hmm yah sure..whatever you like

k-yeah..ok..gift wrap it

She tells the sales women

s-That's all you gonna buy?

She nods

Sujal nods too and shrugs...

s- Where to now then?

k-Chalo..we have to go to...[checks her mobile]...to..sea weed restaurant

s-Sea weed?

He says and starts to walk with her

s-Is there where we are meeting this person?

She nods

k-Do you think she will like the gift?

s- How I can tell what a woman may like or not

k-No..I mean its good naa

s-Sure u have a nice taste

Kashish smiles...

k-Thanks and thanks you came...I couldn't have done this alone

s- I don't see why you can't select a piece of clothing on your own

k-No...not about that...about the meeting thing. I didn't have the courage to do it alone

They reach the lavish restaurant and take a seat

k-I know she is nice ..but...she was really nice on phone. I hope she likes what I got

Sujal just nods...jo bhi pata chal jaega..usse pehle poocha tha.. tab nahi bataya. Usse umeed nahi hai ki ab bhi batayegi... waise bhi he is done begging and cajoling...and in a while he would find out for himself.. so little patience is all he needs

Kashish is checking the watch again and again and playing with the tissue to curb her nervousness

s-Shall we order?

k-Huh?

k-See, we can wait for Mrs. Gupta

s- Do I know her?

k-May be, she is Mr. Gupta's wife

She looks at him...and bites her lips in nervousness

s-Do I know Mr. Gupta?

She nods

k-He was my boss

s-I don't recall knowing the man, enlighten me

Sujal ko strike nahi kiya ho ki Kashish apne boss jiske sath uska affair reh chuka hai usi Mr. Gupta ki wife se mil rahi hai...usse bechare ki strike hi  nahi kiya ki Kashish ye kaam bhi kar sakti hai

k-I told you...she is Sumair Gupta's wife

s- You mean you are meeting with the wife of the man you had an affair with?

He says gazing at her with his black eyes which had turned stony; his lips are pursed in a thin line

She nods looking down

s- To do what?

k-I called her...and had apologized to her and she wanted to meet me

s- And i am here to assure her that there isn't anything more between him and you

k-No no, you are just here as my friend and she is a very nice lady. She was very nice to me on phone

Sujal nods mutely...he is not happy to be present.. he doesn't wanna tangle between two women.. who sleep with the same man

Kashsih looks up happily as a woman walks in with her brigade of shrewd looking women consisting of 5-6 more women

Kashish gets up with a smile

k-Hi

TISHHH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kashish is slapped hard

Mrs. Gupta-U B*********** !!!!!!!!!!

Kashish is perplexed

Mrs Gupta-YOU W************* SLEEPING WITH MY HUSBAND HUH! YOU CHARACTERLESS @$%$$%

TISHHH !!!!!!!!!! TISHHH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She pulls Kashish's hair mercilessly

k-Aaah!

She cries with pain

Sujal gets up...looking here and there; shocked himself

Mrs. Gupta-WE WILL ALL TEACH YOU A LESSON

The waiter comes with his tray

They get handful of raw eggs

Kashish ke upar saari ladies milke ande maarne lagti hain

Mrs. Gupta announce to the people around that Kashish is a home breaker, isle she is teaching her a lesson  and all women should join her

Kashish ke sarr pe ande maar maar ke sana dia aur 2-4 maarke nikal gai

Kashish bechari dubki padi thi helplessly...wo to bechari bhala karne gai thi

Kashish mooh chupake ro rahi hai

Sujal Kashish ka haath pakad kar usse wahan se bahar le jaata hai

Kashish has hidden her face in her hands in the trama while Sujal is giving her direction holding her hand

He takes her to some other section of the mall

He takes into the washroom and bolts the door

He can bend her head in the basin and wash off the egg from her face and bits of hair as much as he can...hath sleeves sab dhulwata hai hai...usse pochne ko kehta hai tissue laakar

He makes her wait there and goes to get some clean clothes to wear aise bahar nikelgi to sab stare karenge...

She was sobbing like a helpless baby all the while

Sujal aata hai 10 minte mein.. jo usse sabse theek 1 peice dikha wo utha kar...jakar he givs it to Kashish and tells her to change it

She was sobbing shutting the door of one of the stalls

k-You..you go..I..will..manage...you..you..don't have...to..help me...please

She doesn't want him to stick to her in this ultra embarrassing and messy situation as that's humiliating for him too

s-Change , then I'll take u back

k-Please...you..don't have to say...

She sounds as if she can have a nervous breakdown any moment

s- Look, you can change and we can leave or you can no change and we can leave...your choice dear

She changes and come out while looking pitiable; her face is swollen red and smeared with tears

She walks out with her head down

Sujal uska haath casually pakadta hai and then bade araam se use bahar lekar ataa hai

He opens the car door for her and then starts driving

She feels she would die of shame. As she is recalling the incidence; she is shivering slightly

s- You want to go to your place or your friends place?

k-Huh? M..my...p..place

s- ok

Sujal ghar le jata hai

Wahan he walks her to her place

She squeaks a thanks and shuts herself inside

Sujal uske gate band karne se pehla kehta hai  ki

s-Don't worry too much about it..they were...crazy women...they shouldn't have done that...you didn't deserve any of it

She nods slightly and shuts the door

s-Let me know if you need me

He says gate ke bahar se and he goes back to his place

He is worried ki Kashish depression mein aakar phr koi harkat na kar le and he is convinced that Indian women are crazy

He also thinks Kashish is foolish to think that something like patching up with your ex's wife can happen



Edited by storywriter - 19 August 2012 at 10:37am

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 10:46am | IP Logged
that was really bad...

poor K...but y did she try to make amends...i mean it was foolish on her part...

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
sad to see wat kash went through cont soon

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
part 17
u know what all the while i thought Kashish has bird brain and eratic mind and a fool but after this shes a certified fool on Earth...
why on earth did she try to do this?
doesnt she have any sense?
she should be glad that the women just did that else they would have handed her to the police...
fool she is really...
cont soon dear...

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