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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 12)

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 10:35am | IP Logged
part 14
nice part...
ab aayi line pe...
cont soon dear...
update ur title dear...

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 10:51am | IP Logged
she is fully drunk...

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 11:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

part 14
nice part...
ab aayi line pe...
cont soon dear...
update ur title dear...

o thx for notifying me dear...i am so stupid...and was wodering y aent anybody commenting...waise iss stry ke comment bohot kamm a arahe hain...kya stry itni buri hai...please refer it to r frnds if u lik it

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
Great parts... Loving the fic

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 5:13pm | IP Logged
awesome cont soon loved sujal concern

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by storywriter

Originally posted by spvd

part 14
nice part...
ab aayi line pe...
cont soon dear...
update ur title dear...

o thx for notifying me dear...i am so stupid...and was wodering y aent anybody commenting...waise iss stry ke comment bohot kamm a arahe hain...kya stry itni buri hai...please refer it to r frnds if u lik it


no probs dear...in fact me too thought u didnt update but just scrolled down and there twas the 14th part...story will pick up once it goes forward...
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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 8:36am | IP Logged

Sorry for late update...my net is giving me a bad time


PART 15

Kashish uthke achanak sits on his lap...her feet on her seat and she is sitting on his lap with her hands around his neck

Sujal turns the car wildly managing not to crash into anyone as traffic nahi tha zyada and parks road ke side mein

s- Kashish  this isn't going to happen. Now I need you to sit on your own seat . I can't drive and my legs hurt this way

k-Kiss me !

s- But I have bad breath right now

Sujal says turning away

k-Kizz me!

She is pulling his collar

s- I will in the morning...loads of them, we'll make out properly

He is trying to loosen her hold, turning his face away

Usse laga ki since she is drunk he should be gentle and nice and treat her like a kid and that would be the best way to handle...yahan to maan hi nahi rahi hai

k-NOOO

She shakes her head and gives a drunk smile touching her nose to his

k-KIZZ ME

Sujal finally chilla deta hai bohot zor se.. ki khidki ke kanch bhi hil gaye

s-KASHISH!!!

She shuts her eyes

s-Stop it!! Fermarlo {Stop (Italian)}!!!

Sujal uthake rakh deta hai Kashish side wali seat par aur seat belt laga deta hai

s- One more thing and peeche baitha dunga.. do you want me to do that? Tumhe akele peeche baithna hai?

Kashish bada wala pouts

s-Peeche saanp bhi hain

k-Huh????????????????

s-Agar mujhe drive karte hue pareshaan kiya to wahin bhej dunga

Sujal says and starts driving

k-MUMMYYY

s- Chup!!!! Chillaogi to bhi bhej dunga

k-Whyyy

s-Bilkul chup hokar apni seat par baitho warna punishment meni peeche bhej dunga

Kashish Sujal ka chin pakadke apni aur khinchti hai

k-Whyyy. You don't like me???? You like that RIAAA

Sujal phir car rokta hai

k-BI**HHH

s-Nnai manogi tum? Theek hai tumhe peeche diggi mei daal dete hain with scorpions and snakes

He says and gets out ; jata hai Kashish ki side wala gate kholta hai

k-Nooo no no no please no please

Sujal uski seat belt hatata hai

s- No, you are a bad girl. You should be punished

k-Finger on my lipzzz

Finger chipkaa leti hai lips se

s- You promise to sit quietly and not move?

She nods

s- Agli baar I won't even ask

He says threateningly and wapas aakar baith jata hai and starts driving

Kashish pure raasste finger on her lips hai with a big pout

Pohonchte hain wo log unki bulding mein

Sujal gets out aur aakar Kashish ka gate kholta hai and smiles at her

Usko help karta hai utarne mein

Sujal Kashish ka hath pakad kar makes her stand on the ground

s- Good girl

She extends both her arms

k-Carry me

She giggles like a loony

s-You can't walk? Shame on you...even a 1 year old can walk

Sujal says showing disapproval

s- Haww tumhe itna bhi nahi aata.. tch tch tch...

k-CHUP RAHO !!!!!!!!!!!

She grabs his collar and pulls him

k-Carry me

s- Main bigdi hui ladkiyon ki baat kyun maanu jinko chalna bhi nahi aata?

He curls his hand around her waist firmly

s-Chalo

She pouts but her eyes are droopy and heavy and finally her eyes are closed as she leans on Sujal

He mutters some Italian curses and picks her up over his shoulder and takes her inside

She is blabbering something on her way

He takes her to his apartment and lays her on his bed, takes off her sandals, usko chadar udata hai

She giggles as she feels tickle as he removes the footwear

Thode second dekhta hai her sleeping and then goes out...aaj raat couch zinda baad

Ab s sone chala gaya to Sujal ko thodi der baad awaaz aati hai

'Yooouuu svinelezzz baz**** !!!!!!!!!!!!'

Sujal uthta hai ..kaun kahan kya?...jata hai hai jahan se awaz aa rahi hoti hai

Kashish phone pe chilla rahi thi

k-YOOU JERKKK

Sujal dekhta hai her shouting at some one...1 bar sochta hia ki phone chinnle as he notices ki phone to uska use kar rahi hai.. phir socha hai ki kya Kashish aur bikhar jaegi aadhi raat ko...roegi, uspe chillaegi, 10 pange karegi... isse achha to jisse bhi baat kar rai hai usse subah ek bar apologize karlenge

k-YOOOUUU YOOOUUU F**********...I'LL NOT LEAVE UUU K************** YOUUU D*******

Sujal also thinks Kashish had been pretty closed up about her personal life.. nahi pasand tha usse kuch bhi share karna... to Sujal gate band karke wapas aa kar let jata hai

Subah hoti hai-

Sujal tab uth jaata hai, jis stime per oz office jaane ke lie uthta hai

Wo jata hai dekhta hai ki Kashish to ab tak so rahi hai soochta hai ki utha ki hi jau office.. peche se apne aap uthi to akeli hogi

s- Kashish

He goes and open all the curtains in the room

Kashish groans and mooh dhak let jaatai hai

Sjal hatata hai takiya and cover

s- Kashish!!!

She groans

k-ehhh

s- Utho

He goes and makes her something for her hangover and headache aur laakar rakhta hai bed ke paas

s- Utho.

She sits up with her disheveled hair and badlyyy aching head

He puts the glass in her hand, sits next to her and makes her drink

s- Piyo

k-Hmm

She looks at him then again lowers her eyelashes

 k-Thanks

Sujal just nods- hmm

sab kuch pila kar he gets up



Edited by storywriter - 16 August 2012 at 8:38am

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poor guy...

wonder what will K say now...

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