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Posted: 11 years ago
part 26
nice part...
all are so lost in the nasha...
only Kashish is sober...
poor her...
cont soon dear...
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PART 27

He grabs her hand, opens her palm and puts his hand under her

Pours the liquor on her palm and starts licking and sucking her hand

Ab Kashish kya kare...she is enjoying all the sensations it is bringing her.. but chahti bi nahi ki  Sujal aur piye

s-You..you..-hic-...you..make..me..drunkkk...you...you..Kazzz-hic-

k- Haan sab meri hi galti hai

She says... finally morality winning

She takes he hand away and tries to take the drink out of his hand

s-Kazzz...kiss me...kiss me...I..I am drunkkk-hic-...bacio [kiss]

k- Yes sure you are drunk. I'll kiss you when you are sober.. you stink

s-Kizzz

k-No kiss. No il mi, no bachio till you are drunk

s-Voglio fare l'amore con u [I want to make love with you] Kazzz pleaseee Kazzz

Kashish is like huh ?!! kya!!!KYA!! par kuch kehti nahi

k- No..you are drunk; that's your punishment for drinking

s-Suzzzal likez..Kazzz

He again keeps his head on her lap

s-Likezzz her a lorrr -hic -really likez

She strokes his hair..

k-If that is so then why don't you ever listen to me? You don;t do anything for the person you like, you don't like me you are just saying that...

s-Suzaal -hic- Suzaal is lonely..needs..Kazzz...Kazzz

k-Kashish wlil be with Sujal when he acts properly like a gentle man...

Dil par pathar rakh kar she says

Sujal ankhein band kar leta hai murmuring..Kazz..Kazzz

Kashish sehla sehla kar sula dete hai ... beech mein humming some tune.. to help him sleep aur baalon mein hath pher pher ke..

Thodi der to baithti hai waise hi lekin Sujal ka sarr bhi bhari hai, pair so gaye Kashish ke

So kafi mehnat ki jaati hai uthne mein bina disturb kiye

Sujal ke sarr ke neeche takiya rakha, chaadar udaaya usse, takes off his watch and wallet, jaakar saari drinks ki bottle chupa deti ha, agra khali kar di to pay karna pad jayega.. Kashish ko aise bekaar ke kharche pasand nahi

Kashish ko pata hai ki chupaane se bhi Sujal rukega nahi, kahin aur hake pii lega par kam se kam jav tak uske kamre mein hoga tab tak to nahi piyega naa

Kashish ne itna bhi nahi socha ki Sujal ke pine ka ye faida hai ki wo Crystal ke pass nahi jaata...par Kashish nadaan hai itna socha kahan

Ab agli subah

Ria aati hai wapas kamre mein

Sujal to wahin pada hua hai sofe pe

Kashish bed pe soyi hui thi

Ria aake key se door kholti hai zor se awaaz karke

Kashish uth jati hai awaaz se-

k-Hai kaun what?

Looking idhar udhaur...

Ria is looking at Sujal

k- oh tum aa gai

Ria-oh he was with you.

k-- haan Kal Raj ne gate andar se lock kiya aur khola hi nahi

Ria-I guess, you two should shift together

k- What? Tum bhi piikar bakwas kar lo, sab to wiase hi bakwas karte rehte hain

ria-What did I say? He is always Kazz Kazz. I am with Zach. Ypu two can pair up

Kashish uh jaati hai, kapde nikalti hai nahane dhone frsh hone ko

Ria-Have fun with him, usse bhi kyun sukha rakh rahi hai

k- Please Ria.. I don't.. he isn't ...don't be crude... main aise hi kisi ke bhi saath... ek baar galti kar chuki hoon phir se bas kise 2nd motive ke lie kisi ke saath kuch nahi karungi and waise bhi Sujal responsible type ka ladka hai... he would feel too responsible if anything happens.. main nahi chahti ki jo friendship hai wo bhi tut jaaye

Ria-You told me you like him

k- Like karna alga hai.. I like him and I don't want to lose him because of some silly thing or senseless fling

r-You can date him

k- Agar koi sober ho to kuch ho...

She says getting irritated and frustrated... jaise uska man nahi karta kya... Sujal to saare open signal deraha hai.. par Kashish to drunk nahi hai naa.. nahi keh saki ki main nashe mein thi to maine kiss kar diya.

r-Ask him for a date and you know...he is sooo cute when he is drunk

k- Tum 1 ko choose nahi kar sakti ho kya ... seriously Ria leave him alone now.. you had your chance and you blew it

r-Can't I admire a good looking man?

Kashish wants to say not Sujal...but only says

k- I am against shameless ogling. Main jaa rahi hoon nahane . Stay away from him!

Kashish says frowning and going into the bathroom..

Ria shrugs

Kashish jaldi se 15-20 min mein sab karke bahar aa jaati hai

Ria bed pe so gai thi

Kashish ke baal se cheetein Sujal par padti hain

He opens his eyes

Kashish apna breakfast order kar rahi hoti hai phone par ek hath se apne baal jhatakte hue.. seedhe karte hue...usse to pata hi nahi ki Sujal par cheetein aa rahi hain

Sujal straightens up and stretches himself

Kashish phone rakh kar turns to dekha ki Sujal uth gaya

k- oh tum uth gaye, good! [she smiles] Tea?coffee? :)

s-Tea

Kashish order kar deti hai

s-Kash

k- Hmm?

s-Come here

Kashish jaati hai Sujal ke paas

k- Kya hau? Kaise ho? Do you have a hang over? Pata hai kitni pii leihi ka-

He hugs her...resting his chin on her shoulder snuggling around her hair a bit

Kashish chup.. kuch 10 seconds ke liye

He kisses her cheek...

s-Thanks..you are the best

Kashish is shocked into silence

k- uh.. huh.. ahem. hm.. ohh okkk...thanks I guess...I.. tum brush kar lo

She moes away..

Breakfast bhi aa jata hai to Kashish laga deti hai sab table par

Sujal gets up and looks at himself in mirror

s-Man! Not much hangover...wonder pill [He thinks to himself]

Sujal ko pasand aa gai goli.. and about thankin Kashish wo uska do din khayal rakhne ke liye kiya as Kashish naa hoti to wo surely gutter mein hi pada hota

He knows ki chapad  chapad ke piche she cares and takes care no matter kitna bhi soche ki ab ignore karegi...he knows islie islie to chpad chapad sehta h warna kab ka suna deta, F*** off keh deta, vaffanculo...in Italian..

Bathroom mein Sujal brush karne gaya to realize hua ki uska toothbrush to doosre room mein hai

Kashish ne breakfast laga diya to dekha ki Sujal brush karte karte bahar aa gaya

k- Tumhari chai aa  gai.. tum kuch MERA BRUSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ewww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SUJAAALLL!!!!

He looks at her innocently...jaise wo to bhola bhala bachcha hai

s-Huh? What?

k- Tum mera tooth brush kyun use kar rahe ho!!

s-Well..to brush my teeth

She marches to him taking the brush out of his mouth

k-Mera hai!!!

Sujal jaake dhoke aata hai mooh..showing his teeth

k-Apna use karo.. nahi hai to hotel ka use karo, nahi hai to apni ungi use karo

Kashish ke haath mein Sujal ka saliva aur paste laga hua brush

k-eww ...

Kashish jaaakr hath dhoti hai ar brush bhi...

Sujal mand mand muskura raha hai

k- Dimag to sharaab ki bottle mei doob gaya hai tumahra..

s-WellIi got to taste your mouth

Sujal bade aaram se tea leke keh deta hai

Kashish gaps...muh khul gaya Kashish ka ki kya bawkas kar raha hai in somewhat sober mode

k-I...you... tum... Sujal ye...-tum...tum mujhe naya brush dilaoge bass!

He nods

s-But you can also use mine

Kashish narrows her eyes

k-No, thank you. I don't like tasting alcohol or its remains...

s-Vome on...my mouth doesn't taste bad

k-Alcohol does

s-Or you can enjoy the taste directly

He smiles

k-No, I don't want the additional smell too

She gives him a plastic mocking smile

Sujal hasne lag jaata hai, he loves teasing her

Kashish is all flustered and slightly red... ab usse lag raha hai ki isse achha to drunk Sujal ke sath hi bakwas kar le at least then he doesn't embarrass her too much

s-Care for a walk Kash?

Kashish nods

k-Sure

He holds her hand

s-Come

Kahsish chal padti hai, happy holding hands with him

They go to the pool side, wahan jahan pehle din gaye the

Sujal bhi aage badke puts his arm around her shoulder

Kashish ek bar to dekhti hai ki isse kya hua, phir she also shrug ki kath rakhne mein kya hai..

So she put her hand around his waist

Uss pool ka haal aaj bhi uss din jaisa hi hai

Sujal jaake phir pool ke paani mein pair duboke baith jaat hai

Kashish bhi baith jaati hai

k- Aaj hum log kahan jayenge?

He looks Kashish

s-Wherever you say

Sujal ki ankhein intensely Kashish ko dekh rahi hain

k- Mai kya bolun.. mujhe to kuch samjh hi nahi aata, itni mushkil se kal koi jagah dhoondi socha ki kuch aacha aur naya dekhne ko milga.. pata chal strip show hai...sab aisa hi hai yahan Vegas mein kuch bhi karlo..

He chuckles seeing her pout unconsciously

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part 25
 
chalo finally sab bewde logo ne drug le li hai taki woh log guttar main naa pade hue mile
seriously yeh log kuch zyada hi drunk hai
ab dance ki baari, Kashish ka idea hai
par yeh kya????strip dance
ek to sab ke sab bewde upar se aisa hot dance
Sujal ko lagta hai woh pee kar zyada hot ho jaata hai, arre no darling, tum sober hi bohut acche lagte ho
Crystal ne Sujal ke drunk hone ke wajah se mana kar diya
yeppy
nice update
 
 
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part 26
 
Kashish ko immediately Italian sikhna parega
lekin ek baat hai Sujal clearly signal de raha hai Kashish ko ki woh kya chahta hai.
pyaar kitna karta hai pata nahin, par woh chiz zaroor karna chahta hai.
Kashish kya itni naa samajh hai??? yaa phir samajh kar bhi ignore kar rahi hai.
Sujal aur Raj Devdas Chunilal, woww, yeh wala sach main brillaint hai Neelu
Raj ne door bandh kiya
now Sujal in Kashish 's room
last part kaafi hot tha
but now i think seriously kashish ko koi decision lena parega
Sujal out of control ho raha hai.
good one
nice part.
 
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part 27
 
thank God, ki sujal ne i want to make love with u wala line Italian main bola, warna peetta
Kashish Sujal ka sihnal samajh raha hai, par koi decision nahin le paa rahi hai,
lagta hai, first time garbaad hone ke baad woh aur ek heart break afford nahin kar sakti.
Ria ne accha kiya, Sujal wala line chod diya
woh samajh gaayi kuch nahin hoga yaha, intelligent girl
ab Kashish ne bhi usse mana kar diya Sujal se dur raho.
finally subah hoti hai, Thank God Sujal ne uth kar yeh nahin kaha I want drink, tea liya
yeh magic pill kaam kar gaayi
not much hangover, infact sober
Kashish ki brush use kar li usne, yaha par bhi Sujal ne clear indication diya, sober halat main
not in italian, in English
but yes, next yeh log kaha jaate hai dekhna parega in wild Vegas
nice part
beautifully written
waiting for the next
 
by the way Neelu, u know Italian???? if no, then brillaint job.itna research, well done dear.main bhi kuch Italian word sikh rahi hoon. Thanks.
 
 
 
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part 27
awesome...
Sujal is in love with Kashish?
cont soon dear...
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PART 28

k- Aaj hum log kahan jayenge?

He looks Kashish

s-Wherever you say

Sujal ki ankhein intensely Kashish ko dekh rahi hain

k- Mai kya bolun.. muhe to kuch samjh hi nahi aata, itni mushkil se kal koi jagah dhoondi socha ki kuch aacha aur naya dekhne ko milga.. pata chal strip show hai...sab aisa hi hai yahan Vegas mein kuch bhi karlo..

He chuckles seeing her pout unconsciously

k-To main kya kahun ki kahan jaana hai. Tum log bhi to kuch kaho main koi tour guide hoon kya

s-Kya kare sabko nanga nach dekhne mein hi mazze aate hain, Kash

Kashish gives him stern look.. lekin hass deti hai thoda..

s-Aaj to tumhe chand pe bhi janaa ho to wahan bhi le jaunga...[says in a low whispering voice]

k- uh.. nahi.. matlab...

She gets all flustered again .. over this Italian low voice smoky intense eyes thing he does..

k- umm jahan tum jana chahte ho wahan chalte hain..

s-Main kahan jaana chahta hoon

k- Bolo...batao

He smirks while his eyes ooze sensuality and mischief

k- Batao batao.. main sabko bol dungi sab taiyaar ho jaenge, phir chalte hain

s-Sab nahi..bass main...[again smoky intense eyes and low tone]

Kashish frowns-

k-Llekin sab kyn nahi? Hum sabke saath ghumne aaye hain naa.. aur waise bhi kahin bhi jayein I am sure wahan kuch to aisa waisa ho hi raha hoga.. sab bhi dekh lenge..

s-Nah...everybody doesn't have the right...just I do; only me

He is moving his face closer to her; puts behind a wild strand of hair behind her ear

k- Rr..right? Matlab koi exclusive entry wala club hai?

She says leaning back a little

s-umm..hmm

k-oh...

He is coming closer real slowly

Kashish is moving back and back...leaning away and away at the same rate

k- Aisi kaunsi jagah hai?

He firmly grabs her waist

She collides to his strong wall lik chest

Kashish is concentrating on taking deep breaths and not forgetting to breath and blacking out

k- Ye kya...Sujal?

s-hmm

k-Ye tum..

She is squirming slightly trying to get a little distance between them...

Zyada try bhi nai kar satki..1 to itna mann bhi nahi doosra pani mein girne ka darr

k-Sujal.. let go...

s-Shhh quiet

k-But .. ye.. Sujal this is...chodo please

He leaves her

Bass peche hoke giri paani mein

k-oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Again he pulls her with great force

She collides again to his chest

This time Kashish saare social rules and etiquette bhool kar pakd leti hai

She puts her hand around his neck ki phir galti se bhi gir naa jaye

k- Kya kar rahe the tum!! Main gir jaati to!!

He smiles

s-Nahi girogi. Main hoon naa, pakad lunga kass ke

k-Hanso mat it's no funny. Kya mujhe daraane mein itne mazze aate hain tumhe?

She says pouting

s-Nah

k-Bas sab milkar mere mazze le lo...

She rests her head on his shoulder

k-Tum aise he better ho, less drunk..

s-Hmm? Really?

Kashish nods rubbing her cheek on his chest

He starts moving his hand on her spine

k- Tum naa bohot achhe ho.. bas jab kabhi kabhi stubbornly kisi bhi baat par atak jate ho aur kisi ki sunte hi nahi ho...

s-Hmm really? We also have a solution

k- Kya?

She says looking up but not moving away

s- [Whisper] You just have to claim my lips

She narrows her eyes...

k-How is that a solution?

s-Try it

k-Phir mazze lene chalu kar diye tumne mere

She says pulling away from him

s-Sach keh raha hoon..dil se

He holds her hand and puts it on his heart

Kashish is repeating Italian tricks Italian tricks in her mind

She shakes her head

k- Yaa to tumne pii rakhi hai ya tum mere mazze le rahe ho

He clicks his tongue

k- Warna main jab tumhe itne time se pasand nahi aayi  to 2 din mein kya jaadu hoga.. waise bhi kal to tum Crystal ke sath jaa rahe the..ab wo nahi hai to lo.. Kashish hi sai... issi ke sath time pass kar lete hain

She says looking away..

He holds her face

s-Tumhe lagta hain main tumhare saath time pass karta hoon

He looks into her eyes for a moment

Kashish shrugs...looking down

He leaves her abruptly and goes to stand at a corner

Kashish baithi rehti hai wahin aur thodi der..lekin wahan bhi phir kuch ladke aa kar bhin bhinane lagte hain

To wo uth kar Sujal ke paas hi chali jaati hai..

Sujal was feeling offended

k- Dekho main.. I ... you are what every girl can dream of.. tum mujhe kyun pasand karoge, it's not logical...bass yahi baat hai...so being friends I understand.. but uske aage..

She shrugs again

Sujal bina kuch kahe chala jaata hai

Kashish follows him

k- Suja tum aise kyun jaa rahe ho...please tum gussa mat ho mujhse

s-Why would I be angry? Main to time pas karta hoon naa. Time pass, right?

k-To tumne kabhi kaha ki main pasand ho tumhe? Kaha that you are serious? Jab piite ho bas tab hi meri yaad aati hai. Thode dino pehle mujhse baat nahi kar rahe the.. kabhi Ria pasand hai kabhi Crystal pasand hai...3 din ke liye main pasand hoon bas yahi naa. Theek hai ho tum serious...maybe 1 poore week le liye serious ho. Thaek hai!

s-YOUUU!!!

He crunches his fist and shuts his eyes for s second

s-You just, just leave it!

He walks away

k- Haan fine leave it! You need another drink now.

She shouts after him but doesn't follow him, gussa agaya Kashish ko bhi..

He turns to her

s-Nooo I need a whole tank. You have a problem?????? k- Haan jakar doob jao usmein.. sochna mat ki ho kya raha hai.. keh kya rahe ho.. just float around in numb washed out reality

s-I took you here for a walk thinking acha time spend karenge. I came to this place for you with your stupid friends!!! But Yooouuu!!!

k-My stupid friends??? Bhai bann gaya Raj to tumhara. My stupid friends?? To jao.. kyun yahan ruk kar sabki tarah pagalon wali harkatien kar rahe ho? Mujhe bhi acha nahi lagta hai tumhe sabke saath aise nashe mei dekhna.. nahi aana chahti thi main bhi...par socha ki thoda break loon so I can start again.. socha tum hoge to koi to hoga

Kashish says her eyes getting a bit watery

s-Mujhe naashe mein dekhna?????? Meri life? Meri drink, mera mooh, mujhpe nasha, tumhe kyaaa???

k-Haan mujhe kya, mera hi dimaag ghaas charne chala gaya tha...poori life hi meri -.. jao tum jaakar sharaab mei dubki maar lo

Kashish says tuning away and walking away brushing her eyes

s-COMPLETE YOUR DAMN SENTENCE

Kashish bhag ke jali ja rai hai...running away at full speed

Edited by storywriter - 11 years ago
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awesome...

they were spending such a nice time together n then again fought...