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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45)

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Posted: 11 years ago


Hey ppl thanks for liking and reading Jaded Prince...here is the new fic by me and meggs...You'll see a brand new Sujal and Kashish here...in a very fresh outlook and circumstances...its a fresh light fic...hope you enjoy

Part 1

Sujal comes to this new country called India. He is born and brought up in Italy

He has to extend his family business to India that's why he lands here and gets a decent flat in Mumbai But his company has a fierce neck to neck competition with other company and the rivalry just gets bitter

He knows Hindi coz in his home it was made compulsory by his mom to converse in Hindi

Jo rival company ki DGM hai, she is young vivacious gal...GM ke saath hamesha aati hai to dekha...presentation etc bhi deti hai

Rivalary itni biter hai ki the two heads seldom look eye to eye and neither the girl; Kashih and Sujal look eye to eye

Sujal who was living in hotel till now 'shifts to his new flat

Everything is cool but problem ye hai ki uski neighbor wo Kashish hai

He had seen her in the meetings. He did find her 'hot' when he first set his eyes on her par bohot nakchadi si hai. He thinks professional life aur personal life mix karti hai, pagal hai. These Indians have their priorities mixed up

So Sujal and Kashish don't even speak to each other neighbor hote hue bhi

Bass ek problem hai. Aur wo hain apne press wale bhaiya jo ki common hain

Ab apne press bhaiya jo hain. Kashish ghar pe nahi rahegi to uske kapde Sujal ke ghar mein rakhwa denge. Sujal nahi rahega to uske kapde Kashish ke ghar mein rakhwa denge

Aab kapde dene yaa lene ke lie unn dono ko ek dusre ke ghar mein ghanti bajani hi padti hai

By the way...Kashish is going around with her boss who is in his 40 married with a kid. It's been about 2 years they are together

Kashish wanted success, to grow in her career warna wo aaj DGM kaise banti

Boss is in this relation only because of physical intimacy involved

Par ab press wale ke chakkar mein ek din Kashish ko office ke lie late ho jaata h suba subah so thoda chilla sa deti hai Sujal pe ki..chahe wo kitna bhi late ho..he should give her the clothes in the night

Udhar boss aata tha frequently Kashish ke ghar mein..to sleep with her  and kuch ghante baad would leave

Aab aise hi ek raat wo boss aata hai Kashish ke wahan. She demands ki she is fed up all lukka chupi and all that. She wants commitment, real love

Boss says...cool go ahead get a bf

Kashish says... what??? I want love from you. We are together for 2 years

Boss says...you know why we were together

She accuses that you used me for sex

Boss says...I gave you promotion and hike in career. Tum kabhi DGM nahi bann sakti thi warna. Jjo manga wo dia.  Don't talk as if you are a kid. Paise nahi mange, kal ko wo bhi maangne lagogi

They have a huge fight aur wo boss piss off hoke Kashish pe paise maarke nikal jaata hai

Udhar Sujal dekhta hai der raat ki Kashish ghar pe hai

Sochta hai jaldi se ye kapde de doon warna chakar chakar karegi

Sujal jaake bell bajata hai...1-2 baar bajata hai kholti nahi

He realizes door to khula hai

He pushes sit open

Knock karta hai...koi awaaz nahi

He calls her name...tab bhi kuch nahi

Thoda andar aata hai while calling her name

Kahin dikh nahi rahi

Ghar khula chodke kahan jayegi, he wonders

Sujal jaane lagta hai, jab kitchen mein Kashish ko dekh ke maano uske pairon taale zameen khisak jaati hai         

Kashish padi hui hai zamen par, nass kaat li, behosh

Sujal bhaag ke jaata hai paas mein

Samajh nahi aa raha kya kare...chod bhi nahi sakta aise par aise hospital le jayega to faltu mein police case etc banega

He calls his friend who is a doctor

Wo aata hai...he checks he. Kehta hai hospital le jaana hi hoga

Le jaata hai hospital mein

Dost says don'tworry police ka panga nahi hoga I will take care

Kashish ki ankh khulti hai next day

Sujal saamne khada hai

He is looking at her for some explanation

Kashish Sujal ko dekh ke mooh chupa leti hai...she doesn't wanna face him

Dost kehta hai ki isko hospital mein rakhunga to panga hoga. Ghar le jaa. Take care of her and don't let her use her hand for a month

Sujal le aata hai Kashish ko ghar pe

 

 

 

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Padfoot_Prongs thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
is it bit like metro kangana ranuat story???
well i like it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

is it bit like metro kangana ranuat story???
well i like it...

yeah...to be very honest...the starting a little inspired but its till the 1st part only...thx for liking
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi
so neelu my friend have started a new story
the story seems to be very refreshing with a modern touch into it
kashish who is always a becchari type is unlike here she is independent but her bossh what the hell he is anyways thank good sujal saves her from dying and i hope he takes good cares of her
plz cont soon and pm me me
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Posted: 11 years ago
NICE START
PLZZ CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 11 years ago

Good to see a new FF

More good to have SK as neighbours atleast no tension of kaise milenge kab milenge…

Felt bad for kashish….boss is such a moron….hope kashish teaches him a lesson instead of hurting herself…

Wonder how will SK will fall in love...coz with a neighbour like sujal its obvious to fall in love 😛😛 

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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely name...part one and so many things happened already?
nice concept...Kash's character is totally different.
One thing i must say is that while reading the chapter i felt as if I'm on a jet plane🤣 the story is going at a rocket speed...but hey I'm not complaining!!
I'm sure it's gonna be a great story n I know I'll have fun reading it.
Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
so new FF
tumse to umeed hamesha high hota hai
refeshing concept
thoda Metro film ka yaad dilaya, but i know yaha bhi sirf tumhara creativity hi humhe dekhne ko milega
good start
Kashish hai bohut modern & independent, but pyaar ke mamle main kaafi old
uske character ke hisab se suicide attempt???well, insaan ke character main bohut shade hota hai, ek update main samajhna muskil hai
but bohut fast story ka development ho raha hai.
nice update
waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago

 PART 2

Kashish Sujal ko dekh ke mooh chupa leti hai...she doesn't wanna face him

Dost kehta hai ki isko hospital mein rakhunga to panga hoga. Ghar le jaa. Take care of her and don't let her use her hand for a month

Sujal le laata hai Kashish ko ghar pe...he jst thinks faltu mein akeli ladki pareshan hogi, she looks vulnerable

Ab Kashish ko bed rest hai

Sujal office jaata hai to apni kam wali bai se kaha hai Kashish ke lie bhi khana bana de...office ke baad roz usse dekhne aata h, uska haal chaal puchne aata h

Thoda bohot baat karte hain

Kashish ko bohot sharam aati haito face him because of her harkaat

First day she just murmurs a 'thanks' to him

He just says...have your soup, have your medicine...just like that...zyada nahi puchta

Ab ek din Kashish saare baal leke upar ponytail bana rahi thi

Sujal enters

s-What are you doing???????

k-Huh? Tying my hair

s-Don't you know...you are not supposed to use your hand

k-But my hairs are all messy I need to tie them

Kashish bed pe baithi hai aur Sujal comb leke uske ke sar pe hal chala raha hai

Saare baal at last upar pakad liye

s-Where is your rubber band?

She points to a direction

Eek haath se Sujal ne Kashish ke baal pakde hain aur udhar dusre haath se trying to reach rubber band

Jitna Sujal bend ho raha hai, Kashish pura khinchi chali aa rahi hai

Kashish bechari bed se latak sa gai hai

Ab rubber band to le lia par thode baal nikal gaye hain

Ab phir hal chalana start

Kashish ke saare baal face ke saamne kar die

Sujal bade concentration se ek ponytail bana deta hai

He smiles looking at his work

Ponytail tedi hai but decides on remaining silent

Kashish mand mand muskura rahi hai as saamne mirror tha aur Sujal dikh raha tha

Pure concentration se pony banate hue uski tongue thodi si nikal gai without him realizing

Aab dheere dheere Sujal-Kashish roz milte hain, baat karte hain thoda bohot...dosti ho si rahi hai

Aise Sujal office se aaya tha aur dono batiya rahe the

'Kashish!'

Sujal turns to see the boss and Kashish looks upset

Boss-Kaisi ho tum? I heard...I heard

Sujal excuses himself and goes

k-Idhar aaiye sir. Mere kareeb aaiye

Boss aata hai

Kashish lete lete

TISHHH!!!!

1 tight slap

k-Get out. Just get out

Boss goes

Sujal reluctantly aata hai thodi der baad

s-emm..dinner

They generally shared the dinner together]

She nods

He was having his food silently while Kashish is looking at him

 k-I did it because of him

He looks at her

k-We...we were together... [Her eyes are welling up]...you...must be thinking...I...I am...s**t

She can't meet his eyes

He doesn't reply

Wo nahi puchta about the whole incident...it's her personal life. He isn't intriguing types...even if he had a little intrest but he brushes it off

s-Finish the dinner

After a while when he was going after saying good night

k-Sujal

He stops

k-I am glad to have a friend like you

Next day subah, Sujal aata hai bye bolne ke lie ki wo jaa raha hai office

k-I have a request. Side table pe ek pen drive hai uske matter ka print out leke post kar doge mere office address mein?

He nods and takes the pd with him

Sujal aaj jaldi aata hai office se

s-Why did you resign?

Sujal ko  atpata laga aise achanak impulsive decision ki baad mein naa pachtaye as she doesn't have anything in hand

k-I just felt like. I am fed up of it  .I want to live like myself, do what I feel like

Sujal is just glaring at her

She smiles

k-Why are you so serious? You look as if you are unemployed not me

He keeps gazing at her...he looks devastated may be coz he cares

 

Edited by storywriter - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm first to comment!!!!
Ooo i like Kash,she is awesome...it's true that she has done some bad things but damn I'm happy that she's not all broken...I'm sure she'll be a hell of a character...Sujal is just perfect.
It's different  from those stories where they fall in love at first sight n get married n yada yada...
Everyone is classy...n she slapped her boss,YAY! that guy deserves more.
Another thing i liked is that Sujal didn't do anything there but gave them privacy.
This is why i like your story...they are very realistic n amazing!!
Glad to know that Sujal cares about Kash...n this time the chapter was not rocket😆
LOVED it...Continue soon.