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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45)

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 10:01am | IP Logged


Hey ppl thanks for liking and reading Jaded Prince...here is the new fic by me and meggs...You'll see a brand new Sujal and Kashish here...in a very fresh outlook and circumstances...its a fresh light fic...hope you enjoy

Part 1

Sujal comes to this new country called India. He is born and brought up in Italy

He has to extend his family business to India that's why he lands here and gets a decent flat in Mumbai But his company has a fierce neck to neck competition with other company and the rivalry just gets bitter

He knows Hindi coz in his home it was made compulsory by his mom to converse in Hindi

Jo rival company ki DGM hai, she is young vivacious gal...GM ke saath hamesha aati hai to dekha...presentation etc bhi deti hai

Rivalary itni biter hai ki the two heads seldom look eye to eye and neither the girl; Kashih and Sujal look eye to eye

Sujal who was living in hotel till now 'shifts to his new flat

Everything is cool but problem ye hai ki uski neighbor wo Kashish hai

He had seen her in the meetings. He did find her 'hot' when he first set his eyes on her par bohot nakchadi si hai. He thinks professional life aur personal life mix karti hai, pagal hai. These Indians have their priorities mixed up

So Sujal and Kashish don't even speak to each other neighbor hote hue bhi

Bass ek problem hai. Aur wo hain apne press wale bhaiya jo ki common hain

Ab apne press bhaiya jo hain. Kashish ghar pe nahi rahegi to uske kapde Sujal ke ghar mein rakhwa denge. Sujal nahi rahega to uske kapde Kashish ke ghar mein rakhwa denge

Aab kapde dene yaa lene ke lie unn dono ko ek dusre ke ghar mein ghanti bajani hi padti hai

By the way...Kashish is going around with her boss who is in his 40 married with a kid. It's been about 2 years they are together

Kashish wanted success, to grow in her career warna wo aaj DGM kaise banti

Boss is in this relation only because of physical intimacy involved

Par ab press wale ke chakkar mein ek din Kashish ko office ke lie late ho jaata h suba subah so thoda chilla sa deti hai Sujal pe ki..chahe wo kitna bhi late ho..he should give her the clothes in the night

Udhar boss aata tha frequently Kashish ke ghar mein..to sleep with her  and kuch ghante baad would leave

Aab aise hi ek raat wo boss aata hai Kashish ke wahan. She demands ki she is fed up all lukka chupi and all that. She wants commitment, real love

Boss says...cool go ahead get a bf

Kashish says... what??? I want love from you. We are together for 2 years

Boss says...you know why we were together

She accuses that you used me for sex

Boss says...I gave you promotion and hike in career. Tum kabhi DGM nahi bann sakti thi warna. Jjo manga wo dia.  Don't talk as if you are a kid. Paise nahi mange, kal ko wo bhi maangne lagogi

They have a huge fight aur wo boss piss off hoke Kashish pe paise maarke nikal jaata hai

Udhar Sujal dekhta hai der raat ki Kashish ghar pe hai

Sochta hai jaldi se ye kapde de doon warna chakar chakar karegi

Sujal jaake bell bajata hai...1-2 baar bajata hai kholti nahi

He realizes door to khula hai

He pushes sit open

Knock karta hai...koi awaaz nahi

He calls her name...tab bhi kuch nahi

Thoda andar aata hai while calling her name

Kahin dikh nahi rahi

Ghar khula chodke kahan jayegi, he wonders

Sujal jaane lagta hai, jab kitchen mein Kashish ko dekh ke maano uske pairon taale zameen khisak jaati hai         

Kashish padi hui hai zamen par, nass kaat li, behosh

Sujal bhaag ke jaata hai paas mein

Samajh nahi aa raha kya kare...chod bhi nahi sakta aise par aise hospital le jayega to faltu mein police case etc banega

He calls his friend who is a doctor

Wo aata hai...he checks he. Kehta hai hospital le jaana hi hoga

Le jaata hai hospital mein

Dost says don'tworry police ka panga nahi hoga I will take care

Kashish ki ankh khulti hai next day

Sujal saamne khada hai

He is looking at her for some explanation

Kashish Sujal ko dekh ke mooh chupa leti hai...she doesn't wanna face him

Dost kehta hai ki isko hospital mein rakhunga to panga hoga. Ghar le jaa. Take care of her and don't let her use her hand for a month

Sujal le aata hai Kashish ko ghar pe

 

 

 



Edited by storywriter - 13 November 2012 at 6:06am

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 10:47am | IP Logged
is it bit like metro kangana ranuat story???
well i like it...

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mannubhardwaj

is it bit like metro kangana ranuat story???
well i like it...
yeah...to be very honest...the starting a little inspired but its till the 1st part only...thx for liking
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 11:37am | IP Logged
hi
so neelu my friend have started a new story
the story seems to be very refreshing with a modern touch into it
kashish who is always a becchari type is unlike here she is independent but her bossh what the hell he is anyways thank good sujal saves her from dying and i hope he takes good cares of her
plz cont soon and pm me me

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
awesome part cont soon.

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
NICE START
PLZZ CONTINUE SOON

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 10:47pm | IP Logged

Good to see a new FF

More good to have SK as neighbours atleast no tension of kaise milenge kab milenge…

Felt bad for kashish….boss is such a moron….hope kashish teaches him a lesson instead of hurting herself…

Wonder how will SK will fall in love...coz with a neighbour like sujal its obvious to fall in love TongueTongue 

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 3:53am | IP Logged
Lovely name...part one and so many things happened already?
nice concept...Kash's character is totally different.
One thing i must say is that while reading the chapter i felt as if I'm on a jet planeROFL the story is going at a rocket speed...but hey I'm not complaining!!
I'm sure it's gonna be a great story n I know I'll have fun reading it.
Update soon.

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