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OS:What the!!Unbelievable!! (18+ HOT battameze OS) (Page 13)

--Amy-- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 30 April 2012
Posts: 18766

Posted: 23 July 2012 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
that was hot!!!but the ending was hilariousLOL
She absolutely have no manners at all...She came without knocking...LOL
I loved this OS...
very well written...
thanks for the pm...

-Viji- IF-Dazzler

Joined: 02 January 2012
Posts: 4134

Posted: 23 July 2012 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
Hot oneEmbarrassedEmbarrassedand hillarious tooLOL..was shocked wen i read chote...had the same expressionShockedas khushiROFLluvd it
--peehu-- IF-Sizzlerz

BollyCurry Assistant Writer
Joined: 13 February 2010
Posts: 22390

Posted: 23 July 2012 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
what the! Unbelievable ROFL
That was amazingly hot!
chavvi16 IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 07 October 2011
Posts: 30355

Posted: 23 July 2012 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
are you kidding me whats wrong with anji dont you know if a couple is married you should knock before you enter the room so you dont see something like you saw
and arnie why on earth didnt you lock the door you idiot
man that was hilarious
cheers for pm
tvbuf IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 06 March 2012
Posts: 13142

Posted: 23 July 2012 at 2:27pm | IP Logged
Awesome hot OS.

Loved it how Arnav gave Khushi a kiss on her Omouth.

Loved it that he was going to go yell at Anjali.

Hope he gives her a good dressing down. Such a harsh one that never even looks in the direction of Arshi's room again.

Shameleds idiot !!!
Just_Love Senior Member

Joined: 19 June 2012
Posts: 265

Posted: 23 July 2012 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
Amazing job!
-Yuks- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 03 June 2006
Posts: 11027

Posted: 23 July 2012 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
Anjali has walked randomly into their bedroom before as well

Remember the cockroach episode where Khushi threatens to create a ruckus and starts screaming and Anjali rushes in
What if they had been... *clears throat*Embarrassed

She needs to learn that her Chote needs practise making his own little chote nowLOL

Great OS!
star_fan1 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 18 March 2012
Posts: 9130

Posted: 23 July 2012 at 3:06pm | IP Logged
loved it

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