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||KR FF|| Heart, Strike Back (Ch 1-Pg 48 Oct 7) (Page 48)

AwesomeSauce. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 9:18am | IP Logged

Thanks so much for reading my fan fic and commenting.  I'm glad you're liking it. I'm adding the next part please do let me know what you think. : )


Chapter One

It was morning time. Kria woke up with a smile paying on her lips. It was after a long time, she got such a beautiful sleep. The last time she had one was when she was with him. Thinking about him brought a frown a smile on her face. Trying to block her thoughts about him, she got up from the bed and went towards the kitchen. Making herself a coffee, she made her way towards the patio. Placing herself on the floor she couldn't stop the memories from coming back to her.

It was a normal day just like any other day. The kids were in their bed and she was reciting their bedtime story. After making sure, she went towards her room. Picking up her she checked for messages. Seven missed call. Seeing the name there, a smile crept on her face. She was lost in her thoughts when her cell phone rang again. The phone's screen identified the caller. Her boyfriend, Alex. Wonderful.

'Hi, Alex,' she whispered.

No squeaks emanated from the bedroom down the hall and she sank gratefully onto the bed. The children were deep in sleep. They wouldn't wake up for a while now.



'Why are you whispering?'

'I've just got the twins to sleep.'

'Oh, right.' Alex gave an audible sigh. 'How are they coping this week?'

'A little better.'

'That's great.'

Great wasn't quite the word Kria would have chosen to describe the small improvement in the children's progress, but of course she wouldn't reproach Alex. He'd given her fabulous support during the funeral and its aftermath.

'I got your message,' he said.

'Right. Thanks for calling back.' Kria took a moment to relax into the pillows and she deliberately lightened her tone. 'So, what do you think? Can you wangle a leave pass for this weekend?'

Kria crossed her fingers as she waited for his answer. Please come, Alex. I need you.

Alex's family owned the largest business enterprise in Paris and his dad's health wasn't the best, so the responsibility of running the enterprise had fallen squarely on Alex's shoulders.

So, yes - it was asking a lot to expect him to get away to London again so soon. Last month, after Kria's cousin Taani's sudden and tragic death, he'd taken almost a whole week off to be with her and to help with the children.

That was pretty amazing, actually. Kria had been touched and surprised. Since she'd moved away from Paris to study in London, she'd come to accept that if she wanted to see her boyfriend it was up to her to make the effort. She'd been prepared to be the one who did all the travelling. Even so, she'd only been able to see Alex a handful of times in this past year.

If he came this weekend, she would make sure they had time alone together. She and Alex had been an item since high school, almost six years. Very soon now, she would be finished with her studies, Neha and Nilesh would be settled in New York with their father, and she was looking forward to going home to Paris to settle down with Alex.

She could so easily picture their lives together - Alex with his business, while she worked in the dance institute nearby, the two of them balancing their day jobs with their life at home, and eventually, with a family of their own - bronze haired children like their dad.

Kria was very happy with that picture, and thinking about her boyfriend always made her feel cosy and safe.

Admittedly, most girls might not place cosiness and safety high on their wish-list when it came to boyfriends or future husbands, but Kria wasn't looking for a guy who spelled excitement and passion. Her cousin Taani, the twins' mother, had taken that risk and the result had been divorce and heartbreak.

'I don't know if I can get away this weekend,' Alex said suddenly.

Kria suppressed a sigh. 'I do understand, honey, but ''

'Do you?' His voice bristled with unexpected impatience. 'Because I don't understand why you're complicating this, Kria. The children's father is on his way at last, so why do you need me? Why do you need my help if he's going to be there too?'

'I wanted your opinion. I have to hand the children over to him.'

'Of course you do. He's their father.'

'Yes '' Kria winced. 'But I thought another man could sense if Reyaansh's ' you know ' if he's OK.' After all, Taani had run away from this New York career-oriented man, although admittedly, her cousin had never said a bad word against her ex.

'Kria, even if I didn't like the man, there's nothing I could do about it.'

'I guess '' She suppressed a sigh. Thing was, she needed to be calm and composed when she talked with Reyaansh about his children, and she would have liked a little back up from Alex. She needed to explain to Reyaansh about Neha and Nilesh's schooling needs, their eating habits, their fears'

The twins had been at home on the day Taani had collapsed, and it was six year old Nilesh who'd courageously dialled 911. They hadn't only lost their mommy; they'd suffered a terrible trauma. Neha's nightmares were truly terrifying.

Kria needed to explain all this to their estranged father, but it would be so much easier if her steady and reliable boyfriend was there as well. As a buffer. An anchor. A safety net.

'Actually, Kria, I can't come this weekend.'

The sudden nervousness in Alex's voice penetrated the whirl of Kria's thoughts.

Why was he nervous? Alex was never nervous. Was something wrong?

'There's ' um ' there's something I should tell you,' he said.

'What is it?'

'It's really hard to explain. I ' I don't know how to say this, but ''

Kria's insides froze and she was gripped by a terrible deer-in-the-headlights fear.

Alex cleared his throat.

She forced herself to ask, 'Alex, what's the matter?'

'I didn't want to tell you before ' because of Taani and everything ''

'Tell me what?' she almost screamed. He was scaring her.

Alex cleared his throat again.

Kria gripped the phone tighter, squeezed her eyes to hold back threatening tears.

Was Alex trying to break up with her?

Like someone drowning, her mind flashed back through precious memories. The school dance when they'd first met. Alex helping her with algebra homework at the big scrubbed table in her mother's cosy kitchen. The familiar, comfortable texture of his lips. The ruby heart locket he'd given her on Valentine's Day three years ago. The cosy sense of safety that she'd always felt with him.

Now, suffocating panic filled her throat.

She couldn't bear to think about losing him, especially not when she'd just lost Taani. Fear pulled tight knots in her stomach.

Alex said, 'You have to agree it's not really working for us.'

'What do you mean?' she bleated.

'We only see each other a few times a year.'

'But I've almost finished my studies.' Her voice was shrill now. Pleading. 'I'll soon be home for good and we can''

'I'm so sorry, Kria. You see, the thing is'I'I've met someone else.'

And the world came crashing down on her.

Without listening anything else from him, she hung up the phone and locked herself in the washroom.


Thinking about it didn't help her. A tear escaped her eyes. She wiped it away and looked at the watch. It was time to wake the kids up. She got up and went towards the kids' room.



PS: So here it is. Please leave your comments. I'm unsure of this part so please let me know what you thought. Enjoy your weekend! : )

PPS: This update is for my spamming queens aka Shenz di, Mish, Sachiarsha, Cookie, K and Kuhu di! Vaishu di this one's for you as well for the spamming you did at the end! ;) You guys seriously rock! :D

PPPS: Important note regarding PMsIf anyone wants a PM for any of my works, then you all need to add the Id IceCrystals. (the dot is there as well.) to your buddy list. I would accept your request only if you comment on my works regularly. So you'll have to do three things. Mention in your comments that you want a PM, send a buddy request to the above mentioned Id and be a regular and responsive reader.

PPPS: This is a long update. When compared with the others. Because I am late in updating. Super late. Sorry people but my exams were on and they start again this 15th. So don't expect such long updates in future also. I might give long updates but according to my schedule. Embarrassed

PPPS: I'll probably update Ever After next (if the demand is completed of course). This one will be updated around page 65. Till then take care. Adios!


Lots of Love

Edited by Aquilia_Aditi - 26 October 2012 at 10:03am

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-Vaish- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 9:19am | IP Logged
okay so mereko toh yeh chindi sized update laga...

sacchi saying...

and tu toh mereko hamesha dhoka deti hai...

kuch to karvati...

breakup karvaya... par aur kuch bhi nhi...

yeh toh sarasar anyaay hai mere saath...

iske liye main kab se waitig...

main boling next week u r gonna update it again...

no nothings...

so loved the update...

i learnt a new word from it...Big smile

so kria all alone... poor her...

long distance relations never work...

have seen such a case...

chalo acchi baat hai work nhi kiya coz we wudn't get kriyansh...

chalo can we expect kria shifting to NY????

loved it...

and haan me first me first

Edited by kriyansh24 - 07 October 2012 at 9:43am

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Born2Dance IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 9:21am | IP Logged

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AwesomeSauce. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Updated! Embarrassed

PMs later! Tongue

Edited by Aquilia_Aditi - 07 October 2012 at 9:33am
-Vaish- IF-Stunnerz

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yogini64 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
Aditi darls . . . . U rock Party
meko nhi pata tha ki kriya ka bf tha . . . . . . Vaise bhi ye angrez tha. . . . Breakup ho gya achha hai LOL
meri pyari kriya ka dil tod diya . . . . . Cry
when she was expecting his words & remembering their past moments . . . . . Dat was really painful Pinch
he met some1else . . . . . . & her world is shattered... Stern Smile
these long distance relationships does'nt works for all Ermm
don't cry . . . . . Rey's coming for u Big smile

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Pihu.k11 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 3:09pm | IP Logged
Aditi.. U call it a long update..seriously??
Itta chotu sa tha.. Huh
Bt as always u nailed it..:)
Umm.. So rey n tani wer divorced??
Seems dat rey is business oriented...
Hmm.. Mera dimag chlna shuru ho gya h ab..
Wht cud b d reason for d divorce tht too aftr havin two kids???

N n dat Alex!! D time kriya needed him d most.. He left her!!
Here kriya was dreamin abt her life wid Alex n thr he was plannin to dump her..
I tell u these boys.. Aghhh!!
Its not dat long distance do not works.. Its jus u ought to hav dat trust n dat understandin.. U know!!
Kriya.. Alex doesnt worth u!!
Dun wry.. Reyansh h na ;)
Bt rey kriya se dur kyn bhaagta h???
Cud kriya b d reason behind d divorce.. Nai nai bt who knows!!
Hmm.. So waitin fr d nxt part :)
N ur exams r startin again.. I tell u these schools.. Aghhh!!
Do update soon !!
Kriya rey ka meeting hoga.. Haye!

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only_kriyansh IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 5:05am | IP Logged
Dnt worry kria rey is comin Embarrassed
Updte sn n plz pm me...

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