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Dark Secret


99 likes and 6 pages commnt on my first maaneetOs : Tere liye    made me write this new os Dark secret , 

  • Prologue :



A girl came out from the washroom and her eyes fall on the window she got scared remembering last night incident ..she gulp hard ..her face was sweating badly ..her thraot went dry '.


She shocked as someone put his hand on her soulder ..she took a relif breath showing her husband besides her ..MAAN' she hugged him tight and he held her in protactive manner


She was breathing heavily ..her heart beats are raised showing the same and most dangourus sight from the window where her husband only gave a smirk


A man was flying in the air , his hair is white so was his eyes 'there are no eyeballs in his eyes '. his face is totally blace ' his mouth was spitting fire 'he was floating in the air..he saw a flashes of it

His look can shiver anyone though it can shiver a stone hearted person


  • har bar jo dikhta he vo hota nahi aur jo hota he vo dikhta nahi aur use hi to Dark secret kehte he
  • kuch raaz vaqt aane par hi khulne cahhiye , it's better to keep it unfold


So I think it's enough for prologue , now come on tell me how u find it ?? plz give me commnt except awesome , lovely , scary ,loved it etc..etc..

Well I m not saying that it's a ghost story as being writer all want to try different thing , and I just want the same , till this time I wrote a stories which are fun loving stories , yup weak hearten people can read but on their own risk

I wish I get as much love asSHART :Rang gaye tere rang me 


I will continue this IF i got more resonce other wise i  ll stop this right away Cry


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Edited by Rang_ - 22 January 2013 at 11:47pm

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 5:25am | IP Logged
well interesting OS dear do continue and prologue is so interesting and dont worry i do love ghost stories and am huge fan of shh phir koi hai serial...love to see its stories everytime...cont soon dearSmile


OMG me is d firstShocked


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Originally posted by geetsrir.maan

well interesting OS dear do continue and prologue is so interesting and dont worry i do love ghost stories and am huge fan of shh phir koi hai serial...love to see its stories everytime...cont soon dearSmile


OMG me is d firstShocked


Wink thank u so much dear i was hell nervous and ur commnt made me relexHug


Edited by Rang_ - 23 July 2012 at 5:27am

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CONGRATS FOR NEW FF
that too scary n different
waiting for the story to proceed

ha ha..this may suit now...

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awesome prologue 

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