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A poem: Bazaar mein hua neelaam, ek haseen khwaab (Page 4)

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 7:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sarah_kelly

i don't have words to express!!!!!!

Tamashaa dekh rahen hain, namard yahan tamaam,

Ruswa ho rahi Draupadi, Sita ho rahi badnaam;

Jab miloge apne khuda se, Kya doge jawaab?

Ki ho raha tha neelam, koi haseen khwaab?

loved these lines!!!!!!!


Thanks GayuHug
That u took time to let me know which lines you liked have expressed a lot sweetsBig smile

I was a bit wary at using deity names but since i used them as metaphor for the women i guess i saved my skin.

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 8:11am | IP Logged
OMG, this was aweosmeClap! Cant explain how I fell after reading it, im speechless ,u r really a gifted writer!

The last two lines brought tears in my eyes. loved it

Jab miloge apne khuda se, Kya doge jawaab?

Ki ho raha tha neelam, koi haseen khwaab?





Edited by chitra_rao - 24 July 2012 at 8:10am

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 8:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chitra_rao

OMG, this was aweosmeClap! Cant explain how I fell after reading it, im speechless ,u r really a gifted writer!

The last two lines brought tears in my eyes. loved it

Jab miloge apne khuda se, Kya doge jawaab?

Ki ho raha tha neelam, koi haseen khwaab?




Thanks Chitra Hug
For letting me know that it touched you... Big smile
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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 9:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by siddhi209

Omg wow. Mashallah you are a very talented writer. This one touched my heart. Amazing how words can be so powerful, almost had me in tears. Beautiful Clap


Thanks Siddhi Hug

As my words touched Ur heart... so did Ur comment dear Big smile
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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tweetie19

Sneha, you're an amazing writer...the words touched my heart...hats off to u... 


Glad to know that it had the desired effect on u tweetie19 Hug

tweetie19...Is that what they call u here dear or they address u with Ur name?
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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 10:26am | IP Logged
Clap Amazing Star Unfortunately, true. Beautifully put down in words. Loved it. As beautiful , truthful and perfect as it can be...Keep it up Thumbs Up

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Monu_Deewani

Clap Amazing Star Unfortunately, true. Beautifully put down in words. Loved it. As beautiful , truthful and perfect as it can be...Keep it up Thumbs Up


Thanks Shaili dear Hug

For taking the time to read and comment...

Sadly...Its just the tip of the iceberg... so many horrendous acts of domestic violence go unnoticed or rather underwrapsOuch

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