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A poem: Bazaar mein hua neelaam, ek haseen khwaab

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Forced into flesh trade, woman kills self

New delhi, Apr 16, 2012, DHNS :

Wife pours kerosene, sets herself ablaze

A 40-year-old woman, Shahzadi committed suicide by pouring kerosene and then setting herself on fire at her residence in Khajoori Khas in north east Delhi on Sunday after her husband coerced her into flesh trade.

(The above article is courtesy Deccan Herald newspaper' and the thoughts that follow below are my impressions of the same.)

Alarming isn't it' A piece of news for a few who glance over the crime page while having their sip of morning tea' It may be a mere statistical number for a few...

But beneath all this lies a stark truth' another heinous face of domestic violence stares back at us, mockingly.

Friends,

The poem below may contain a few words that may sound harsh' but the use of the same has been done to provide the impetus that the article had on me' The use of the names of the deity from the epics stands as a metaphor to the female population and I have no intention to hurt anyone's belief or feelings (being God loving myself)' Since it is a compilation of Hindi and Urdu words I have translated a few of them at the end of the poem to the best of my knowledge.

 

This poem goes out to all those Shahzadis who yearn to break free' May God be with them.

 

 

Bazaar mein hua neelaam, ek haseen khwaab

 

Bazaar mein hua neelaam, ek haseen khwaab,

Haivaaniyat ki nazoron mein, bas ek shabaab;

Bazaar mein neelaam hua, phir ek haseen khwaab...

***

Havas ke andheron se, hui main ru-ba-ru,

Rondhi hui padi hai ab, meri aabaroo;

Aaine mein aks hai koi, jo milta hai hu-ba-hu,

Use na khushi ki tamanna, na mujhe jeene ki aarzoo...

***

Bazaar mein hua neelaam, ek haseen khwaab,

Zindagi ke pyaale mein, gham ka sharaab;

Bazaar mein neelaam hua, phir ek haseen khwaab...

***

Bematlab sa lagta hai, yeh dhai aakhad ka pyaar,

Pal bhar ka hai gulshan, umr bhar intezaar;

Umeed ki dehleez se, lauti hoon baar baar,

Wo maanjhi na mila jo le chale, us kinare paar...

***

Bazaar mein hua neelaam, ek haseen khwaab,

Zakhmi hai rooh meri, siskiyaan behisaab;

Bazaar mein neelaam hua phir ek haseen khwaab...

***

Kisi aur ko na de, tadkeer yun sazaa,

Gunah kisi aur ka, zindagi mujhse khafa;

Us khuda se meri, ek yehi hai ilteja,

Woh mera bachpan lauta de, sirf ek dafa...

***

Bazaar mein hua neelaam, ek haseen khwaab,

Woh khada gunehgaar mera, bebaak benakaab;

Bazaar mein neelaam hua, phir ek haseen khwaab...

***

Tamashaa dekh rahen hain, namard yahan tamaam,

Ruswa ho rahi Draupadi, Sita ho rahi badnaam;

Jab miloge apne khuda se, Kya doge jawaab?

Ki ho raha tha neelam, koi haseen khwaab?

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Word help

Neelaam=Auctioned;  Shabaab= Youth;  Ru-ba-ru= Face to face;  Aks= Reflection; Aakhad= Word;  Dehleez= Entrance;  Maanjhi= Boatman;  Ilteja= Plea;  Bebaak=Fearless;  Ruswa= Dishonour.


Please leave your impressions on the issue.

 

 

 

 



Edited by The_Inner_Voice - 23 July 2012 at 4:13am

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 4:22am | IP Logged
lved ur poem..
it's wonderful & v.touching..as it always is...
u hv wonderful writing skills and u express ur views to their fullest using beautiful words.You've got talent keep it up...!Thumbs Up


Edited by stephenie - 23 July 2012 at 4:22am

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 4:26am | IP Logged
This gave me goosebumps! Really! Dil se nikli, dil pe lagi. Hats off! You have some real talent! Amazing poem.

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 4:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by stephenie

lved ur poem..
it's wonderful & v.touching..as it always is...
u hv wonderful writing skills and u express ur views to their fullest using beautiful words.You've got talent keep it up...!Thumbs Up


Thanks stephenieHug

Glad to know that it touched you... and that you let me know the same Big smile
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 4:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Mais-

This gave me goosebumps! Really! Dil se nikli, dil pe lagi. Hats off! You have some real talent! Amazing poem.


Thanks Mais Hug

For letting me know that it had the desired effect... Smile
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 4:44am | IP Logged
lovely poem ... liked it ...  Smile

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 4:50am | IP Logged
beautiful one, sneha..
hatts of darling, u r amazing...
plss write more.Thumbs Up

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 4:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dhruti

lovely poem ... liked it ...  Smile


Thanks DhrutiHug
For liking the poem and commenting too Big smile

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