FF: Forever & Alwayz|Chapter 1 pg 4| - Page 5

This content was originally posted by: shehroon_riaz

Just imagine if its ARNAV - haaye. That'll be so cool though I think it's too quick for him to make his 'dhamaakedar' entry. Hopefully it is 😉
Loved the first part. The bit where Khushi hit the guy on the head was totally expected. I knew it before I even read it.
This part was a bit short so I can't exactly say loads about it but will say that you write amazingly (no joke). Each sentence is put together wonderfully. Plus, I could actually imagine everything and hope this will come in handy when there are Arhi scenes *wink wink* 😆 --- I'm sure you know what I meant there.

Anyhows, thanks for the PM and am waiting for the next now. Finally the mystery will be revealed 😊

ShehroonRiaz

This content was originally posted by: massu91

nyc update..plzz make it longer...thankxx for d pm

This content was originally posted by: ashred12

interesting start...

This content was originally posted by: mariam42

Just discovered ur FF and fell in love!

Would love to read more so have sent a buddy request!

Please do send me updates!

Mariam x

This content was originally posted by: --SKALOVE--

very nicely written plz continue and plz pm me

This content was originally posted by: meniranjana00

Really nice .. Pls pm me wen u update.. Pls

This content was originally posted by: -EndlessSmile-

Hey Nahi! 🤗 
wow u r writing FF on ArHi!!u didnt tell me haan!!? Gandi Dost! lol...
its Amazing!the story concept and the name is really interesting!next time pm me ok whenever u update!Best of Luck & Luv yaah...! =)

This content was originally posted by: hrideyy

It was nice plss update soon and thanss for pm