It is unfortunate that i did not come across this story before..
But luckily for me..it was good...cos i got to read all 16 parts in one go!!
You brought back the office magic!! Its an awesome storyline...i always thought the office setup has so much scope and so many possibilities..but it was never explored sufficiently in the serial...
I absolutely love the concept of their online chatting without her knowing its asr...i love the way you made asr acknowledge (in fact, even admire) her skills and her efficiency, albeit grudgingly...
I especially adore the devil n angel voices inside arnav's head...really naughty and giving him a dose of rality from time to time...loved it!!
Please keep writing and enthralling us...this tale is so entertaining and so much fun to read!!
Love
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