Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


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She was lost in that smile. She sat beside him, looking at him, admiring his smile…the twinkle in his eyes…even she smiled seeing him happy. She felt like she had lived a life time whenever she saw that smile on his face! She didn't need anything more.. she was happy with the small small things she did for him because he loved it..he was happy!

Later Maan dropped her home and headed towards KM. he was happy that geet paid him a visit. Strangely he didn't miss Anisha… well she didn't let him miss and he accepted the fact.

He lay on his bed, looking at Anisha's pic on his cell.

Maan: tum nahi ho..its only a week and aisa lag raha hain jaise barson ho gaye tummhe dekhe hue. Aur pata hain, mein tummhe miss bhi nahi karta…. Kyunki tum yahan mere liye ek bak-bak machine jo chodkar gayi ho…geet.. kabhi kabhi lagta hain wo mujhse zyada tumhari best friend hain.. din bhar itna bolti hai ki kuch sochne ka mauka hi nahi deti..

He turned around, changing sides, smiling! His eyes going heavy with sleep…

"tum bas jaldi se wapis aa jao..geet ne bataya tumhare bare mein..and I want to make it big this time!"

He kept the phone near his heart and slept off. As they say, distance makes love stronger, so was with Maan. True that geet always kept his mind busy with one thing or the other …but when she wasn't around, he'd happily lose himself in her memories, making him realize how much he loves her! he just wanted to hug her tight and scream out his love for her.


Geet didn't feel like touching her guitar today. She wanted to dance…jump around.. she was sooo happy. Maan's smiling face flashed in front of her eyes..she just couldn't hold back the happiness within her.. she felt tickled in her abdomen thinking of how Maan had carried her the other day..a tinge of redness settled on her cheeks. She played a song on her music system!

Leja leja..mehki raat mein

Churake saare ran leja..

Raati raati mein bheegoon saath mein

Tu aise mulakat de ja…

She twirled around with the music, feleing the words… she had actually forgotten about Anisha for a moment. She was loving this whole new feel.

…nimuiyen mann maila..

mann maila kya karna hai aisa…

na bhaye piya ko..

tann gora kya karna..hai aisa….

She made a baby face with the lyrics and laughed at her own self. Jasmeet was back and heard music from Geet's room. She went and peeped in only to smile. Her little doll was lost in her own world…dancing to the rhythm, making cute faces. She had never seen geet  like that for years now… and she was not going to miss the chance either. She opened the door a bit wider and leaned against the door frame, watching her angel dance cutely.

Geet was so lost in her own world that she had actually forgotten to lock the door. She turned around when her eyes fell on Jasmeet, smiling at her. oh god, she was embarrassed big time being caught like that. she immediately looked away and turned off the music system!!!!

Jasmeet: oyee.. why did you stop? I was seeing my doll this happy after so long…

Geet twisted her lips, "mamma...its bad manners to peep into other's room like that!"

Jasmeet laughed, "ab bata bhi de..itni khushi kis baat ki.."

There was an instant smile on geet's face which didn't go unnoticed by Jasmeet.

Geet; ohh.. kuch nahi mamma bas aise hi..

Jasmeet arched her brows at her!

Geet rolled her eyes, 'uff mamma.. abhi aap jao….am feeling very sleepy, bye!"

She thumped on her bed and pretended to sleep. Jasmeet shook her head and walked out of the room, closing the door. Geet ipened her eyes and sighed in relief seeing Jasmeet gone. She walked to her balcony and stood there…looking at the sky. It was cloudy…probably going to rain. A cold breeze played naughtily with her silky locks. She was suddenly reminded of the dream she had that day.. she smiled feeling butterflies in her tummy. She could feel herself warming up. Her cell beeped. It was a weird number.

Geet: hello?

She heard a very sweet yet a familiar tone, "hi geet..kaisi hain aap?"

She jumped in excitement recognizing the voice.

Geet; oh my god diii…am good! Aap batao…how are you? Where are you? Waapis ka baa rahi ho? Mein aapko kitna miss karti hoon pata hain…

Anisha smiled, "hum theek hain geet..hum bhi aapko bahut miss karte hain.."

They had their usual chit-chat when Anisha asked, "geet..maan aksie hain?"

Geet (naughtily): ohhhooo…. Yaad piya ki aane lagi..haiye bheegi bheegi raaton mein…

Anisha blushed and played with her curls, "geet..aap na..bahut shararti hain.."

Geet: wo tho mein hoon.. aur Maan.. bechara aapki yaad mein devdas ban gaya hain… i have to eat his head 24/7 just to make sure he doesn't sulk in his paro's memories..

Anisha couldn't stop laughing at her description. But her condition was no better than Maan's! staying away from him had made her realize her longing for him. Her days were incomplete and nights were sleepless without him! She knew he loved her…she was pained to hear about him..a nd probably thanked geet for being there for him. She trusted her more than anyone else.

"geet…" her voice went low and soft. Geet felt the change in her voice and listened to her carefully.

"hume pata hain..aap 'humare Maan' ka bahut ache se khayal rakhengi…"

Geet felt something crack within her once again… not realizing a bit that it was her own heart developing cracks!

'humare Maan..' rang in her head. The crack was painful;. Before she could think anything further, Anisha's voice caught her attention, "we trust you geet… we know you'll never let him feel low.."

Geet took a deep breath in, trying to avoid the feel and smiled, "di..relax.. mein rakhungi uska khayal.. bas aap aa jao aur apne dil ki baat kehdo usey.."

There was a loud thunder.

Anisha: geet..what was that sound?

Geet looked out to her balcony…she has suddenly gone silent. Lightening struck the sky and the winds turned violent.

Geet; umm… its probably going to rain..

Anisha (excited): wow geet… we love the rain..

Geet kept looking out, absentmindedly, "I….don' the rain.."

Anisha sensed something wrong. Geet was never this quiet,

Anisha: okay? Aap pareshaan hain kya? Hume bataiye kya baat hain…

Geet snapped, "na..nahi  am fine.. just thinking something.."

Anisha was convinced, "umm...pata hain we love getting wet in the rain.." she felt her heart flutter thinking of her mann enjoying  the rain and Maan…she blushed!

Geet: umm.. mujhe baarish mein bheegna pasand nahi…kitna dirty ho jata hain..

Anisha: hume bhi baarish mein bheegna pasand nahi tha… parhumari zindagi mein Maan ke aane ke baad jaise sab kuch badal gaya hao..har napasand cheez pyaari lagne lagi hain..

Geet was distracted, "acha..aisa bhi hota hai kya pyaar mein? Mujhe laga aisa sirf paagalon ke saath hota hain.." she burst out laughing.

Anisha made a baby face, "aap humara mazak bana rahi hain na..rukiye..ek din jab aapko kisi se pyaar hum ye baat aapse kahenge.."

Geet: aap bas waapis aa jao jaldi se.. acha aapne Maan se baat ki?

Anisha: umm nahi… bas jaa jo rahe the! Wanted to speak to you first!

Geet was touched to see Anisha's trust on her and she'd never ever let her down. They hung up after something and geet stood in her balcony. It had started drizzling. She looked at the rain for a while and out her hand out. Some water got collected in her palm. She splashed it on her face, feeling the droplets kiss her skim. The moment she closed her eyes..she could see Maan…a smile played on her lips. He looked really handsome in his formals…no wonder se was dumbstruck.

Her phone rang again and she ran inside taking the call, closing all the doors and windows. She was super thrilled about the news she got. Oh my… she had to tell Maan immediately. She dialed his number right after the call. It came busy. She guessed he must be busy with Anisha. She smiled and let it go. She was just so excited to call him up and tell him about the contest her band has participated in. she waited for sometime biting her nails, pacing up and down her room. She called up again but it was busy. She tried again after sometime…her excitement was slowly dying out. She gave up after repeated failures and fell on her bed sighing sadly. She wanted to tell him 1st… they will be representing their college…tell him every little detail of it but he was too busy perhaps. She didn't even feel like speaking to anyone else at the moment and tried to sleep. Anisha's words kept ringing in her mind.. it was almost after an hour her cell beeped with Maan's name flashing on it. She was slowly dozing off when she saw his call and answered it. There was no more excitement in her.

Maan: geet..tune call kiya tha? Wo Anisha ka call aaya tha so I couldn't take you call..

He sounded so happy. And who would understand his happiness more than her? she was happy for him.. that was one great thing. She slowly narrated her band being shortlisted and that they had to go to the allotted venues doe rehearsals and futher rounds of competition. Maan was so happy to hear that.

Maan: wow geet.. kal se hain na teri rehearsals?

Geet: hmm..

Maan: theek hain.. be ready I'll drop you there..mujhe office bhi tho jaana hain. so I'll pick you from your place….

She felt her heart come alive again in the past 1 hour…like it started beating again for her.. she smiled feeling much better!

The next day, Maan honked the car in front of her mansion. She came out running holding her guitar, shouting, "aa rahi hoon baba.. whats the hurry?"

She jumped into the car and drove. She noticed he looked   different. Her eyes popped out realizing him wearing the black see-through shirt and demins that she had bought for him. There was no end to her happiness…she never thouthgt he'd wear it and neither did she expect herself to be so happy just because he wore it.

By the time they reached the venue, he had put on his sunglasses! Last night's rain had paved way for a bright sunny day. He escorted her to the hall where her band members awaited. Geet giggled hearing girls gasp and faint with the killer look of Maan—sunglasses, black see-though shirt fitting perfectly over his well-toned body, his fitting jeans , boots and that attitude..uufff!!! she felt so proud of herself looking at those desperate girls giving her evil looks. At 1st she wondered why they were looking angrily at her. she looked up at him….he maintained a straight face…but she felt his hand go round her waist and hold her close!,…she almost forgot to breathe… oh this is why the girls were behaving like that!!! she felt herself shiver with that touch… and his looks.. she could just keep on looking at him 24/7 without even blinking her lashes.

She came back to her senses when she felt him withdrawing his hand from her waist. She didn't like it—her heart screamed not to let go.

Maan; when you are done, call me! I'll pick you up if am down with my office thing…

She could do nothing but squeak a "umm". His voice was so demanding… she never knew this Maan in her entire lifetime. And what was in this man.. the more she was witnessing his new side.. the more she was losing herself in him!

Her band members teased her.. but she shut them up saying they are best friends from childhood and there was nothing of that sort between them. But she every time they teased her… she would turn red, just hearing his name!!

the days passed really fast. She was awed by Maan..he dropped her and picked her up everyday from her rehearsals! She never asked him to.. he did it of his own and she'd get happy with this much only! Even his smallest gesture of affection  made her heart pound in anticipation. She actually forgotten about Anisha altogether…lost in her own world. She wanted to learn driving a car..but she didn't want to ask Maan. He was keeping busy in office but still made a point to pick her up and drop her down at her rehearsals and vice versa. He was all tired at the end of the day with all the college assignments dumped on his head!

She decided to ask Aryan for it. He agreed readily. Oh how could he miss the chance to see his angel early morning..making his day… her bright smiling face and the scent of her shampoo would make him go insane!!! He knew about her rehearsal timings so they decided to go early morning. Maan would be there at her place by 9:30.

That morning, geet finished with her driving lesson. Aryan was sitting beside her, lost in her.

Geet: time kya ho raha hain Aryan?

Aryan checked his watch, "8:30… must say you are learning fast geet.."

She jumped, "oh my god… itna late!! Aryan.. waapis drop kardo please.. aaj tho pakka late ho jaungi.."

They switched seats and Aryan came to the steering. As they drove geet kept checking the time again and again impatiently. Aryan noticed that.

Ayran; relax geet.. hum time se tumhare ghar pahunch jayenge…

Geet: jaldi aryan….today we have to qualify in the quarter finals..

Aryan mocked, "ab itna rehearse mat karo geet… 1st aa jaogi.."

Geet: ha ha very funny! I don't like coming second..mujhe har cheez mein 1st hona acha lagta hain… mujhe kisi ki 2nd banna raas nahi!!!!"


next: anisha is back

Prev: PART 14




Edited by kawaii_geet - 30 July 2012 at 12:35am

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 12:20am | IP Logged
Geet doesn't realise that she is falling for maan...
Awesome update...
continue soon...

Edited by reachsky2011 - 27 July 2012 at 12:30am

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 12:40am | IP Logged
without realising love happening maan anisha geet don't like 2nd hope she never will be second for maan

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 12:40am | IP Logged
part 14
awesome part...
Prem's line made to ROFL...
ha ha ha...
where do u get these line Aishu sweetu baby?
looks like Geet is soon gonna fall for Maan and the way shes getting happy by just seeing him smile is making to gush but also worry for her...

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 12:41am | IP Logged
OMG..She is not realizing she is falling head over heels for Maan..!!

Now that Anisha is going to be back...the distance will make her realize her love for Maan..she'll be heartbroken yaar..

Update soon...

Can't wait for the next part..!!

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 12:44am | IP Logged
awesome update 
loved it 
yaar i dont know what to say why maan is loving anishaAngry i dont like it Cry

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