congrats dear on the new thread
mera bacha udaas hai with response...don't be dear. It is a fab story and I am sure u must have thought of some great and emotional plot...there are many shades to love and yours seem quite unique...
now coming to the update
I loved it completely. Maan is missing Anisha and Geet understands him so well...uske dil ki har baat samajh jaati hai...bina kahe sab sunai deta hai
I loved her senstivity. And also the way you potrayed by song sequence that nothing is more loving than his hapiness for her. Uski khushi ke liye apna gam bhi use yaad nahi rehta. That is why she is so engrossed in his love story with Anisha that her own feelings also are not visible to her...us ki khushi se zaydaa important uske liye kuch hai hi nahi
I think Daadima may have read her face more accurately than she herself has done...yeh kaise khushi aur chamak hai uske face par, shayad she herself hasn't realsie but daadima did. Don't know what twist that will bring so waiting patiently for more.