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Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon

my first OS

henamani IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 11:46pm | IP Logged

When I first joined the Forum, all I was interested in were the news and the spoilers bc I'm crazy abt the show and could not wait until the episode was aired to enjoy my Arshi.

Then I read some of the OS posted and I really enjoyed them. This is my first attempt at one so just let me know whether u guys like it and whether I should continue

This is after Shyam has been brought back into RM by Arnav as predicted by TellyBuzz. Things are not 100% bw Arshi and the contract marriage is still looming large in the background.

It is morning in the RM. Khushi is preparing for breakfast and Shyam enters

Shyam: Khushi ji what are you doing? Preparing breakfast for your Arnav ji. (Smirks)

Khushi continues to prepare breakfast without answering him (she has been told by Arnav to keep away from the snake; that he has been brought back only for his Di)

Shyam: Hum aap se kuch pooch rahe hain. Kabhi hamare liye bhi naashta bana diya karein. Hum to aap ke haath se zehar bhi kha lein.

Khushi turns off the stove and starts to leave the kitchen.

Shyam: Kahan ja rahi hain Khushi ji. Hamein apne haathon se nashta to karwa dein

Khushi leaves the kitchen but when she turns she sees Shyam tip sth in Arnav's Porridge and he has an evil smile. He says: How will you save yourself now, Mr Arnav Singh Raizada.

Khushi cannot believe her eyes. Arnavji brought his own death back, but she will not let Shyam destroy him (couldn't even think about the killing part). She will make sure that her Arnavji is safe.

She waits until Shyam has left the kitchen and then pours down all the porridge in the sink. She then takes the remaining food to the table

Arnav: Khushi porridge pass karo pls.

Khushi: Woh to nahi hai. Hum la rahe the ke hamare haath se choot gaye

Arnav: (worried) tumhe lagi to nahi

Khushi: Nahi. Hum theek hain. Aap kuch aur le lein

Bfast is over. Arnav leaves to get ready for office. Khushi goes outside to see Mohan (the driver)

Khushi: Mohan jee. Inka bag le lein

Suddenly her payal falls. When she bows down to pick it up she sees Shyam under the car with a spanner but Shyam doesn't see her

Shyam: (to himself) Khushi jee kab tak apne Arnav ji ko bachayein ge

WHAT DO U SAY GUYS

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 12:03am | IP Logged
Great os!!
Doesn't seem like a 1st!!
Your a great writer!
Please continue!!!!!!
bhaktiii IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 12:06am | IP Logged
Creepwa.. Get lost man!!!
apoorvaarnav IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 12:06am | IP Logged
very nice!! and rather exciting!
wud love to read more!SmileSmile
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 12:07am | IP Logged
NICE DEAR
LOVED ITTongue
mizzdesi Senior Member
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 12:10am | IP Logged
Nice concept plz continue and pm
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 12:12am | IP Logged
Loved it
Update soon
Paramjit Goldie
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 12:13am | IP Logged
Very nicr oplease do continue.

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