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OS: I am Your Husband, Khushi! (Page 29)

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 4:57am | IP Logged
AMAZING!! Now this is how the show should go! Honestly TRPs would be rocketing if the CVs just take a little time out to come and read your work :) 

first, I'd like to apologise...I haven't been able to comment on a lot of your work for a while now. But I'm doing my best to catch up with it all, so you'll be hearing from me :)

Back to the OS- sigh. It was perfection personified. Your Khushi and Arnav seemed to have walked straight out of the show into writing- I can picture everything you've described actually happening. this update is so much more better than the episode they actually aired- Khushi's panic and uncertainty- when she was saying goodbye to the family I felt a lump in my throat, there was such a sense of finality in it...and I was holding my breath when Buaji opened the door, half-expected Arnav to explode. But then again, Arnav has changed so much from the days when he used to be a walking-talking time-bomb ;) 
And I loved the confrontation too- the way he sort of demands privacy with her, and feels he has a right to. i felt the ground disappearing almost when she says the contract has ended, and by the end I was probably happy dancing when Arnav made clear that he has no intention of letting her go. The intensity was amazing- the way he breaks down her defences one by one...and when he shouts at her to look in his eyes when she's lying to him- classic. sheer genius. I can see this happening, it's that realistic:) I might even have cheered when he reminded her of what she'd said in the holi epi- about her heartbeat and all:P Brilliant! Go Arnav, get your wifey back!! I sooo hope this happens in the show too! And now I must stop my rambling in the hope that what I've typed so far is actually understandable :)


Edited by -doe-eyes- - 25 July 2012 at 5:01am

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 7:34am | IP Logged
This was so beautifully written Smita di !!

Just loved the way Khushi tries to run away but is unable to hide it from Arnav and does tell him the truth !! And the way he renders her answerless !!

And the love he has for her, all written extremely beautifully !1
Loved the OS

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 7:51am | IP Logged
so cute!

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Wow! Loved it. Please make it an FF please!

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 4:45pm | IP Logged
AWESOME...!!

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 5:39pm | IP Logged
wow hw nice

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 6:33pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM. Loved it. Lovely.

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