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THE DECISION... (updated pg. 3)

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 10:38pm | IP Logged

Guys this is my first ever try in my life, that I have ever dared to write sth..

I knw that we are gonna get entirely different thing on the show but.. I personally would love if sth like this follows.. its just from my imagination' so here it goes:

After the Friday episode:::

Khushi was sitting on d bed waiting for her husband.. she had decided' she knew she had to do this..

Arnav on the other hand, after knowing what his sister feels about him, is broken inside.. how could she think that her chote would ever lie to her.. that he would not care about her.. that he changed to her.. how could she.. wasn't she the one who understood him the most.. he did so much for her.. then why is she behaving like this today' where did he go wrong after all.. (all these thoughts clashing in his mind)

He enters the room.. Almost doesn't notices khushi.. Until when she suddenly says,

Khushi: "aap aagae"

Arnav: "haan"

Khushi: "di'" (she says with guilt in her voice)

Arnav doesn't say anything n jst walks to the pool'  she knew what he was going through' she could jst see the pain of his broken heart in her eyes' she got off from the bed and followed him to the pool.. he was just standing and gazing into those stars shining far on the night sky'

He was lost into those stars..  when suddenly he felt her'. She hugged him from behind.. and then just whispered those magical words "arnavji, I love you"

Surprised, he turned to face khushi.. n there she was, his angel.. standing.. looking towards him with those eyes, which only echoed her words.. he couldn't almost believe what he just heard.. he was startled' she took his hands on her and then

She continued: "haan arnavji, hum aapse bohot pyaar karte hai' intna pyaar jitna aajtak hamne kisi se nahi kiya' khudse jyada.. devi maiya se jyada.. sab se jyada' intna pyaar ki hum aapke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai.. har had paar kar sakte hein' khud ko bhi mita sakte hai..

Bohot koshish ki,, aapse pyaar naa karu.. par hum khudko rok hi nahi paaye..  aap ke diye huwe har aasu, har dard, har chot ke bawajud hum khud ko rok nahi paaye.. hame sabse jyada taklif aapne di hai.. magar hum aap hi se sabse jyada pyaar kar bethe'

Ye pyaar bhi kitna ajeeb hota hai na.. aap aur hum se bhi jyaada ajeeb.. (they both had this light smile on their faces).. hame pata tha ki ek na ek din hame pyaar hoga lekin laad governer se hoga yeh kabhi socha nahi tha.. pata hai, sab uss naye saal ki raat ki galti hai.. agar aap 12 baje hamare ghar me nahin tapakte to sayad aaj aisa kuch nahi hota"

 (an expression of shock came across arnav's face)'

Arnav: :"what.. galti???"

Khushi: "are majak kar rahe hai' aap bhi na'"

Arnav smiled but she could see the pain in his eyes' n this she just could not bare' how could she see the man she loves the most suffering like this'

Khushi: "Arnav ji.. hum aapse kuch kehna chahte hai.. mana mat karna "

Arnav: "tumhe bhala mein kabhi kisi chij ke liye mana kar sakta hun kya.. bolo"

Khushi: "waada kijiye ki aap pehle hamari puri baat sunenge.."

Arnav: "ok I promise.. bolo "

Khushi: " par aap mana nahi karsakte.. aapne waada kiya hai"

Arnav: "nahin karunga.. booloo"

Khushi: "hum jaante hai ki aap hamse bohot pyaar karte hai' lekin hum ye bhi jaante hai ki aap di se kitna pyaar karte hai.. aur woh aapke liye kyaa maaine rakhti hai.. aaj phir hamari wajah se di ko bohot chot pohchi hai.. hum jante hai ki unko laga ki aapne unse jhoot bola.. meeting ke bare mein.. "

Arnav: "but I did not lied.. "

Khushi: "hum jante hai arnavji, lekin abhi di kuch samajhne ki halat mein nahin hai.. woh bohot mushkil waqt se gujar rahi hai.. aur iss waqt unko pyar aur sath ki bohot jarurat hai.. apne pariwar ki, apne chote ki.. iss liye hamne ek faisla liya hai'"

Arnav: "kaisa faisla"

Khushi: "hame lagta hai ki, kuch samay ke liye, hamara iss ghar se aur di se door rehna hi thik hoga"

Arnav: "what' what are you saying khushi.. ye kaisi baate kar rahi ho tum.. tumne aisa socha bhi kaise.. tum kahi nahi ja rahi ho, do u get that.."

Khushi: "dekhiye arnavji, aap samjhne ki koshish kijiye'"

Arnav: "kya samjhne ki khushi' tumhe lagta hai ki tumhare chale jane se sab kuch normal ho jaega.. everything will be fine' haalaat pehle jaise ho jaenge?"

Khushi: "lekin haalaat sudhar to sakte hai.. hum mante hai ki hamara jana is samasya ka samadhan nahin hai lekin hamare jaane se aap di par jyada dhyan de sakenge.. aur di ko bhi nahi lageka ki aap unki parva nahi karte.. aur phir ghar ka mahol bhi thoda shant hojaega' aur hum nahi honge toh di ko bhi'"

Arnav: "di ko kya.. what khushi' I mean what are you saying' it doesn't make any sense.. n wat do u mean' hamare jaane se aap di par jyada dhyan de paenge' so tumhe bhi yehi lagta hai ki main di ka achi tarah se dhyan nahi rakhta???"

Khushi: "nahi arnavji, aap hame galat samjh rahe hai.. hamara woh matlab nahin tha.. ham bas yeh kehna chahte the ki aap unka aaur jyada dhyan rakhsakenge.. abhi unko aapki sab se jyada jarurat hai..

Dekhiye aap thande dimag se sochiye.. hum jo kuch keh rahe hai.. woh galat nahi hai' aur phir ham thodina hamesha ke liye aap ko chod kar jaa rahe hai.. bas kuch hi dino ka toh sawal hai.. ek bar halat sudhar jaenge toh ham wapas aajaenge.."

Arnav: "but khushi kyu?? Why do u have to do this in the first place?? Halat tumhare yaha hote huwe bhi sudhar sakte hai'"

Khushi: "haan, lekin hamare jaane se aaur bhi jaldi aur acchi tarah se sudhrenge.. ye aap bhi jaante hai' aur phir aap ne abhi hamse wada bhi kiya tha.. ke hum jo mangenge aap denge' toh hum aap se izajat maang rahe hai.. mana mat kijiega'"

Arnav: "main mana karunga' khushi tum mujhe chodke jaogi?? Mujhee????"

Khushi: "aap aisa kyu soch rahe hai ki hum aap ko chodke ja rahe hain.. hum to bas kuch dino ke liye iss ghar se jaa rahe hai.. aaur jaha tak hamare sath hone ka sawal hai..toh who toh hum hamesha sath sath hi hain na' hamari dhadkane ek jo hai'"

Arnav: "khushi I still cant let u go' I just cant'"

 (he goes inside the room)

Khushi: "arnavji.. arnavji' suniye toh' "

(she follows him)

To be contd'

 

*guys, I am not from india nor do I live in india, n m not even an indian.. hindi is not the language I use' bt I have wrote d dialogues in hindi' hope I have done justice'

I m jst a crazy IPKKND and Barun fan'

I would be really happy if I could knw the feedback' So please leave ur comments' thank you'



Edited by itsmea - 23 July 2012 at 11:50pm

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
Awwwhhh...that was really cute...and u wrote awesomly for ur first;)...keep it up!!!:)...

Ps: im first to comment ...yayy!!..lol

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
thats beautiful...I hope tommorrow something like this happens!!



Edited by bssi - 22 July 2012 at 10:46pm

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
nice job.. some of your dialogues i feel like should come true...
 if you try a bit more u could be a gud script writer ... go for it... then for real writing...

keep it up...

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
wow... it was really very good...Tongue

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
wooow...u r so sweet yaar...luvd each n every line...awesomely written...HeartDay DreamingHug4 u...

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
Its nice, doesnot seems that u not know hindi well! Keep it up.

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
Its nice, doesnot seems that u not know hindi well! Keep it up.
Sorry for double post.
Just hit it.

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