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OS: Breaking the Ice (Page 16)

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Great OS - the agony of both expressed beautifully.

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 11:10am | IP Logged
loved it ... beautifully written Clap
thnx for the pm dii

Happy Ramzan to u tooEmbarrassed


------Reshma(i changed ma username)

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rechzZy

loved it ... beautifully written Clap
thnx for the pm dii

Happy Ramzan to u tooEmbarrassed


------Reshma(i changed ma username)
 
Lolz I was wondering who is this calling me di till I saw you'd changed ur username!
 
Thanks for reading hun, take careHug

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Simply beautiful!!

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 11:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anjaani07

Originally posted by rechzZy

loved it ... beautifully written Clap
thnx for the pm dii

Happy Ramzan to u tooEmbarrassed


------Reshma(i changed ma username)
 
Lolz I was wondering who is this calling me di till I saw you'd changed ur username!
 
Thanks for reading hun, take careHug

haha.. good that i added my name at the end..

my pleasure dii... u too tcHug

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 11:30am | IP Logged
omg!! that was so beautifully written! it was so sad and heart-touching!please continue to update it, and PM me!thanxSmile

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Wow beautiful os love it thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 11:51am | IP Logged
such a beautiful peice of writing & you managed to convey the emotions, feelings, the angst, the pain from both the characters so beautifully! bravoo for that. your writings are always a pleasure to read and ive mentioned that soo many times lol but again, i absolutely admired and loved how they both know that they cant live without each other, yet the circumstances are what are keeping them apart...sacrifices, sigh.
 
but but the last line about hope still being there is what ended off it nicely that with a new day, they both will come together...eventually :)
 
again, wonderful OS!!
 
- Dee

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