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OS: Breaking the Ice (Page 13)

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Lovely story...very well written. u should continue on with it :) :) :)

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anjaani07

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 5:57am | IP Logged
Hey Asma, really long time since you have come out with your wonderful OS's, really missed them!
But you have totally rocked it with this beautiful beautiful piece of writing, loved the pain and the love beneath it, it was captured beautifully...I especially liked the small fact that Arnav's garden is now blooming with roses and Khushi's "perfect" gift to Arnav.Smile
Loved reading it and thanx for the pmSmile


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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 6:41am | IP Logged
wow so touching is there any other part 

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Beautiful OS. Loved it. You have captured their emotions and pain perfectly
Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 7:01am | IP Logged
this was very well written! well done it was a beautiful story :D

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 7:50am | IP Logged
awesome updates!! Big smile

pl continue soon.
and can u pm me pl. thanksSmile

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 8:10am | IP Logged
thank you for the pm... it's been so long since I read any of your works and this was well worth the wait! truly outstanding... the loneliness, the pain and the despair with its underlying link of love were very moving to read... never liked this whole fascination with sacrifice but loved how you've woven it into your story... the mosquito repellent gift and the telephone conco, especially arnav saying khushi will always remain mrs. arnav singh raizada brought tears to my eyes... the emotional bits [which is most of the story] were very beautifully written... it's in the simple gestures and gifts that true love and romance lie!

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Beautifully writtenSmile

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