OS: Breaking the Ice - Page 12

Just_Love

@Just_Love

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Posted: 11 years ago

That was written brilliantly. I love the way you write!

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FaizooN

@FaizooN

Newbie

Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome! So beautifully written. I almost felt like crying along with Arnav and Khushi.

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fatprincess

@fatprincess

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

This is OUT OF THE WORLD !!! Brilliant !!! IMPECCABLE !!!! The conversation between the two just perfect. . . "lekin meri toh duniyan mein sirf ek hi khushi hai" ~

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

I loved it
You captured their loneliness so well
Thanks for the pm

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angellovergirl

@angellovergirl

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

wow!

this was so beautifully written - made me feel like crying

you portrayed heir loneliness and pain so well

thanks for the pm :)

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautifully written!!

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Sona

@sparikh

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

That was emotionally charged B-Day!

-Sona

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Rita

@rjhaveri

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Beautifully written. A very emotional piece.

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dumas

@dumas

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome os you captured the pain and despair and confusion very well loved it beautiful done loved the present she sent him awesome thanks for the pm

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dancedanceRR

@dancedanceRR

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

That was wonderful! Are you going to continue?

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