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Pink's Scrapbook|Anecdotes#106&107|PG:146 (Page 82)

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Posted: 15 November 2013 at 7:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SleepingBeauty.

Very nicely written! Great Anecdotes :))
Originally posted by salmeh.

 Loved the first one!
Originally posted by aishu3003

all d 3 anecdotes wer amazingggClap
happy diwali btwEmbarrassed
Originally posted by Pious_KaSh

Hey!!
I just read the latest two, and I associate imagery to both of them. because as I read,
"Confession"
I could picture the way the guy would have bent in front of the table and the girl, sighing, keeping the book down, looking up, then with a smile and self admiration would have have confessed her feelings.

Revelation on the other hand was shock on the girl's face, IMAGERY as a mentioned above.

Great Job!!
Thank's a lot everyone for such sweet comments. You all made my day.

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Posted: 15 November 2013 at 7:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Loved da scribble...da 1st 1 was cute...con soon...thanks 4 da pm
Originally posted by Fearless_Lover

my like button is nt wrking... srry 4 dat 
i luv bth Heart specially d 1st 1 :*
Originally posted by pinky.padda

wow totally awesome superb
Thankz everyone means a lot. =)

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Posted: 15 November 2013 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
Hi back again. Okay so I just wrote these and I don't know how they turned out so I'm going to let you all tell me. Anywho I hope you all enjoy this update. If anyone has suggestions for a Drabble or OS then please feel free to tell me. PM stuff is page 4 and index is page 1 and lastly sorry for any errors! Okies bye. 

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-Parenthood-

 

His eyes began to tear up as he held her in his arms. He had never imagined that one day he would be a father. After all he had grown up without one. He didn't know what it meant to be a father but now that she had entered his life he would learn just for her.

 

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It began to shake and rattle from side to side as if an earthquake was passing by.  The tiny pins that held it together were soon seen flying in either direction. His eyes began to grow wider as the scene in front of him continued. He was screwed and he knew it. His wife was going to be home any minute and instead of fixing it he had just broken the washing machine. 





Edited by .BezubaanPari. - 15 November 2013 at 7:46pm

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Posted: 15 November 2013 at 8:53pm | IP Logged
Tashuu the second one was adorable and funny LOL he broke the washing machine ROFL

The first one was soo cute Day Dreaming I like how you describe every feeling felt by them <3

Tashuuu write one long OS next pleaseee :(

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Posted: 15 November 2013 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
1st one was just so sweet n 2nd one lol its funny

well written

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Posted: 16 November 2013 at 12:58am | IP Logged
the first one was so emotional...I would have been in tears if it would have been any longer.
Fixed: had a dramatic beginning LOL

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Posted: 16 November 2013 at 2:43am | IP Logged
Hiii...Awesome update...Loved them...da 1st 1 was emotional n da 2nd 1 was funny...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 16 November 2013 at 7:53am | IP Logged
Love both of them
Beautifully written
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Geet

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