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rash.gupta, Rhea.KaJen, LilApple, pinky.padda, _JeN-DesIrE_, -Deepshikhaa-, Pious_KaSh, sweetdesire, teenorchid, jiyaa_m, KaSh-Maneet-Fan, SleepingBeauty., aishu3003,This content was originally posted by: BeautyfulDesireBoth of anecdotes are great :)
This content was originally posted by: SilverFairyAwsome Update. (:
This content was originally posted by: sweetdesireLove both of them
Beautifully writtenTans for the PM
Take careLots of LoveGeet
This content was originally posted by: SleepingBeauty.Very nicely written! Great Anecdotes :))
This content was originally posted by: salmeh.Loved the first one!
This content was originally posted by: Pious_KaShHey!!
I just read the latest two, and I associate imagery to both of them. because as I read,"Confession"I could picture the way the guy would have bent in front of the table and the girl, sighing, keeping the book down, looking up, then with a smile and self admiration would have have confessed her feelings.Revelation on the other hand was shock on the girl's face, IMAGERY as a mentioned above.Great Job!!
This content was originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-FanLoved da scribble...da 1st 1 was cute...con soon...thanks 4 da pm
This content was originally posted by: Fearless_Lovermy like button is nt wrking... srry 4 dat
i luv bth ❤️ specially d 1st 1 :*
This content was originally posted by: pinky.paddawow totally awesome superb
His eyes began to tear up as he held her in his arms. He had never imagined that one day he would be a father. After all he had grown up without one. He didn't know what it meant to be a father but now that she had entered his life he would learn just for her.
It began to shake and rattle from side to side as if an earthquake was passing by. The tiny pins that held it together were soon seen flying in either direction. His eyes began to grow wider as the scene in front of him continued. He was screwed and he knew it. His wife was going to be home any minute and instead of fixing it he had just broken the washing machine.
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