Balika Vadhu


Balika Vadhu
Balika Vadhu


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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 2:31pm | IP Logged

Hiii folks...A story which suddenly came into my mind thinking of ANSH, since I was missing them very badly this past week, which I typed in.  If u guys find it intersting feel free to comment whether I should continue with it or not.  Positive and negative comments are wholeheartedly accepted as a remark of my work.  Here I go with the story.


Its raining  very heavily.  Anandi running with bruises all over her and some men following her throwing stones at her, suddenly she trips and falls from a cliff, the men stop seeing her fall, but a hand comes out to hold her from fall, but could not help, and she falls down from the cliff.  Both the hands, (Anandi's as well as the hand who came for help) touch each other and hold for a fraction of a minute before falling  in to the valley.  This has been the sequence which Anandi had been dreaming since childhood and fighting very hard within herself about this dream, but all in vain.

Anandi was a political science graduate student and has been leaving in a hostel in Mumbai .  Her parents died in a road accident and have been raised by her aunt and uncle, Sumitra and Bhairo, who lives in Mumbai, very far from her college, and since it took more than 4 hours to reach college from her house she opted to stay in a hostel.  Jagath was the only son of Sumitra and Bhairo and since he was pampered by his parents, he happened to be a bad boy with least respect to elders and social values.  Since Anandi and Jagath reached the age of puberty, Jagath was eyeing on Anandi, though she could not tell anything to Sumitra and Bhairo due to the fear that she might be misunderstood, Bhairo's mother, dadisa, watched all these and was always with Anandi protecting her from this evil boy.  Dadisa, though a lady who in her 70s was up to date with day to day happenings of the society and accepted the change of today's generation from the time of her generation and was very open minded and accepted the trend of the teens with both open arms.  She loved anandi from the bottom of her heart and always blamed devimayya for not giving anandi as her grandchild.  She even wanted that anandi and Jagat get married after Sumitra put his thought in Bhairo and dadisa's mind.  Dadisa though loved jagat and anandi a lot did not want to spoil Anandi's life by marrying her to Jagat coz of his irresponsible behavior.  Anandi was a girl of great family values and traditions and very intelligent and handled every situation very smartly and intelligently without causing any pain to others whereas Jagath was entirely the opposite.  Dadisa said Sumitra and Bhairo to consider Anandi as their own daughter and to marry her to someone who is perfect for Anandi in all ways and to fulfill their responsibilities as own parents to Anandi.  Sumitra and Bhairo agreed for the same after learning Jagath's behavior and attitude.  Jagath was doing his bachelor in Arts and always was dependant on his parents even for his pocket money and used to spend lavishly on friends and parties as his father Bhairo was a very famous and rich businessman of a textile industry.

It was in the context of protecting Anandi from Jagath's evil eyes, Sumitra, Bhairo, and Dadisa took the decision of shifting Anandi to the hostel near her college and gave her full liberty to live her life as she wished.  Anandi never took any sort of disadvantage of this opportunity.  For her pocket money, she used to take tuitions for kids of the nearby lane after her classes at the house of Suguna who also happens to be her best friend at college.  Phooli was her hostel mate and also her best friend.   Anandi, Suguna, and Phooli were the bestest of friends.

Shiv was a business tycoon who runs many business firms and was the brother to Phooli.  He attained his success at a very young age with hard work and used to travel to a lot on basis of work.  Shiv and phooli lost their parents when Shiv was 15 and phooli was 10.  Since then it was through his hard work that he studied and became a business tycoon.  Due to his work pressure and his commitments which made him to travel abroad, he shifted his loving sister to a hostel.  Whenever Phooli was in need of Shiv, he used to leave all his work and commitments and used to b with his sister.  This was the first year of their college and it was only a month that their college started.  Shiv had his office as well as a bungalow in Mumbai and whenever he was in Mumbai he used to stay there with Phooli.  Since she and Anandi have been together in the same room and college, Phooli hated being at home with her brother and always loved to be in the company of Anandi.  Shiv was upset with this issue, but since he loved his sister a lot, he always agreed to her wishes and used to visit her daily at her hostel whenever he was in Mumbai.  He never got a chance to see Anandi as she used to b busy with her tuition classes in the evening and used to return at 7 in the night by which time Shiv used to leave the hostel to his home.

Gauri was a secretary in Shiv's office, and used to keep him updated of his daily schedule and meets.  She hailed from a very poor family and due to financial constraints she took up the job in Shiv's office.  Gauri was a woman of least social values and principles just like Jagat.  For Gauri money was the only goal in her mind and she used to go to any extreme steps to get that.  She tried a lot to woo Shiv and always used to behave like a girl of high principles and behaved as the most hardworking employee in the office in order to gain Shiv's attention and all her efforts used to go in vain as Shiv was only interested in his profession and his family, Phooli.

Like Anandi even Shiv used to dream the same sequence of him fighting with the men over the cliff and pushing them one by one he tries to reach till the girl and reaches just enough to have a touch of her hand as she falls into the cliff.  Both  Shiv and Anandi have been fighting with this dream sequence since their childhood and spent many sleepless nights after dreaming this part.  Both always wondered even during the daytime about the dream, the cliff, the men throwing stones at Anandi, but was never aware of what it was.

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dixie123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 5:05pm | IP Logged
Nice one.. Completely different from the actual BV.. Smile

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vrinda9183 Goldie

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
Good story

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ButterflyChaser IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
nice one... 

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