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OS: Raizada vs. Gupta (Page 4)

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Posted: 29 September 2012 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
If your intention was to fool us about which Raizada and Gupta were doing the talking then you fooled me completely. I didn't realise until the last couple of lines that it were Payal and Aakash talking.

And you had me laughing hard at Payal's description of Anjali.

Way to go Payal!!

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 9:19pm | IP Logged
Ooops. So it was between akash and Payal
Good one

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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 1:55am | IP Logged
Nice oneBig smile

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Ah this outburst was needed to show a stronger Payal
great os

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Posted: 21 January 2013 at 9:25pm | IP Logged
@Kalyaani: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!Smile
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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
Loved it...!!!  always felt that indian dramas show women to be weak, submissive and having no self respect. Loved this strong payal.

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Posted: 23 March 2013 at 6:15pm | IP Logged
I knew that it was Akash and Payal from the start *pats herself on the back*

Way to go Payal. She stated all the facts clearly not only the ones pertaining to Shyam but also about them that is Akash had been after her to get married to her and not the other way round and that they never used their name to get what they wanted


In the start both decided to do something different from their personalities. Payal stood up and spoke for the first time defending her sister. Akash took a decision on his own, taking the matters in his hands and screwing it up royally.


Both the loss is ultimately theirs. However they now at least know what one thinks of the other.

Dhamaakedar OS :-)

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Posted: 23 March 2013 at 6:58pm | IP Logged
love this payal.. the fire in her when she stood up for her sister and screamed at arnav after the "building" incident.. that was the payal that should have been.. but wasn't.. 

btw.. nice title and clever wording.. till the end i thought it was Arnav and Khushi :)

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