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ArShi OS: Crime (Page 8)

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 10:50pm | IP Logged

He sighed… He felt so drained right now…

As soon as he came to the room, found all the lights switched off… Had she slept already???

He hadn't seen her reaction as she left him… But She had felt so flustered when everyone had walked in on them…

As if she was at fault!! Ridiculous!

He felt anger rising in him again… why would the purest of the souls in this house feel guilty for everything wrong??

It was all his fault!

Where were the days when he could protect his loved ones efficiently??

He missed the days of his glory… when he was clad with armors of steel…

Right now, all he felt was disarmed… ashamed…

Why didn't he just protect the fragile excuse of a being, he had for his wife… She was just so delicate… She HAD to be protected from the world…

And he had failed her… Yet Again…

He switched on the light… And made his way to the closet, to get his change of clothes… He saw her clothes neatly piled away in her thailis…

What the…

So she again had made up her mind to leave…

He turned around, ready to jolt her awake from her sleep.. And that's when he saw clearly… Her tear-stained face…

He stopped in his footsteps… The anger getting replaced by pain…

Actual physical pain…

It hurt watching her wilt away… Lose her essence…

Was this a price he was ready to pay??

He would trap her in here forever… And then watch her suffocate to death??

NO!!!

His mind shrieked… And his whole body trembled at the realization…

He moved in on his side of bed… Feeling more and more dejected at the circumstances… Closing his eyes… Willing for it all to be a really bad nightmare…

Suddenly, he felt her tug to him… Her face soaking wet with new tears…

"Arnavji… Hum galat hai…." She sobbed into him.. Not asking, but stating… Stating the most bizzare lie that could ever exist to his world…

He turned to her side… Hugging her petite form completely..

Engulfing her in his embrace… As if still trying to protect her, from god knows what…

"Nahi Khushi…" He breathed calmly, trying to control his turmoil.. Coming to a hard decision.. "Hum galat nahi hai Khushi…. Loving you is not a CRIME.."

He kissed her forehead… Calming her down.. Gently holding her till she fell asleep.. And made up his mind..

Yes, she would leave tomorrow…

And he, he would leave with her…Clap

What a beautiful OS.Star It gladden my heart to see that Arnav took the right decision.  I am with you Arnav and Khushi, always Hug

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
This is what Arnav should do.
Very well written Clap
Thanks for the pm..

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
Awesome piece.
Loved it..

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
Crap! This is so not crap!!!! Come one!!! This is awesome!!!! 

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
I really hope this happens in the serial

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
Beautiful OS:)...

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
awesome...would love to see Anjali's face if Arnav leavs with Khushi...I wish it really happened...as of now Anjali doesnt deserve an ounce of love from Arnav !!!

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
Heyy Ankuuu

This was totally NOT crap. I loved this OS especially the last part You portrayed Arnav's feeling so beautifully and with solid emotions.

Yes, she would leave tomorrow…

And he, he would leave with her…

You portrayed Arnav's feeling so beautifully and with solid emotions. Please continue this OS. I really want to read what happens next. Hope this kind of a kind happens in the real show too!! Thanks for the PM and write more!!



Krishika

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