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MG ff: Teri Meri Prem Kahani (prt 19)(thrd 2 added (Page 11)

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Posted: 01 August 2012 at 12:49am | IP Logged
nice part
geet first meet with maan
he is rude on her

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Posted: 01 August 2012 at 6:55am | IP Logged
lovely yeh maan ki temper uff...Angry

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Posted: 01 August 2012 at 8:37am | IP Logged
Awesme update dear
maan dnt want to marry bt daadi wants hm to marry geet
omg dadi ghar par nahi hai ab kya hoga

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Posted: 01 August 2012 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
Is koobsoorat story ka next part kab milega...Embarrassed 

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Posted: 01 August 2012 at 3:39pm | IP Logged
Hav bookmarked this on my browser ...plz update it 

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Posted: 02 August 2012 at 1:16am | IP Logged
part 4
nice part...
oh so Daadima is making Maan to marry again...
and Geet is here...
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 02 August 2012 at 3:10am | IP Logged
amazing comments, amazing graphicsdear...
very amazing comments, amazing graphics thank u for the PM, sorry couldnt reply earlier

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Posted: 02 August 2012 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
Hey Friends! Thanx for all your love and support. Before updating this part I want to clear some doubts. First, why Sameera is like that? Sameera from the beginning loved only Maan's money and fame. Maan married Sameera just because of Dadi, though Dadi was wrong at that time in judging her. Second, why Maan was tolerating Sameera and Rahul? He was tolerating them just because of his son Sahil as Sahil loved his mom. Third, are Sameera and Sahil dead? They are no more for now. Fourth, what Sameera wanted to expose about Maan? This I will reveal later as if I open everything up, what would be the twist dear. So here's the next update. Enjoy! Smile
 
 
                                  Teri Meri Prem Kahani
 
                             PART-5
 
Maan caught her by the arm and pulled her rudely forward. Geet sobbed instantly. She was terrifiied as they have invited her, so why they are ill-treating her. Tears filled her eyes and the skylight of the big and bulky chandelier revolved in a dizzy whirl as exhausted anguish overcame her. Moreover, she hasn't eaten anything since morning and the pain of being alone was taking toll on her. She had travelled thousands of miles, expecting to be greeted kindly. Instead she was going to be sent back. The skylight whirled before her eyes in a kaleidoscope of brilliant blurring colours. Nakul saw her fainting.
Nakul: Sir ye Mam to behoosh hone wali hai.
Maan (exploded): Oh, for God's sake!
Maan swept her into his arms. She in her semi-conscious state realized that she is in someone's arms and the world was already coming back into focus for Geet as Maan was taking her upstairs. She was wriggling in embarrassment.
Geet (hoarsely): mujhe neeche utariye. I'm perfectly...
Maan: Chup bilkul chup.
He commanded with anger filled eyes. On the landing, he turned right and stalked into a room. He headed straight for a huge bed. Without a word, he dumped her unceremoniously on the bed and shoved her shoulders back down when she tried to sit up. Nakul rushed into the room with a glass of water.
Nakul (panting): Sir paani.
Maan snatched the glass from Nakul with his left hand while his right hand was busy clutching Geet. Maan threw the whole water on her face.
Geet: Please don't!
Geet cried, trying to twist her head away, but his hand persistently followed her face. Geet burst out.
Geet: Ye aap kya kar rahe hai. Trying to kill me?
Maan (grimly): What a delightful idea.
Tears poured out from Geet's eyes. She can't bear the humiliation any more, what's her fault that she came here or that she has no one in this world. Maan looked in her eyes, it seemed like her innocent eyes are accusing him. The pressure on her restraining hand relaxed and he moved a few inches away from her. Exhausted and humiliated, Geet turned her head aside, closed her eyes, and swallowed audibly as she fought back the tears congealing in her throat. She swallowed again. Maan said nastily.
Maan: I'm warning you agar ab tumhara ek bhi aaso is bed par gira then you will be the one to clean it up. Samjhi tum.
She slowly turned her head on the pillow and regarded him with scathing animosity.
Geet: Are you Savitri Khurana?
Maan (irritated and confused): What?? Don't you have eyes? Kya mai tumhe Savitri Khurana dikhta hu?
Geet (with anger): Agar aap Savitriji nahi hai to kindly get off this bed or allow me to do so. Mujhe Savitriji ne yaha bulaya hai, ye unka ghar hai or aapko mere sath aise behave karne ka koi haq nahi hai.
His brows snapped together as he stared down at the rebellious waif who was glaring at him with murder in her brilliant almond eyes. Her hair spilled over the pillow, curling riotously at her temples and framing a face that looked as if it had been sculpted in porcelain by a master. Her eyelashes were incredibly long, her lips as pink and soft as rose petals. Maan again looked in her almond eyes which were full of hatred. Maan came in his senses. Abruptly, he lunged to his feet and stalked out of the room, followed by Nakul. The door closed behind them, leaving Geet in a deafening silence. Slowly she sat up and put her legs over the side of the bed, then eased herself to her feet, afraid the dizziness would return. Numb despair made her feel cold all over but her legs were steady as she gazed about her. She cast a look about the room and then gingerly sat back down on the bed. An awful lump of desolation swelled in her throat as she folded her hands in her lap and tried to think what to do next. Someone knocked at the door of the room, and Geet guiltily jumped off the bed and carefully smoothed the silk bedsheet before calling.
Geet: Aa jaiye.
Nakul came with a tray in his hands. He brought some food and juice for her.
Nakul: Aap kuch kha lijiye, aap bahut door se aayi hai na.
He pointed a finger towards a door in the room.
Nakul: Ye washroom hai. Aap kuch kha ke fresh ho jaiye or rest kijiye. Jab Dadima aa jayegi to hum aapko inform kar dege.
Geet: Dadima kaun?
Nakul: Mrs. Savitri Singh Khurana.
Geet's eyes snapped open with the name. She didn't know that she is so much old. A new hope clouded her eyes as she has learnt that old people are like children, sweet and innocent.
Nakul: Mam agar aapko kuch or chahiye ho to aap intercom se call kar ke bata dijiyega.
Geet: Aap mujhe Mam mat kahiye. Mere naam Geet hai or aapka?
Nakul (cheekily): Nakul, mai yaha ka head-servant hu. Mujhe ab chalna chahiye as Maan Sir doesn't like gossiping. Aap aaram kijiye.
Nakul left and Geet was startled by the knowledge that two human beings are not permitted to converse together in this house, but considering her brief acquaintance with "Maan Sir", she could fully imagine him issuing such an inhuman edict.
Geet (thought): Par ye "Maan Sir" ho kon sakte hai? May be Savitriji ghar ka khayal rakhne ke liye head-watchman ko yaha chod ke gayi hogi.
With that prediction she turned towards the table, and ate her food. After that she took her dress from her bag and headed towards the washroom. After a good shower she came out and climbed into the bed, sliding between the sheets. Her long dark lashes fluttered down, lying like curly fans against her cheeks. She prayed her Babaji and fell asleep unaware of the next disastrous day.
 
 
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Friends I have updated Part-5. Pls have a look and pls hit the like button and pls give your comments. Heartily welcome to all the readers.Star
 


Edited by dreamymishti88 - 05 August 2012 at 12:10pm

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