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Swaron FF: Living the dream; Thread Two (Page 23)

-Snehaa- Goldie

Joined: 17 September 2011
Posts: 1496

Posted: 11 August 2012 at 4:33am | IP Logged
One of the best chapters i've read! Beautifully written and explained.
The sisterly convo was not much, but it was nice.
The way she said that she will be happy again ,thinking about Swayam was Big smile
The way he thought about her all the time...I swear no guy in real life exists like that...(or maybe he does...idk one can be like Swayam..)
Love the way Sharon threw stones through his window...
Loved how Swayam was pretending to be angry, and Sharon convincing him to come with her for His birthday which no one else seemed to remember..Heart
And the date part was adorable...

The date was the best part...Cake ( hoped they saved some  for me...jk) Tongue
I loved how she kissed him and surprised him...probably he wished for that??
And the birthday present...puppy...AWWW Heart
And the kiss at the end...really i felt something like butterflies...
I really wish you'd continue it, but since you said you can't , i won't force you or anything. Please start writing another FF/SS. 
Hats off to you! Smile

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marauder IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 08 January 2011
Posts: 12107

Posted: 11 August 2012 at 5:39am | IP Logged

Unreserved my comment.

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-FrozenRain- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 19 January 2012
Posts: 14816

Posted: 11 August 2012 at 5:41am | IP Logged
Nidhi what should I do now..
I can do is  a salute to u for having written this wonderful piece.

Loved it...

QAnd Sharon-Kans relation I loved it cause eve after a fight we feel bit confused as to how starta talk with sis aur she has not been with her for so many days...

And the way both let their feelings out and enjoyed w3as super..

A wonderful FF indeed..

Do u write novels if not then i suggest u to start one plz...
thanks for pm..

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AmRiTa_S IF-Dazzler

Joined: 06 November 2011
Posts: 4310

Posted: 11 August 2012 at 8:14am | IP Logged
Hey Nidhi finally you updated the last chapter and woah this is indeed the longest one.

I loved every bit of the update...from Sharon's conversation with her sister and her saying "Yes, i will be" when kankshita asked if she will ever be this happy. Loved how Swayam was confused and questioning himself lying on bed...if he was too rude with her or he should not be. Loved how he smiled when he saw her standing outside his window in his hoodie and a smile appeared on his face. Loved when u made them address each other as Shekhawat and Raiprakash LOL

Love how Swayam noticed for the first time that Sharon was how they were carefree after days and laughed together in car. Love how Sharon said she is taking him out for a date and she made him feel special. Loved how Swayam made her confess and smirked. The puppy as a gift was super cute and dere discussion about PETA was funny yet adorable. Loved the KISS Wink I suck at long comments but i tried my best, I hope i was able to convey how much i love this FF and this particular update. 

A huge heart felt thank you for giving us LIVING THE DREAM. Thoroughly enjoyed myself reading this FF and i am sure this is one of dose FF which i will re read whenever i want to smile. Thank you for sending me PM's even though i never commented on regular basis. You are an amazing writer...blessed be Nidhi and you better keep them coming. Thank you once again HugSmile

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nj_SRKholic IF-Rockerz

Joined: 03 March 2012
Posts: 6767

Posted: 11 August 2012 at 10:01am | IP Logged
amazing ending of d ff dear..!!
njoyed each n every chapter..
loved d end too..
u took us to a total different swaron world n v loved it/...
do write more such stories plz fr us..!!

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---Priya--- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 21 August 2009
Posts: 23319

Posted: 11 August 2012 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Nidhi the update was fabulous Clap
loved each n every part...
finally sharon said it Embarrassed
those SwaRon moments were so romantic Day Dreaming

i will so miss this FF.. plz do start a new one Smile
this was one my me fav FF... loved it so much Hug

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swa-ron Goldie

Joined: 03 May 2012
Posts: 1502

Posted: 11 August 2012 at 11:57am | IP Logged
although im upset that this ff has ended,
im happy cz of the way u ended it
it was simply great
tnx for ur pm

waiting for more frm u

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pratik54000 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 25 March 2012
Posts: 5504

Posted: 11 August 2012 at 6:07pm | IP Logged
hey i cannot believe that what i read was the last chapter of i am addicted to see a pm from swayer_tom for an i will miss your ff so much...

now comming back to update in the beginning i liked the kankshita and swaron convo...and i liked the way sharon tried to pamper her lil sis...and i liked the thinking of sharon to make her sister comfortable...after that i loved it when kankshita asked sharon that would she be ever happy like this showing sharon her old pic with their parents...and there sharon remembering swayam and confidently saying yes i will...i loved it so much there because it showed love between two sisters and also love for swayam in sharon's was really nice...

than came the part where sharon went up to swayam...she did all nuts and wrong to convince swayam to come down...i really liked the way you have described their expressions there...

than sharon and swayam on the beach was also very sharon actually. wished swayam birthday and had guts to take him out for drive...i likec the way she convinced swayam to go on drive and yes here i could feel the chemistry of our own sharon in this incidance...

and than the car convo and swayam's clarification about chental sending men to hurt sharon...and than swayam assuring sharon about everything good to happen..and than the light moments spread put between them was to fun to read...

and than an emotional swayam after seeing the arrangements made by sharon was surprised and happy for all that sharon did for made him feel made him think that he mattered in sharon's life...

than firstly swayam again confessed his feeling but sharon was still some confused about acceptance...but swayam finally was able to make her realise that she loved her...i enjoyed this convo most during the whole update...u really liked it...

and than the cream part appeared the one that was waiting for from the start..sharon accepted her feelings in front of swayam...and the way she expressed was really nice to read...i really felt like i got my own loved lady was written so nicely that i felt superbly connected to that...

on the whole as they say you had saved your best for last...and indeed it was best at last...i dont know why you said its not upto your standerd...i guess you are not satisfied with this but i am super satisfied with this one..i will miss your pms and your ff nidhi...i hope now you would have atlist known me as a reader of your ff...i am not in time as usual but i am reading your all updates all the time...hope we meet on a different platform you will be able to recognise write more and more stuff and kanks are really awsome writters...

thanks for the pm...i will so miss this write something new soon and dont forget to pm me..always will be a fan tp your writtings...tought i dont know you personally but seems like a connection has been made with you...i hope you will respond to my comment on your final update the ff...god bless write more beautiful stuffs...

all my regards to you...pratik 54000...

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