Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

Swaron FF: Living the dream; Thread Two (Page 23)

Nirju99 IF-Dazzler
Nirju99
Nirju99

Joined: 02 July 2011
Posts: 3965

Posted: 10 August 2012 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
woo dat was an awesm ending.luv it, keep writing dear

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Sawyer_Tom

nish22 IF-Rockerz
nish22
nish22

Joined: 22 December 2011
Posts: 7124

Posted: 10 August 2012 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
You didnt reserve a post for me!! :( 
RES

Sawyer_Tom IF-Dazzler
Sawyer_Tom
Sawyer_Tom

Joined: 22 March 2012
Posts: 3573

Posted: 10 August 2012 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nish22

You didnt reserve a post for me!! :( 
RES


Sorry!! I had hardly reserved a post for myself when the next four posts were instantly reserved. Stern Smile I thought abhi kya faida!  

The following 4 member(s) liked the above post:

lyfisbeautifulnish22thegameisonmarauder

nish22 IF-Rockerz
nish22
nish22

Joined: 22 December 2011
Posts: 7124

Posted: 10 August 2012 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
you forgiven Nidhz :) :P

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Sawyer_Tom

Winds.of.Winter Senior Member
Winds.of.Winter
Winds.of.Winter

Joined: 07 March 2012
Posts: 957

Posted: 10 August 2012 at 4:24pm | IP Logged
res
unres
So! my favourite FF came to an end???CryBroken Heart
but it was worth it.it was a beautiful story with an ever beautiful start,some painful,some happy,some mysterious,some simple chapters n some very apt quotes that actually makes you wonder how beautifully ppl's minds work! n lastly the story had a very simple yet exciting ending.the fact that the story had swayam n sharon was cherry on the cake but frankly speaking u made 2 alltogether new characters in ur story.while reading this story i have experienced every emotion possible n never have i felt im reading somethng written by an ammature(u r not btw).as i have said before,i dont know what u do but u should be writing books..
ur writing is refreshing n simple.Smile
a person like me who never likes reading descriptions of nature in booksConfused,had to read some descriptions of the seasons by u, twice,simply because i felt it was worth reading more than once.Embarrassed
infact there have been many parts of your story where i had to go back n read it again.EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
all along your story was just a story about a girl but the way u brought it about...ClapClap well done.
i literally stalked this thread since once i had missed a chapterShockedBig smile
i discontinued reading a thriller story just to read LTD( since i arrived at this after around 20 chapters). ShockedSmilen im glad that i did.
plz continue ur writing spree.esp cz ppl (n me) are kinda accustomed to ur writing.will miss it.Broken Heart
last update was awesome.n it was just fitting that the last quote be LTD's writer's.n hell it was as beautiful as the ones written by famous authors.
JOB WELL DONE.but will miss LTD




Edited by D3fan_forever - 11 August 2012 at 1:21pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Sawyer_Tom

Madhura.. IF-Sizzlerz
Madhura..
Madhura..

Joined: 24 August 2009
Posts: 14579

Posted: 11 August 2012 at 1:06am | IP Logged
I loved every bit of it and how you wrote, it!
 
Reserving, as its the end will write my size comment at least, or bit more.
 
EDITED!
 
I wanted it to seep in.
 
I would just say, when you are comfortable enough, write a novel, thats it!
 
Coming to this FF, I have been active in the 2nd half of this ff and given u all feedbacks, cos I understood abt it later, which means I have to still, go through some of your earlier chapters, which I will go through soon.
 
Coming to the final part, Sharon trying to behave as an elder sister, perfect. Their bond is apt.
 
I love the way you bring out emotions with so much ease and make normal things seem so beautiful.
 
I like the family thing and open ended..thing.
 
Sharon throwing stones at window, funny, then she takes him to a date, cool. Taking control...
Love the way you described nature, enough said.
 
I loved the way she tells abt the scarf thing and apologised.
 
I also like the cake part and the quick kiss.
 
Now the way Swayam's emotions r potrayed and about his eyes changing so much, take a bow woman!! I have not seen any writing where his emotions are so beautifully described and the way his eyes speak volumes.
I loved the way, he makes her confess her love, and laughs later.
 
I love the naughty, understanding, practical bond they share.
 
Now, srsly the PETA thing cracked me up, but so true, poor puppy. But an adorable gift.
 
The way you ended the kiss was apt, and the last line, beautiful.
 
PS I loved the quote u made at the start.
 
Finally they both deserved each other, and they understood it, :)
 


Edited by Madhura.. - 13 August 2012 at 5:55am

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Sawyer_Tom

-Snehaa- Goldie
-Snehaa-
-Snehaa-

Joined: 17 September 2011
Posts: 1496

Posted: 11 August 2012 at 4:33am | IP Logged
One of the best chapters i've read! Beautifully written and explained.
The sisterly convo was not much, but it was nice.
The way she said that she will be happy again ,thinking about Swayam was Big smile
The way he thought about her all the time...I swear no guy in real life exists like that...(or maybe he does...idk Tongue...no..no one can be like Swayam..)
Love the way Sharon threw stones through his window...
Loved how Swayam was pretending to be angry, and Sharon convincing him to come with her for His birthday which no one else seemed to remember..Heart
And the date part was adorable...

Now..
The date was the best part...Cake ( hoped they saved some  for me...jk) Tongue
I loved how she kissed him and surprised him...probably he wished for that??
And the birthday present...puppy...AWWW Heart
And the kiss at the end...really i felt something like butterflies...
I really wish you'd continue it, but since you said you can't , i won't force you or anything. Please start writing another FF/SS. 
Hats off to you! Smile
-Sneha.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Sawyer_Tom

marauder IF-Sizzlerz
marauder
marauder

Joined: 08 January 2011
Posts: 12092

Posted: 11 August 2012 at 5:39am | IP Logged

Unreserved my comment.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Sawyer_Tom

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
FF.manneet-**ANIMOSITY** Thread 1 pt 16 new thread

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 152 153

Author: FireSafireFiree   Replies: 1218   Views: 321824

FireSafireFiree 1218 321824 25 August 2013 at 7:55am by PoojaSheth
MG FF:Limitless -Thread 3- NEW THREAD LINK PG1

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 146 147

Author: maan-ki-sanjana   Replies: 1172   Views: 147191

maan-ki-sanjana 1172 147191 25 November 2012 at 12:42pm by FairyAngel12
FF-M&G-**ANIMOSITY** THREAD 3- link to thread 4

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 146 147

Author: FireSafireFiree   Replies: 1173   Views: 226996

FireSafireFiree 1173 226996 29 November 2011 at 6:23am by jafrin
FF-Enigma- THREAD 7 (thread 8 link on 1st page)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 137 138

Author: FireSafireFiree   Replies: 1102   Views: 153794

FireSafireFiree 1102 153794 05 July 2011 at 3:55am by khwaishfan
-kashish-maaneet ff THREAD 2..link new thread add

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 158 159

Author: muskanp   Replies: 1271   Views: 247098

muskanp 1271 247098 15 March 2011 at 7:54pm by preethia

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index