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Swaron FF: Living the dream; Thread Two (Page 21)

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 9:05am | IP Logged
although im upset the ff has ended, its been a pleasure reading it and thanks for the pm :D the ending was perfect

Nikki <3

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To start with update was really long so i had to read it twiceLOL
The Sis talk was really well framed...and kankshita behaved really like a matured grown up girl trying not to shred a tear. And i didn't find it to be open-ended... in fact you conveyed a message there by saying Sharon is soon going to find happiness or probably has already found it.
Swayam inner turmoil about his feelings and also how love gets Shakespeare's ghost in you saying those things which you might have never imagined... was fabulous.
Sharon pelting stones at his window LOL loved their conversation there.
And even i laughed on reading Chantel was sent to a mental asylumEvil Smile
Now this was my favorite bit in the entire update...the description of the scene...few blossoms clung to the tree for their dear life...was so philosophical...even the human race is kinda that struggling with life to manage to clung to it...okay i went off the topicStern Smile
Coming back the entire confession was beautifully written. And Sharon locked the pup inside the trunk. D'oh That was scary.

Its better i stop here...but to add i hope you come up with another work on Swayam and Sharon.Its nice to read about them from your angle. Had a great time to read this work of yours.Will miss this for sure NidhiApprove



Edited by Rutu - 10 August 2012 at 11:15am

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 9:35am | IP Logged
Last chapter I m feeling really sad but it was really amazing journey
I was waiting for ur pm from past few days
Coming to the update
I was just in another land while reading this from starting I liked kanks n sharon convo how they both want to understand each other
Then sharon went to swayam's house n throwing stones at his window LOL
Sharon apolozising to him n then celebrating his birthday
Swayam already knew it but want to.hear it from her Wink cute n adorable
She gifted him a puppy aww Embarrassed Clap
N that kiss n being with each other feeling in each other's arm
Perfect ending
I forgot to mention that chantel part was really hilarious LOL
Ps.hope u start a new ff soon

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 9:38am | IP Logged
Final finale .. but you know what, it didn't felt like it ended .. as u have mentioned in the end about sharon and kanks, the whole story seems to have that feeling. Even though u ended it, it just felt like they had a new beginning. That was AWESOME .. 

About the update .. 

Another side of kanks was shown beautifully, her character was shown very much over matured. 

Then the positive vibes around sharon was superbly shown.. even reading that part brought a big grin on my face ..  
 
But the best part was, the one in which sharon ask swayam after confessing that he knew about this and swayam says "Of course I knew! I just wanted to hear you say it."

I'm gonna miss this FF alot .. Do keep writing and pm 

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 9:44am | IP Logged
res
omg i am so late Cry
unres
 
i am really sad that this ff has to come to an end !!
but its has been a roller coster ride of pure emotions, i have felt each and every thing be it friendship , love , jealousy , anger , frustation, etc...
i enjoyed each and every part , and it is one of the best ff i have read !!
totally loved it Heart
 
coming to the update-
it was awesome nidhi !!
fantastically writtenClap
loved the sharon-kanks convo , its was good to see sharon trying to be a nice sister
sharon going to swayam house to apologise and throwing stones at his window LOL
the Swaron convo was really good and the way sharon tried to make swayam bday special was wonderful .
finally sharonBig smile told him abt his feelings and they hugged ,kissed and made up  Blushing
sharon gifted swayam a puppy , awwwEmbarrassed
perfect ending to a perfect story !!!
thanks for the pm.
 
 
i will be eagerly waiting for ur future works on SwaRon .
come up with something soon...
till then will miss ur writting nidhiSmile


Edited by tanukaswaron - 10 August 2012 at 10:03am

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 9:44am | IP Logged
Awsm awsm
this is d best thing i have ever read ...
Best ff ever
thnk u for writing
m gonna miss this..
Thnx for pm
love it

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 9:46am | IP Logged
, the FF was so good, I can't believe its over. I do want an epilogue.

When are you starting another FF ??

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Posted: 10 August 2012 at 9:59am | IP Logged
unresed my comment :D

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