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Swaron FF: Living the dream; Thread Two (Page 18)

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Posted: 01 August 2012 at 2:15am | IP Logged
As usual awesum update!!! The dance part was described so beautifuly nd so perfctly!!! Nw waiting fr d last update eagerly!!!

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Posted: 01 August 2012 at 3:37am | IP Logged
Unresd comment on Pg 17 :)

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Posted: 01 August 2012 at 4:03am | IP Logged
finally swayam knew d truth, update soon

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Posted: 01 August 2012 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Awesome update Nidhi. I loved it. Poor Sharon, the girl couldn't really own up to Swayam, about her love, could she?! You described the dance part really well, I really liked that part. And the creature is back.! I hate that Chantel woman.

Second last update? Just one more? :(

Thank you for the PM

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Posted: 01 August 2012 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
Nidz, let me begin by saying ur description of the dance - which u cleverly manouvered to b the source to bring these two souls up & close - was as natural, flowing & seamless as their dance itself...loved the way u described Swayam's admiration of the divinity of Sharon's dance...Sharon's state of mind in Swayam's room was extremely relatable & reflected admirably in urwriting style...just disappointed abt the next part being curtains on this FF - but then all goodthings do cum to an end don't they Confused

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Posted: 01 August 2012 at 3:06pm | IP Logged
first things first.never mentioned before but in every chapter the quote u give at the beginning is beautiful n apt for the chapter.but this time the quote turned out to be my favourite part.the quote was divine.as for your writing...Clap the usual.n loved the way u took care of the scarf thing.expecting a lot for the last chapter.a lot.cz after that no more update Cry
this time take ur time n updateSmile

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Posted: 02 August 2012 at 10:36am | IP Logged
Awesome update!
Sorry for commenting soo late was busy with school work!
Coming back to update!
Sharon is so nervous to tell Swayam about her feelings hahaha
Wow their dance amazing description Embarrassed
Finally Swayam knows who the mystery dancer is YaaY Big smile
Ur ending this FF so sad Cry
Update soon !

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Posted: 02 August 2012 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
Okay okay Stop Glaring at me!! :P Sorry about Vanishing.. I always  do that! The only reason Im here is for your FF And My My Things are going very fast indeed! 

Poor Sharon was not able to say what was in her heart but she atleast should have accepted that the scarf belonged to her! I dont remember if I commented for the Earlier Chapters but Bringing Rey back was one of the perfect things to do as we come to a close.. The Dance ,my girl, You nailed it! I have never had this much ease in imagining a Dance and this was just perfect!

Cant wait for the Ultimatum! Update soon!

P.S. Reserve a post for me Will you? Pllleaasee!! :) 

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