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Swaron FF: Living the dream; Thread Two (Page 11)

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
Apparently Kankshita get to say what readers ( or atleast definitely me ) are really feeling. Not only her I too was getting bugged by this constant game of hide and seek of their emotions. LOL
Now coming to this update. I would again say no one describes a scenery better than you. The way you started with the description of sunlight, curtain and the wind was just mind blowing. You surely know how to captivate your readers. Then whole moment of Sharon with Swayam's hoodie was amazingly done. But the best bit of this part was for me when you told how an fear of unknown is still left in someone after an accident. That was brilliantly penned. Then coming to the final part. It was good to see Rey coming and giving some advice to Sharon. The ShaRey conversation was awesome. Aur Kankshita ka character is just too good. Uska to har character ke saath equation dekhne layak hota hai. So Rey-Kankshita convo was also nothing less than brilliant.


Edited by marauder - 28 July 2012 at 12:35pm

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by marauder

Apparently Kankshita get to say what readers ( or atleast definitely me ) are really feeling. Not only her I too was getting bugged by this constant game of hide and seek of their emotions. LOL
Now coming to this update. I would again say no one describes a scenery better than you. The way you started with the description of sunlight, curtain and the wind was just mind blowing. You surely know how to captivate your readers. Then whole moment of Sharon with Swayam's hoodie was amazingly done. But the best bit of this part was for me when you told how an fear of unknown is still left in someone after an accident. That was brilliantly penned. Then coming to the final part. It was good to see Rey coming and giving some advice to Sharon. The ShaRey conversation was awesome. Aur Kankshita ka character is just too good. Uska to har character ke saath equation dekhne layak hota hai. So Rey-Kankshita convo was also nothing less than brilliant.

You know I wasn't planning on bringing anybody back. This was supposed to be the last chapter. Yeh toh likte likte I decided that it would be better to bring Kankshita back. She is my favorite character. Embarrassed And then I decided that a Rey-Kankshita angle would seem quite interesting. So hence. 

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
I loved the way Sharon felt when she woke up in Swayam's arms and the way she turned around and admired him as he slept...So happy that Rey is back and  I was actually waiting for him to come back !! Thank God he made Sharon do the thing that we have been waiting for her to do for such a long time...Can't wait to see her confess in the next chapter !!!

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
amazing update nidhi !!
fantastically writtenClap
somewhere i was expecting an entry of rey and i am happy that he is back
so he can put some brains in sharon to confess her love for swayam Big smile
kanks is so adorable Smile
finally we get the SwaRon confession in the next part , eager to read it .
will be waiting for the next part , update soon...
thanks for the pm 

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
amazing update it was just too good and thanks for the pm :D

Nikki <3

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 2:27pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update Nidhi Clap
Loved how you started, the first para very nicely written. The Sunlight thanking the wind and the Sun to fulfill its destiny to light the world up. Bravo Thumbs Up
SwaRon thinking about the last night and how its gona effect their relationship further was nice. Sharon enjoying the newer version the happier version and having a moment with Swayam's hoodie was beautifully done. The fear in Sharon came out again, its not easy to forget a incident like that. Rey's entry and his convo with Sharon was nice but loved Kanks entry..she just livens up the mood.
As she'd say, about time that SwaRon confess their feeling towards each other.
Looking forward to read how SwaRon confession is going to be like. 


Edited by Sudha-SK - 28 July 2012 at 2:28pm

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
hahaha amazing update love rey and kanks cute talk as well

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
So rey is back sharon really need someone's advice
I miss kanks too her smartness
Starting was really beautifull how she want to touch him
I wish in next update swayam came to knw that sharon is the mystery dancer

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