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~Mi Amore~ Dil Dosti Dance SS#2 Ch 13 Pg 115 (Page 67)

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by neethuuthaman

OMG that was totally filmy. Action, MU...n what not. Ab toh next part ka intzaar rahega... That moron Neal!!! Ewww... I think shivam is way too better than him. Aur kitni badi MU ho gai hai ufff. Poor kriyaansh n swaron. Anyways try to update soon pleeejjj

see meko naa shivam naam use nahi karna tha.. kyunki usko soch ke sabko hansi hi aati.. 

isiliye i made up neal.. wanted him to be scary as shit!!

filmy toh tha hi naa!! Maha twist joh hai! 

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tish18

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<font color="#000099">Yay!! Unresing early. It's an Achievement.Wink</font>


<font color="#000099">Update?-- Fantastic!! Wonderfully written.Clap</font>


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<font color="#000099">Ouu!! College students hai, ya gangsters? Bloody, ameer baap ke bigde hui aulaad(s).Angry</font><font color="#000099">That was nasty.</font>


<font color="#000099">Swayam our hero! Nice.Smile</font>


<font color="#000099">And for Rey'.. Kitni time and mehenat waste. Shee. Tongue</font>


<font color="#000099">I Liked the MU from Kria point of view. It was well thought of.Thumbs Up</font>


<font color="#000099">But I wonder why would Rey expect her to come to meet him when her friend was fighting for his life in the hospital.Confused</font>


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<font color="#000099">I'll be waiting for the next'.</font>


<font color="#000099">Update soon.Wink



Love!!Smile</font>



first of all, regarding your kostin... see, he told vicky to take care of swayam.. and nobody knows about viha being official. so he dint think vicky would in anyway tell kria about it.. it was neha who told her.. 

and Swayam isnt dying!! he's just been stabbed!! uff.. i made it jyaada scary naa?? I knew it! 

Jab i start writing dark stuff, i kinda go overboard.. shheeesshh... 


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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Love_Kunwar

good one!
KR have misunderstandings now..chal koi nai!
kuch accha hi hoga Big smile


Have faith! obviously kuch achhhaa hi hoga! 
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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aria009hera

Originally posted by puja_arsha

To finally aapne bomb phodh hi dia...n both swaron n kriyaansh r affected by it...
So i was write...it wasn't swayam...it was some despo stalker...
N wo kitna creepy tha...i mean only a LS person behaves with a girl like that...
Achaa hua swayam came to the rescue...but usko hi us cheapo ne stab kar dia...
Poor sharon...saare uske thoughts were wrong...
It was like khoda pahaad nikala chuha types...
I mean she expected swayam but it was some creep neal...
N coming to kriyaansh...
Rey all set with preperations...wow...
But i guess destiny had something else in its mind...
Kria waiting for d moment...their dance was amazing...but all turned into vein after that call...
N again a MU...aisa lagta hai kriyaansh n MUs ka janam janam ka rishta hai...
Poor rey waited for her n sher dint turn up...
Ab aage kya hoga...???
Jldi update karo di...plz...
Ab to mai aapko threat b nai kar skti...poor me...these studies n collg...
Islie pljj update kar dena jldi se...
N after ages i gave a long comment...thanx to u n ur updates...mai khud ko rok hi nai paati...
Luv u ...



<font color="#006633" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Haan finally.. Kaisa tha bomb?? explosive naa?? All three are going to be interlinked aage jaake.. I dont neglect ViHa either.. aage aage dekh!</font>
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<font color="#006633" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">haan, I wanted the Neal character to be so creepy that it makes you flinch every time you hear about him.. was I able to make him scary enough??</font>
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<font color="#006633" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Poor Sharon and Kria actually... I kinda hate me for doing so wrong to my lady leads... par thik hai.. story ke liye zaroori tha..!!</font>
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<font color="#006633" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Haan MU = KriYaansh... hehehehe...</font>
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<font color="#006633" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">College enjoy kar baby!!</font>
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<font color="#006633" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Aur aise hi acche acche comments dete rehna!!</font>
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<font color="#006633" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Love u too doll!!</font>


mai ache comment deti hun...seriously...i thought its weird...coz jo b dil mai aaya likh dia...m enjoying collg...but u know yahan ke some senior boys r so cherap n despos ki unko dekhkar hi gussa aata hai but we can't do anything...
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Posted: 30 August 2012 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sunitha_Swayam

Loved it dear...thnx for d pM


thanks for the comment!!! 
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Posted: 30 August 2012 at 11:21am | IP Logged
pata hai di...

kal humari college ki GT hai...
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Posted: 30 August 2012 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tinatartari

awesome update
loved it
 

Thank you Tina! 

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