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~Mi Amore~ Dil Dosti Dance SS#2 Ch 13 Pg 115 (Page 30)

dancersqueen IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 22 November 2011
Posts: 11291

Posted: 02 August 2012 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
as always awesome update...whether it is viha swaron or rey gonna propose kriya??? loved the flowers...eagerly waiting 4 next update...

-PyaariBhootni- IF-Addictz

Joined: 22 April 2012
Posts: 50494

Posted: 02 August 2012 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
woww awesome updateClap

luvd it luvd it luvd itBig smile

waiting for d next partSmile

pls update soonEmbarrassed

P.S - m n luv wit ur dpEmbarrassed
-Vaish- IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 07 January 2010
Posts: 29500

Posted: 02 August 2012 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maddieee

Originally posted by kriyansh24


so me first... me first!!!!!!!!!!!


accha toh aapne bomb nhi foda...

looks like ki aap aur baarud daalne wale ho ismein...

viha... always the sweet and simple one... u know no complications.. i just love the fact abt viha... u know straight and simple...

swaron: have a feeling... shivam??? lekin nhi i don't think so as i know u won't include him so cancel that... but disgust???? so has to be someone else... let me guess swayam coming to save sharon from that person if that person is not swayam which i believe is true...

so kriyansh less!!!!!!! actually rey less... kria toh thi hi nhi
well kind of expected that... since pehle majority updates mein kriyansh tha plus i was kinda scared ki kahin bomb mein kam na ho jaye kriyansh...

ab i can demand my kriyansh for the next update... u know no guilt ki baaki kam kiya (mujhe aata bhi nhi lekin u see i think a lot so aa hi jata finally)
okay toh back to kriyansh... loved how u describe rey's pov... while reading first chapter of today's thread i was thinking to make a request for rey's pov over the kisses... apne yhan de diya... glad he understands what kria is going thru and what is she expecting... so sweet of him to take caare of her everything... plus the irony he is the one person there who gives her the greatest pleasure and greatest sadness... all the turmoil is relted to him only... and seeing him they vanish too... u know like the valley of flowers for her... but i wud like to read what his feelings are for  the kiss... not thinking abt kriya's feelings.. u know his own feelings, his worries, his happinss... what it meant for him abt her giving in...
waiting for  grand proposal but yet the sweet and simple one u know having a grandeur in itself...

ab pehle yeh batao di... aap kaunsi dictionary isteml karte ho... inne saare flower ke baare mein bhi pata hai... aap toh yeh batao ki aapko kya nhi pata... u have such a wide ranging knowledge... love it.. really di admire u for that.. genuinely...

so jaldi se isse line mein ucchal ke lao and update this one pehle plzzz...

and haan awesome update... 4got to say it...

thu itne bade bade bohot saare comments kaise type karthi hain vaishi?

didi jab mood mein hoti hun na toh acche se bhavnayein bhr aati hai... and introspection acche se ho jaata haai... happens with khushi, anki di and amy di...

jabki i thot main jaldi nipta dungi considering drop ki padhai ka hadh  load hai... and i planned to give a small commentLOL u know saaste mein niptanaTongue
rock_ruvi Goldie

Joined: 19 April 2012
Posts: 1628

Posted: 02 August 2012 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
awesome update...
sukanyaa IF-Rockerz

Joined: 14 December 2011
Posts: 6480

Posted: 02 August 2012 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
PMs r biTcH...Indeed they r... pAR u knw na hw busY m desE days... sadiyON sE maine apnE lAppy ki daRshaN hi nai kI... par Gussa mat honA mAin weeknd MeiN kArdUNGi COmmEnt...
-Sanj- IF-Rockerz

Joined: 07 February 2012
Posts: 6450

Posted: 03 August 2012 at 12:10am | IP Logged
Awsome Update Always...Viha are cute...aaj Kriyaansh Nahi tha...koi baat nahi...rey toh tha na...usne kria ko proposed karne ki puri tayaari kar raha hai...waiting for the next update...
MirageSwaron IF-Dazzler

Joined: 08 December 2011
Posts: 3503

Posted: 03 August 2012 at 12:17am | IP Logged
Anky, awsum updates...maine chapter 9 aur 10 abhi padaa...ViHa deserved that much I thought bcoz in the show they hav been made a farce so far...Luvd the way u portrayed teh mental state of both Kria and Sharon in Chapter 9, esp Kria's - so complicated u made it sound, & Sharon toh waise bhi complication ka dusra naam hai...Cliffhanger on Swaron part...well why do i think itz Swayam onlyConfused of cors Kriyaansh sound like having a gala Valentine's...  

sorry yaar for late comments but sach mein net kharab thaEmbarrassed...mera naam pm list mein nahi hai, koi baat nahi if u dont feel like it itz ur take - bcoz jahan tak mujhe yaad hai, aaj tak maine kabhi tumhare work pe comment na kia ho aisa nahi hua...anyways nice job keep rockingSmile

Edited by meevee - 03 August 2012 at 12:22am
.Sumi. IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 16 December 2011
Posts: 31127

Posted: 03 August 2012 at 12:51am | IP Logged
Awesome Thumbs Up
Thnx for d PM dear

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