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~Mi Amore~ Dil Dosti Dance SS#2 Ch 13 Pg 115 (Page 15)

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kriyansh24

aaj chhutti kyun maari????

Mann kia toh maar li... 

Actually boss was on leave.. toh me took leave as well!! 

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aria009hera

sbse pehle end of the comment padh lio... *padh lia end of the comment*

finally u updated... *eid ka chand hote hai naa mere updates?? :P*I know... lekin jaise sab uska wait karte hai na... me bhi karta hun... aapko toh pata hai na????

i am so happy...  *me ijjj tooo!! m always super happy after updating!! Bala tali types!!* cannot agree more...

 me lobhes dese cutu bandrus... bt dat toh u already know!! me too love it... comment ka size bhi badha dete hainWink

pehle iske liye yeh lo...   awwwieee... *blushes*

and fir kriyansh kiss uske liye toh di ho dun woh kam hai but fir bhi ekdum geeli wali...  *heheheheheehehe... GEELI WAALI!!  teri bhaavnaaye naa foot foot ke baahar aati hai vaishu!! ab mujhe laga ki sab boring ho raha hai toh KR kiss kara hi dun!!* haaye di aise hi aap baar-2 bore hote rha karo... main toh baarish kar dungi aapke liye kisses ki

chalo ab monkey emoticons nhi. aap bhavnaon ko samajh lena: *samjhing samjhing mai.. acche achhe se samjhing!!* dhanyavaad ji..

reyam part was fun.. u know so very true.. jab bhi rey khush hoga kriya automatically gusse mein hogi as rey ne kuch kiya hoga and she wud be confused and swayam pe jhadegi... nice algorithm...   *thanks baby... algorithm toh accha hona hi tha naa.. aakhir likha kisne hai.. But this kinda has always been the universal truth of D3... Kria gussa- Rey khush!! :P* Lekin iss baar sab khush-2

secret admirer mein thoda twist aa gaya.. vaise aapka ss d3 se related hote huye bhi vaisa nhi hai.. u know same same but different... *D3 jaisa mai hone kaise du.. Nahi bigaad sakti naa mai unke jaise.. thou the secret admirer arc of original D3 was well.. I wanted to see it differently.. So I am going with this... lets see what happens next...* yep usse ekdum ajeeb tarah se end kar diya tha... plus sharon had ideas that it might be swaym lekin zyada dikhaya nhi usske baare mein
sharon ke thoughts well perceived...  *tujhe ek secret bataaun... Sharon has always been my fav characters... even more than Rey!! Though I like Rey, I have never loved him... I understand what he does, why he does thing perfectly.. But Sharon I love.. thoda sa kam than Kria.. But still Love too much.. The fact that I have always loved queen bitches being one of the reasons and next that the character is really instinctive to write... It is sooo clear at times that what she would do... I wonder how many other people fail to predict her and develop her true to character(CVs i mean)* i love Kria.. sharon maine kabhi inna dhyaan hi nhi diya... lekin main hamesha female chracters zyad hi pasand karti hun


chalo coming to kriyansh my fav:  *mere bhi...*

so they were on the terrace lying .. u know such a good sight to imagine.. and how they were discussing their best friends.. and u know the cute fight.. i am loving this kriyansh.. u know zyada awkward glances nhi hote as in they can talk freely u know... i love this kriyansh... *hahaaahaaahaa,... Pata hai after spending so much time with each other, I dont think awkward glances hone chaaahiye.. As both Kria and Rey are quite wears-heart-on-their-sleeve characters... So it was high time the awkward glances stopped.. I never like the non-conversation wale just aise hi FALL IN LOVE wale KR...* thde acche lage the lekin zyada nhi... u know aisa hota nhi hai... thoda reality mein bhi reh lo

so rey planning a date... and kriya interrupting obviously...  *Kaam hi kya hai aur Kria ko!!* thats y she is the baatcutter
 
but am surprised ki rey didn't object on multiple date point.. matlab sacchai toh hai... so kriya took rey to a perfect date.. i love these kinds of scenes.. *Isme surprise ki kaise baat aayi vaish? Joh sach hai woh hai.. And Rey is a guy who wud remain true to her no matter what..* i agree

and i know for a fact ki aisi dates sirf rey enjoy kar sakta hai as for first kriya saath mein hai toh use jehannum bhi le jao chalega woh toh... plus uska character hai hi aisa.. u know the clark kent behind superman...  i love this... *sahi kahaa.. uska character hai hi aisa.. sab kuch kria pe daan kar dene wala!! hehehehe.. dat itself is the reason i CANNOT love Rey.. I dont like typical heroes... * Me too.. matlab ek extent accha lagta hai par after sometime it irks aak hir itna accha kaise ho sakta hai... issliye i like rey to a certain extent... he is so... saint like and good... even armaan had the traits (woh toh rey k boss tha iss maamle mein)...,. thoda accha... lekin zyda meetha problematic... thus mujhe edward cullen pasnd nhi aata... seriously usse toh diabetes ho jaye... itna accha koi kaise ho sakta hai...

so they went for the perfect date.. rey making those remarks.. true to his character... *Ab bechaara kya kare.. Pagal ke saath instantaneous date pe joh gya hai!!*

u know always depict them as they r truely given in the character sketch.. but their only one side is shown the lover side.. kbhi pura nhi dikhate... * The day I started this SS, I wanted it to be a mix of what makes them actually what they ARE... the lovers side is great actually... But there are always reasons behind loving someone some typical way... And exploring that is what I really really like!! (Bragging much?? I know)* yep... u know aisa pyaar aaaya kaise.. matlab thekk hai love at first sight... but y so much head over heels love????

i loved rey's pov while kriya was dragging him everywhere.. and his observation ...oooh took my breath away... *bechara sirf observation pe hi reh jaata hai kitti baar.. I pity his poor soul!!* i agree... seriously... woh sabse zyada fasta hai iss chakkar mein... but u know he is the superman

loved every bit of it...

i too love the smell of the ground.. it is so refreshing.. sadly iss saal sirf smell hi mil rhi.. it isn't raining heavily *sigh*  *Meko bhiii... meko mitti khaane ka mann karta hai itta... yahaan acchi baarish hoying ab!! and isiliye maine yeh likha tha!!*

but it poured there... what i can ask for more... *Baarish ke bina louv story kaisi?* yep...

rey toh gaya kaam se they danced and he tend to complete the step.. he didn't i was sad ... *Jaldi se sad ho jati hai tu!! thoda buildup toh dene dia kar!!* ab kya kare... KR ke liye my feelings are very u know instantaneous...

but finally he did... he kissed her and not softly but passionately and the best part she responded... ... that too equally *Kria had wanted to kiss him kaafi tym se.. remember?? Toh it was only logical that she kissed the guy back... U know i never liked CVs portrayal of Kria as dumb in all dese matters... I mean thik hai, Innocent hai.. Par innocent ka matlab yeh hota hai kya ki kuch pata hi naa ho?? Ya fir yeh ki she has never done such things.. Dey never seem to get portrayals right!!* kria wnted to kiss him????? sacchiShocked yep haan CVs toh bahut baar showed her dumb.. not innocent...

i love u di... pehle hi bola fir se suno... *Awwwiiee.. I love you tooo Vaishu!!* me too

and usse bhi sabse mast part... the intensity of the kiss... haye... *hehehe.. I like my kisses strong!! :P* and i love that di... i just want my KR... u know that???

sahi mein left me breathless... and the pullback not becoz of any guilt but bcoz of the growing passion...  *Yup.. Guilt toh kahi play mei aana hi nahi chaahiye... Jahaan pure love hai, toh guilt kaisa?* Kria maan jaaye iss baat ko...

kriya's comment was sweet but it sttill left me wondering... i want to read her pov di... actually i want to read the equation b/w them after their perfect date... plz next part mein include karna... *Haan it left everyone wondering... Sabke dimaag mei pata nahi kyun baitha hua hai ki she wud regret... Why wud she?? Wen she liked the kiss... 
Regret toh tab hota jab uska mann hi nahi hota... Jab mann hai toh fir kyun?? 
And next part aa gaya aur tune padh lia... Hope it didnt disappoint... would love a better review of it.. coz I know where I wanna go with the story.. the thing is.. whether people are buying that or not, I wanna know!!* well every1 is wondering actually matlb me wondering as u know its like ki kriya tries hard to suppress feelings even if she likes it.. she aalways hve to those sati savitri types u see... always doing the right things acc. to the book

aapne toh Vday manva diya... dekhte hai uss din ke liye kya stored hai... *Uss din ke liye stored hai bomb blast* u r rising my anxiety level di... kya ahai bomb: atom, sutli, lakshmi bomb kaunsa hai????

but presently i wanna see the equation, kriya's take and then rey ka proposal  *I wanna see Rey ka proposal too... Lets spam the author to write now?? Thik hai?? ;) * Wish i cud.. lekin jitn ho sake karunga... cchholli...Ouch vaise aap kar rhe ho spamming only...WinkLOL

expecting some great romantic two way ( from both sides and not just rey ) kriyansh scenes... * I am NOT good with cheesy romance... Will try!!*  nt cheesy but just 2 way and sabse imp. woh blush-2 nhi wala.. u know ur way

sorry lagta hai bhavnaon mein behke kuch zyada hi lamba comment de diya... * Iss pe reply karte karte meri ungliyaan dukh gayi!! ufff... PRAFFUL, MAI TOH THAK GAYI BHAISHAAB!!* aapko khich di pasand hai... i was toh like such a big fan... alley-2 meri hans ke haath dukh gaye... main dba dun???????





chholi...  *Cutttuuu monkeysss!!!* couldn't agree more



ek ur sorry issliye as i wanted u to reply to this comment specificallygiven that it is the longest jabki i wasn't getting to what to write and i ended with this... so isse reply kar dena... Big smileEmbarrassed *Kar Dia!! Padh le!!* Padh liya and maine bhi reply kia...Big smile



BLUE!!

di i forgot to mention in this update... i loved the rey's authority that he got kri from u know the unexchanged but the truely implied authority



Edited by kriyansh24 - 27 July 2012 at 6:01am

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 4:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aria009hera

Originally posted by kriyansh24

aaj chhutti kyun maari????

Mann kia toh maar li... 

Actually boss was on leave.. toh me took leave as well!! 


yeh hote hain u know sacche employees...LOL

boss jahan hum vahnTongue

chlo accha hai...

u got a break...

pata hai kl mere dost fir aye the...  and this time they brought a chocolate cakeBig smile

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 5:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kriyansh24

Originally posted by aria009hera

Originally posted by kriyansh24

aaj chhutti kyun maari????

Mann kia toh maar li... 

Actually boss was on leave.. toh me took leave as well!! 


yeh hote hain u know sacche employees...LOL

boss jahan hum vahnTongue

chlo accha hai...

u got a break...

pata hai kl mere dost fir aye the...  and this time they brought a chocolate cakeBig smile


Awwiee vaishu.. chocolate cake!!! 

Arrre i was tired of all d hectic work.. So decided i needed a break... inna wadda red red reply dia tune!! 

tujhe kuch mast padhna hai?? I just found something!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7746571/1/White_Flag
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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 5:40am | IP Logged
reply pasnd nhi aaya???? Ouch

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 5:43am | IP Logged
di mast ff hai...

chalo frinally anjali ko shouting...

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 5:50am | IP Logged
pasand toh aaya naa baby!! obviously!! i was just going through D3 forum pages.. What happened to Suchi ke SS??? She had copied from somewhere?? Shocked
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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 6:01am | IP Logged

Di pata nhi…. I enjoyed her writing a lot…

Maine bhi aaj hi dekha…. Plus main zyada dhyan se nhi dekhti as taarey pops up I mid… unfotunately mine galti se ek promo mein unka thoda sa LLHH dekha tha…. I was like kyun dekha maine…..

I just look for kiyansh works as many as possible….. an OS namely kodak moment...

pta hai di read its a sweet one...

Kodak Moment

am excited for today's episode of IPK... finally contract mrriage makes an appearance in wrds... beech ke episodes were looking like fillers... piccle ME ke liye jo promo air huya tha... finally ab aaega...

di aap pura  din IF pe karte kya ho???Shocked

mujhe kuch nhi milta and main fir bhi kuch nhi dhundh paati karne ko...Ouch and then also i remain online for so long... aap IPK forums pe jaate ho????

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