Originally posted by aria009hera
sbse pehle end of the comment padh lio... *padh lia end of the comment*
finally u updated... *eid ka chand hote hai naa mere updates?? :P*I know... lekin jaise sab uska wait karte hai na... me bhi karta hun... aapko toh pata hai na????
i am so happy... *me ijjj tooo!! m always super happy after updating!! Bala tali types!!* cannot agree more... me lobhes dese cutu bandrus... bt dat toh u already know!! me too love it... comment ka size bhi badha dete hain
pehle iske liye yeh lo... awwwieee... *blushes*
and fir kriyansh kiss uske liye toh di ho dun woh kam hai but fir bhi ekdum geeli wali... *heheheheheehehe... GEELI WAALI!! teri bhaavnaaye naa foot foot ke baahar aati hai vaishu!! ab mujhe laga ki sab boring ho raha hai toh KR kiss kara hi dun!!* haaye di aise hi aap baar-2 bore hote rha karo... main toh baarish kar dungi aapke liye kisses ki
chalo ab monkey emoticons nhi. aap bhavnaon ko samajh lena: *samjhing samjhing mai.. acche achhe se samjhing!!* dhanyavaad ji..
part was fun.. u know so very true.. jab bhi rey khush hoga kriya
automatically gusse mein hogi as rey ne kuch kiya hoga and she wud be
confused and swayam pe jhadegi... nice algorithm... *thanks baby... algorithm toh accha hona hi tha naa.. aakhir likha kisne hai.. But this kinda has always been the universal truth of D3... Kria gussa- Rey khush!! :P* Lekin iss baar sab khush-2
admirer mein thoda twist aa gaya.. vaise aapka ss d3 se related hote
huye bhi vaisa nhi hai.. u know same same but different... *D3 jaisa mai hone kaise du.. Nahi bigaad sakti naa mai unke jaise.. thou the secret admirer arc of original D3 was well.. I wanted to see it differently.. So I am going with this... lets see what happens next...* yep usse ekdum ajeeb tarah se end kar diya tha... plus sharon had ideas that it might be swaym lekin zyada dikhaya nhi usske baare mein
sharon ke thoughts well perceived... *tujhe ek secret bataaun... Sharon has always been my fav characters... even more than Rey!! Though I like Rey, I have never loved him... I understand what he does, why he does thing perfectly.. But Sharon I love.. thoda sa kam than Kria.. But still Love too much.. The fact that I have always loved queen bitches being one of the reasons and next that the character is really instinctive to write... It is sooo clear at times that what she would do... I wonder how many other people fail to predict her and develop her true to character(CVs i mean)* i love Kria.. sharon maine kabhi inna dhyaan hi nhi diya... lekin main hamesha female chracters zyad hi pasand karti hun
chalo coming to kriyansh my fav: *mere bhi...*
they were on the terrace lying .. u know such a good sight to imagine..
and how they were discussing their best friends.. and u know the cute
fight.. i am loving this kriyansh.. u know zyada awkward glances nhi
hote as in they can talk freely u know... i love this kriyansh... *hahaaahaaahaa,... Pata hai after spending so much time with each other, I dont think awkward glances hone chaaahiye.. As both Kria and Rey are quite wears-heart-on-their-sleeve characters... So it was high time the awkward glances stopped.. I never like the non-conversation wale just aise hi FALL IN LOVE wale KR...* thde acche lage the lekin zyada nhi... u know aisa hota nhi hai... thoda reality mein bhi reh lo
so rey planning a date... and kriya interrupting obviously... *Kaam hi kya hai aur Kria ko!!* thats y she is the baatcutter
am surprised ki rey didn't object on multiple date point.. matlab
sacchai toh hai... so kriya took rey to a perfect date.. i love these
kinds of scenes.. *Isme surprise ki kaise baat aayi vaish? Joh sach hai woh hai.. And Rey is a guy who wud remain true to her no matter what..* i agree
and i know for a fact ki aisi dates sirf rey
enjoy kar sakta hai as for first kriya saath mein hai toh use jehannum
bhi le jao chalega woh toh... plus uska character hai hi aisa.. u know
the clark kent behind superman... i love this... *sahi kahaa.. uska character hai hi aisa.. sab kuch kria pe daan kar dene wala!! hehehehe.. dat itself is the reason i CANNOT love Rey.. I dont like typical heroes... * Me too.. matlab ek extent accha lagta hai par after sometime it irks aak hir itna accha kaise ho sakta hai... issliye i like rey to a certain extent... he is so... saint like and good... even armaan had the traits (woh toh rey k boss tha iss maamle mein)...,. thoda accha... lekin zyda meetha problematic... thus mujhe edward cullen pasnd nhi aata... seriously usse toh diabetes ho jaye... itna accha koi kaise ho sakta hai...
so they went for the perfect date.. rey making those remarks.. true to his character... *Ab bechaara kya kare.. Pagal ke saath instantaneous date pe joh gya hai!!*
know always depict them as they r truely given in the character
sketch.. but their only one side is shown the lover side.. kbhi pura nhi
dikhate... * The day I started this SS, I wanted it to be a mix of what makes them actually what they ARE... the lovers side is great actually... But there are always reasons behind loving someone some typical way... And exploring that is what I really really like!! (Bragging much?? I know)* yep... u know aisa pyaar aaaya kaise.. matlab thekk hai love at first sight... but y so much head over heels love????
i loved rey's pov while kriya was dragging him everywhere.. and his observation ...oooh took my breath away... *bechara sirf observation pe hi reh jaata hai kitti baar.. I pity his poor soul!!*
i agree... seriously... woh sabse zyada fasta hai iss chakkar mein... but u know he is the superman
loved every bit of it...
too love the smell of the ground.. it is so refreshing.. sadly iss saal
sirf smell hi mil rhi.. it isn't raining heavily *sigh* *Meko bhiii... meko mitti khaane ka mann karta hai itta... yahaan acchi baarish hoying ab!! and isiliye maine yeh likha tha!!*
but it poured there... what i can ask for more... *Baarish ke bina louv story kaisi?* yep...
rey toh gaya kaam se they danced and he tend to complete the step.. he didn't i was sad ... *Jaldi se sad ho jati hai tu!! thoda buildup toh dene dia kar!!* ab kya kare... KR ke liye my feelings are very u know instantaneous...
but finally he did... he kissed her and not softly but passionately and the best part she responded... ... that too equally *Kria had wanted to kiss him kaafi tym se.. remember?? Toh it was only logical that she kissed the guy back... U know i never liked CVs portrayal of Kria as dumb in all dese matters... I mean thik hai, Innocent hai.. Par innocent ka matlab yeh hota hai kya ki kuch pata hi naa ho?? Ya fir yeh ki she has never done such things.. Dey never seem to get portrayals right!!* kria wnted to kiss him????? sacchi yep haan CVs toh bahut baar showed her dumb.. not innocent...
i love u di... pehle hi bola fir se suno... *Awwwiiee.. I love you tooo Vaishu!!* me too
and usse bhi sabse mast part... the intensity of the kiss... haye... *hehehe.. I like my kisses strong!! :P* and i love that di... i just want my KR... u know that???
sahi mein left me breathless... and the pullback not becoz of any guilt but bcoz of the growing passion... *Yup.. Guilt toh kahi play mei aana hi nahi chaahiye... Jahaan pure love hai, toh guilt kaisa?* Kria maan jaaye iss baat ko...
comment was sweet but it sttill left me wondering... i want to read her
pov di... actually i want to read the equation b/w them after their
perfect date... plz next part mein include karna... *Haan it left everyone wondering... Sabke dimaag mei pata nahi kyun baitha hua hai ki she wud regret... Why wud she?? Wen she liked the kiss...
Regret toh tab hota jab uska mann hi nahi hota... Jab mann hai toh fir kyun??
di i forgot to mention in this update... i loved the rey's authority that he got kri from u know the unexchanged but the truely implied authority