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~Mi Amore~ Dil Dosti Dance SS#2 Ch 13 Pg 115 (Page 12)

tish18 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 01 December 2011
Posts: 3681

Posted: 24 July 2012 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
*Browsing through my pms*
AAh!! Found it!
Lucky me!!
Review coming up in a bit...Tongue

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tish18 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 1:51pm | IP Logged

Ok, so I'll comment according the flow of your update. Hope that's ok… it just makes my job a lil easier.Smile


@KR part 1-

Oh! He is avoiding her?? Thought it would be the other way round…. Lol!

But if you're going for the reverse psychology…. Then double LOL!... Smart boy.

Even though I feel a little sorry for Kria when she feels strangled to live other's dreams.

Hope he makes it up to her soon.



I see you have your characters all very smart here…. hehe.

Sharon knows!…. Ok fine, guessing but at least she thought of him.

I loved the way she almost felt guilty for turning him into a stalker. Perfectly described. Poor girl.

Why do I feel sad for all your female leads in this part?


@KR part 2-

So he will make up to her! Nice!!

Oh but this girl has patience…. If I was in her place I would have…. Never mind, you don't want to know.





Omg! Still laughing!






And still laughing!!


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tish18 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
You've made a new pm list too??
Hope you know that I'm suppose to be included in ALL!!
Love you!!

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sukanyaa IF-Rockerz

Joined: 14 December 2011
Posts: 6480

Posted: 24 July 2012 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aria009hera

Originally posted by sukanyaa


Haan hai... Nahi rakhun kyaa???
KriYansh_Pam IF-Dazzler

Joined: 20 September 2006
Posts: 2685

Posted: 25 July 2012 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
Sorry for commenting so late...

PLZ ADD me in ur PM list...

Coming to ur update...BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing

I was reading this when I was travelling...So I was literally blushing...I so love the anxiety in Kria...N the way Rey asks her some more time...Day Dreaming
Plsss update soon...
Love u...

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_SenbonZakura_ IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 27586

Posted: 25 July 2012 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by yogini64

Congratzz a ton anki for the 2nd thread Party

vaishu is right . . . . We love to see ur replies Tongue
& ur msg to all lazy bugs . . . Kaminiyo,, luchiyo LOL
& the whole post made me ROFL
make a pm a/c . . . Dat would be better na . . . . . . Big smile
I don't have any prob wid 1 update in 15 days . . . . Coz ab mere clg start ho gye hai LOL
coming to the update . . . . Loved it as always Tongue
kriya thinking abt rey & that kiss . . . . . & she wants more of it Blushing
1 kiss me ladki ka mind upar niche kar diya . . . . . Gud job rey Wink
he's avoiding her just in convo's . . . . But In dance he's keepin her more close . . . As if she is his possesion Day Dreaming
he kissed her again to ensure dat he'll answer her the next day . . . . . He handles her very well Tongue
sharon guessed it as swayam . . . . . . Big smile
& she don't even knw that if she wants him as her secret admirer or not Embarrassed
u showed her diva arrogance very well...
poor swayam . . . Always get scolded Dead
vikram shergill . . . He's dead scared . . . . Madam . . Didi . . Lolzz ROFL
serial rapist . . . U wanna kill me anki? LOL
poor viha . . . . They are secretely tortured ROFL
ab to tujhe tang karna hi padega . . . . . . Valentines day . . . Eeepppsss Blushing

Woww!! I never thought that u guys actually ever read the replies..!! hehehe.. Me couldn't coz well my boss sucks my blood whenever he comes!! SO Yeah.. I have a vampire for a boss.. And not even those sexy broody kinds.. The gande 150 year old kinds.. And no time for anything else!! So I ll try my level best to reply every tym!! 

You pretty much described the whole chap ke reactions yogini!! hehehehe.. Wait around for the next chapter.. It is so huge that I am already dreading writing it!! 

Plus I have a few more things to update before VK.. SO thank you for being understanding towards this SS love!! Means so much...

V-Day update will be nothing like anyone has ever read.. And I sooo dont wanna disappoint.. Thats the reason am stalling even more.. hehehe...

But thanks for always commenting dear!! Muaaahh!! 

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_SenbonZakura_ IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 27586

Posted: 25 July 2012 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Love_Kunwar

Congo for the new thread! Party
please send me PMs ... dont remove me!

I really really liked this part!
am so confused liked Kria .. what is Rey upto?!
bina kuch bole hi they are almost in a relationship! LOL
see am a KriYansh fan so I would want more KR parts Embarrassed
please give more KR!

P.S-please dont PM me ArHi FF updates because I don't watch that show nor even am a fan of it ... don't mind Embarrassed
In future if you write anything on ArSha or KriYansh then please PM me!

Dont worry Ashra.. (I hope i am right with the name!)

I am not gonna send you IPK updates hehehehe... 

And about ArSha.. Well no interest whatsoever in writing anything about them... Not an inspiration anymore... To which I guess my two lovely bestie writers would agree too.. ( Right Pria and Tish??)

KR are gonna have a huge moment in the next update.. But as u can see by now.. Each couple is also intertwined within other... I am not only concentrating on the romantic aspect but the dosti and dance aspect too.. 

My characters are never shallow, I just cant giva a fairytale romance rey... nahi hota mujhse sab kuch sweet and cheesy.. 

So just hang around.. And it ll get better.. PROMISE!!

thanks for the lovely comment!! Embarrassed

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_SenbonZakura_ IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anindita91

awesome update...totally loved it...n congratulation for the new thread...

Thanks for the comment!!! 

Originally posted by kitttu1309.

awsome ff
nd awsome update...
Bichara vicky...
Do pm me
update soon

Hahahaha!! Why is everyone saying bechara Vicky!! I dint even proof read that part! 

Originally posted by rhu90

congo for the new thread...awesome update as always...vicky called kriya as didi...loved that part...thanks 4 the pm...

Thanks dear!!! 

Originally posted by spicyrays

lovd it dear... hope sharon swayam ko samjhe... nd congrats for  new thread...

Lets all hope for the best for SwaRon as well!! thanks for the comment dear!! 

Originally posted by neethuuthaman

Phew finally padh liya! Niks ka baccha baar baar call karke disturb kar raha tha. Nonuuu i wanna kiss u for this update as usual. Kriyaansh kisshie!!! Phirse!! Hayeee mein kriyaanshland me pahunch gai. Poor kria, shez such a confused soul. Aur rey, he is so sshhmart. Bas mauka chahiye usko :P. And meko vicky ka part aaj zyada acha laga. Vikramjeet Singh ko tune Vikram shergil bana diya, reminds me of Samrat shergil ;). Bichara he is so scared of kria. Vday aane waala hai!! Eeepppsss mein toh abhi se update update ka jaap karing

Finally padh lia tune!! awwwiieee meko kisshi miling!! 

Arre i never knew Vikramjeet Singh tha... Dhatt... I thot Vikram Shergill hai.. Chalo joh bhi hai.. DOno hi naam uspe suit nahi karte!! hehehehehe!!! 

Kar le tu jaap... tere exam khatam hone pe update karing mai!! 

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