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~Mi Amore~ Dil Dosti Dance SS#2 Ch 13 Pg 115 (Page 111)

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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 3:53am | IP Logged
Awesome update..swaron part was really nice but feeling bad for kriyansh :'( ..update soon and thanks for the pm :)

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
finally completed all parts...

i luvd your ss..

its awsm as always...

i luv yur works...

n ye kya kriyaansh k bich
misunderstandng...

hope k sb sort out ho jaye...

n happy 4 swaron...

plz update soon

i know its not gonna work
but phir b i request u to
update asap..

waiting 4 the next part...

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 3:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aria009hera

Originally posted by Ritu_ArSha

Awesome update di..!!Monkey Winks

Again srry 4 cmmnting l8..Monkey Icon

Cuming 2 ur update..

It was grt..Monkey Emoticons

Filled wid emotions..Monkey Winks

Swaron was grt..Monkey Emoticons

Manana padega..Neha bohot mature bandi haiMonkey Emoticon Cici

Bt hamesha kriyaansh k saath aisa kyu hota hai??Monkey Winks

Kria ne aisa kyu kia??Monkey Icon

Muje kriyaansh sath me chahiya..Monkey Icons

Y misunderstandings cum der way??Monkey Icon

Plsss thik karo naa..Monkey Icon

Update sooonnn

plsssMonkey Winks

Love u..Monkey Icon

Take cre


Inne saare pyaare pyaare bandaruuu!!!

awww.. dil khush kar dia tune mera! 

mashhtt!!!

haan meko bhi KR saath mei hi chaahiye!! ho jaaenge!!! 

Bandaruuu r really cute lyk u di..!!!

n jaldi update karo...

N congo aap sizzler ban gaiBig smileBig smile

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 12:59am | IP Logged
Gosh ur such a superb writer yaar..!!
hattzz off to ur writing..!!
Read dis thread ka updates yesterday..!!
Fab darls..
Sry dear bahot saare pending pm's the isliye dint c dis update ka pm's...
Loved d way u twisted d story.. Loved both swaron n kriyaansh part dear..!!
I surely wan pm's fr further updates dear..
Sad dat itz gonno end soon..!! Vl miss dis 1..
Cnt like cell se ol hu.. Count dis as my like too..!!
Awesum work..!!

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 4:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by basket_101

Reserve...
Promise to get back and comment by 2 dayss :P
Thanks for pm <3 <3 =D

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Edited! =)
Okay, I know it's been more than 2 days, ut got caught up in other things :P

So... anyway, about the part..
What else can I say, but that I just loved the part!!?
I mean you have truly portrayed everything so well!
As much as I love Swaron and Kriyaansh, the fact that you show the maturity in Viha's relationship is just amazing!  You didn't go into much detail, but that one line just said everything!
"If Neha wasn't there holding his hand the whole time..."
Clap  That one sentence just stole me heart <3  Loved it!!
I also loved how he recognized that Neha was there the whole time, helping Vicky manage everything, even though she technically doesn't need to... That said a lot about their relationship and I'm glad that your SS deals with everyone with the same depth :)

Poor Sharon!  Just reading that part, I felt goosebumps on my skin!
Perhaps the thought of it all is just so disgusting...  But then in the end, I felt so amazed!
I absolutely admired when it was written, "she knew what would cure her"
That was like a heavenly moment for me!
And the fact that she felt dirtied but noticed that Swayam still thinks of her as his angel!
That was a beautiful moment!

And now the Kriyaansh part!
It was devastating to read, I won't deny that!
But what I loved was Kria's reaction to it in the form of a dance!
I mean there's a connection that all the characters have with dance, but Kria especially!  I love the strength she has too!  Call me a feminist, but I hate it when all girl characters are shown to cry when things like this happen.. :P  But reading this SS, I could sense the courage and determination in Kria!
And before that scene, were the 2 parts where you wrote about Rey and Kria separately!
I loved that a lot too!
First writing about their opinions and feelings individually, then showing their "confrontation"
It was very well written! Clap

Ohh.. forgot about the last Swaron part..
That was beautiful <3
Nothing too extreme, nothing too fancy... A simple kiss... "Purification" as Sharon said
Just perfect <3
Day Dreaming

Aahh.. what do I even say
As usual, you have done such a brilliant job writing this chapter!
Now you see why I had to make sure I took my time to comment ;)
There's sooo many things that I have to comment on, because I feel that you need to know HOW much I appreciate and love this SS! :)

Awesomee job!!!  Veryy well written <3
And I'm super happy that this wasn't the last part! Embarrassed

Thanks a lot for the pm! :D
I'm soo eager to read the coming chapters <3 <3
Take caree!
Love, Hinal Hug


You have no idea how many times I have read this comment of yours. I love your reviews! And I am serious when I say they are one of the best! 

This has to be the longest comment I have got on this SS!! And I love you for it Hinal! 

Thanks for the amazing comment! And keep em coming! Big smile

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 4:36am | IP Logged
i am pitching in and shouting...

mera zyada lamba hota hai!!!!!!!! *pout and crying*

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ackraalkriyansh

NYcc Swaron Part Bahut acHHa tha bUt KRiyaansh yahan bhi Seperated(NAHINDead)

kriyaansh ko alag krne ke liye aap bahut buri ho ur really bad...CryCryCry
Update soon plzzzCry


Hawww!! Mai buri hu bahot??? Koi naa.. Thodi si toh hu!!! 
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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cookie_arsha

Amazing updte 
luvd it <3 

Thanks Cooks!! Embarrassed

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