Reserve...Promise to get back and comment by 2 dayss :P
Thanks for pm <3 <3 =D
----------------
Edited! =)
Okay, I know it's been more than 2 days, ut got caught up in other things :P
So... anyway, about the part..
What else can I say, but that I just loved the part!!?
I mean you have truly portrayed everything so well!
As much as I love Swaron and Kriyaansh, the fact that you show the maturity in Viha's relationship is just amazing! You didn't go into much detail, but that one line just said everything!
"If Neha wasn't there holding his hand the whole time..."
👏 That one sentence just stole me heart <3 Loved it!!
I also loved how he recognized that Neha was there the whole time, helping Vicky manage everything, even though she technically doesn't need to... That said a lot about their relationship and I'm glad that your SS deals with everyone with the same depth :)
Poor Sharon! Just reading that part, I felt goosebumps on my skin!
Perhaps the thought of it all is just so disgusting... But then in the end, I felt so amazed!
I absolutely admired when it was written, "she knew what would cure her"
That was like a heavenly moment for me!
And the fact that she felt dirtied but noticed that Swayam still thinks of her as his angel!
That was a beautiful moment!
And now the Kriyaansh part!
It was devastating to read, I won't deny that!
But what I loved was Kria's reaction to it in the form of a dance!
I mean there's a connection that all the characters have with dance, but Kria especially! I love the strength she has too! Call me a feminist, but I hate it when all girl characters are shown to cry when things like this happen.. :P But reading this SS, I could sense the courage and determination in Kria!
And before that scene, were the 2 parts where you wrote about Rey and Kria separately!
I loved that a lot too!
First writing about their opinions and feelings individually, then showing their "confrontation"
It was very well written! 👏
Ohh.. forgot about the last Swaron part..
That was beautiful <3
Nothing too extreme, nothing too fancy... A simple kiss... "Purification" as Sharon said
Just perfect <3
Aahh.. what do I even say
As usual, you have done such a brilliant job writing this chapter!
Now you see why I had to make sure I took my time to comment ;)
There's sooo many things that I have to comment on, because I feel that you need to know HOW much I appreciate and love this SS! :)
Awesomee job!!! Veryy well written <3
And I'm super happy that this wasn't the last part! 😳
Thanks a lot for the pm! :D
I'm soo eager to read the coming chapters <3 <3
Take caree!
Love, Hinal 🤗
Edited by basket_101 - 11 years ago
