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~Mi Amore~ Dil Dosti Dance SS#2 Ch 13 Pg 115 - Page 46

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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: yogini64

U r planning to end it? 😭
I was waiting for kriyaansh's propose . . . . . .
but it seems,,, ki vo scene shayad hi dekhne ko milega πŸ˜”
all bcoz of dat stalker neal 😑
he looks like a hungry tiger, ready to pounce on its prey
wanted to take advantage of sharon being alone πŸ€”
damn! . . . . He hurted her 😲
swayam on her rescue . . . . . He can't see his ladylove so helpless & hurt πŸ€—
but cheapsters backstabbed him . . . . Shit 🀬
rey ko to vaise hi double gussa aa jata hai aise time pe . . . πŸ˜•
but kriya misinterpreted him . . . .
I hope she get to knw the truth soon 😊
varna to rey ki 10 chapters ki mehnat bekar 🀣
anki . . . Hope u r not making it a sad ending . . . . .
plz D3 ka gussa hum pe aur iss story pe mat nikalna πŸ˜›



Baaahaaahaaahaaa!! 10 chapter ki mehnat!! hey bhagwaan.. yeh line padhke mai itna hansi!! 

Nahi nahi... happy ending hi hoga rey.. Its just that the end is near!! 

Thanks for the lovely comment once again Yogini!! 

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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: maddieee

anki u na,u r awesomeπŸ€—... seriously fantastic updateπŸ‘πŸΌ... i love mi amore... this update is just faultless... πŸ‘


this series is coming to an end? 😭😭 main tho phut phut ke rho rahi hu.. kriyaansh ka happy ending karna anki pleeej...


me loves u❀️


Me loves you tooo!!! 

Tujhe ending pata toh hai!! Kaahe ka diraama karing fir Gopi Vahu??

Me aur awesome!! Awwwiiieee!! *blushes*
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Posted: 11 years ago
@anki- Fir thik hai . . . . . 😊
lolzz . . . 10 chapters ki mehnat hi toh hai πŸ˜†
vaise bhi ye title bhi toh justify karna hai kriya aur rey dono ki side se πŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: puja_arsha

To finally aapne bomb phodh hi dia...n both swaron n kriyaansh r affected by it... So i was write...it wasn't swayam...it was some despo stalker... N wo kitna creepy tha...i mean only a LS person behaves with a girl like that... Achaa hua swayam came to the rescue...but usko hi us cheapo ne stab kar dia... Poor sharon...saare uske thoughts were wrong... It was like khoda pahaad nikala chuha types... I mean she expected swayam but it was some creep neal... N coming to kriyaansh... Rey all set with preperations...wow... But i guess destiny had something else in its mind... Kria waiting for d moment...their dance was amazing...but all turned into vein after that call... N again a MU...aisa lagta hai kriyaansh n MUs ka janam janam ka rishta hai... Poor rey waited for her n sher dint turn up... Ab aage kya hoga...??? Jldi update karo di...plz... Ab to mai aapko threat b nai kar skti...poor me...these studies n collg... Islie pljj update kar dena jldi se... N after ages i gave a long comment...thanx to u n ur updates...mai khud ko rok hi nai paati... Luv u ...



Haan finally.. Kaisa tha bomb?? explosive naa?? All three are going to be interlinked aage jaake.. I dont neglect ViHa either.. aage aage dekh! 

haan, I wanted the Neal character to be so creepy that it makes you flinch every time you hear about him.. was I able to make him scary enough??

Poor Sharon and Kria actually... I kinda hate me for doing so wrong to my lady leads... par thik hai.. story ke liye zaroori tha..!! 

Haan MU = KriYaansh... hehehehe... 

College enjoy kar baby!! 

Aur aise hi acche acche comments dete rehna!!

Love u too doll!! 
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: DamonCrazy_D3

That b******d.How dare he hurt Swayam.I hope he's fine.KriYaansh ke beech misunderstandings...purani baat hai.



Sahi kahaa Shaz!! Bahot puraani baat hai!!πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: apurva100

Ankiii...
Finally tune update kar diya..huh

update was amazing..
I love it..

Kria and rey ke beech fir se misunderstanding...
Jaldi jaldi khatam kar de misunderstanding..

Bichara swayam...i feel bad for him

aur agli time se lazy mat ban jyada*just kidding*

next part update soon..


Chonu tujhse kabse baat nahi hui hai meri! Choollliii!! 


Accha tha naa update!! thankew thankew!!! 

Jaisa tera hukum!! 

Sab jaldi jaldi khatam karing!! 

Tujhe aur Swayam ke liye buraa laging!! waaah waah!! 

banungi lazy!! jaaa!! 
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: upasna_mishti

Awiii anks it was osm ..seriously !! .. just luved it to the core and u r going to end this no .. plz ise FF bn le .. 😭 ..

seriously it is the best D3 ss i have ever read .. πŸ˜‰ [<:D<] ,.. ..
luv ya anks ...
😳 ..


Pasto meri jaaan!! aa jhappi paa!! shollli ki mai itti busy hu ki aajkal hum chat nahi kar paate!!

FF kaise banaau?? Itna patience nahi hai mujhmei!! 

kabhi naa kabhi toh end hona hi thaa naa upsi!! 

Love you loads too meri chotu! 
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: kitttu1309.

awsome update...

Puri story palat di goody-2 mood se saddy-2 kar di

nd kriyansh ke bich MU ohhno
hope ye jaldi clear ho jaye

thankx 4 d pm
update soon



Mujhe accha lagta hai aise palti maarna!!! hehehehe!! 


Thanks for the comment!! 
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: crazysky

its awesome

anky
loved the twist n turns...
rose day yaad karwa diya wen kria saw a bunch of dumb gals around rey trying to give him rose ..n kria thought "he is cassanova"
loved the swaron scene ...
beautifully xplained the terror of a stalker...
stalker se "lady frog" yaad aa gayi...
kriyansh scene kum kyu tha???
mujhe bada wala chahiye...
n waiting 4 next update...
please..is bachi ki manokamna puri kar do...



lady frog ko hi dimaag mei rakhkar yeh likha tha!! i hope it was creepy enough! 

KriYaansh aage aane wale hai... harr update balance karna thoda mushkil ho jaata hai rey chetu.. sorry...

teri manokaamna jald poori hogi.. as soon as I update TATM once..
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Awesome update
Poor sharon,swayam is in hospital
Kria misunderstand rey,hope their MU clear in next update
Waiting for next part eagerly
Update it soon



Thanks for the comment dear.. Dont worry, SwaRon are gonna be just fine! 

and MU will clear up soon!!