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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 7:17am | IP Logged
Wow.. I really dont know what to say! The comparisons to a spider were amazing. But truthfully i really dont like the implications! Was the part with her just a dream! 

Nicely written. Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 3:42pm | IP Logged
Great update! Clap
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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 5:44am | IP Logged
wow awsuuum update dear...loved it n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 6:55am | IP Logged
OMG. For me?! And I start reading it after 5 chapters are complete?! Gosh! Love you too Aashi! And I'm missing you loads!! Hug

Be back to edit soon okay?

*edit*

The first three chapters made me smile unbound, super happy at how things were progressing between the married couple despite Khushi's reservations, despite the past they shared, despite family's rules. It was oh so poetically written. I could quote the whole of the third chapter, the one with the morning after - It created some beautiful imagery in my head. The sugarcane fields, waterfalls, sun kissed depth of oceans! WOW! And challenging tradition for one you love. Haha! The other bahurani's must have had a word with their respective husbands that night! Oh! And they totally did not realise they had an audience did they! So lost in each other. :) It was idyllic those three chapters considering what came after.

Your note left me shaken to a large extent. I hope your friend is doing okay now. I can not imagine what she might have gone through and it is impossible to come out of such a horrible plight unscathed. Nobody deserves to be treated as a commodity. That comparison with the spider was amazing. I could go on about its literary value but the feelings and thoughts that evoked in the context of your note and even in the context of what many woman are dealt with generally, it was more poignant. Breaking a woman's spirit. Its difficult because women are stronger than men when it comes to emotions. And your portrayal really does touch the heart.

I can guess how difficult it may be for you to write this. But you are doing a fabulous job Aashifa! I love you! *hugs*


Edited by Psychedelic - 02 September 2012 at 6:15am
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Posted: 30 August 2012 at 6:30am | IP Logged
that was indeed sad ch...i had missed ch 3 so to go from one extreme to another - was more painful!

K's feelings were beautifully written - her looking for A, heartbreaking!

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 11:31am | IP Logged
That was...disturbing.

The entire analogy with the spider - the starting comments and then the closing of the web with the para at the end...it left you shuddering.

There was no deep descriptions but whatever there was was enough to make you hope desperately that the mirage of Arnav comes true very soon.

Very well written, Aashifa. Wont be able to write more because I really dont want to read through it again and again, so just know that it was that powerful.
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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 5:40am | IP Logged
Cry Oh Ashifah i've just read this story and i was really enjoying the lighthearted sweet love story until the promo and then chapter 5 which left me Shocked 
What could have possibly happened? why did Arnav leave? How did Khushi end up there?
Love the comparision between the spider and women. Beautfiully written.
Its quite disturbing, i have so many question and only you have the answers but i'm hoping for some sort of happy ending.
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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 6:16am | IP Logged
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