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catalyst IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 7:42am | IP Logged
wonderful:)

Anzie Senior Member
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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 8:38am | IP Logged

Beautiful! 

The person who has captured Khushi, is indeed torturing her badly :(

Hope Arnav or whoever she meant in her thoughts :)

Continue soon...
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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 9:50am | IP Logged
Ok i have no idea how you write so well Aashifa.

The comparison was utterly beautiful and i could almost feel her pain as she was being destroyed.I hope nobody and i do mean n o b o d y has to go through such a demeaning and humiliating experience.

But life is not as you expect it to be.

I really really miss Arnav now. I don't know why.

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 10:30am | IP Logged
very interesting update aashi
i really loved the metaphor you used for khushi spiders
quite an interesting way to describe
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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 10:39am | IP Logged
heartbreaking update waiting for the story to unfold how did she reach in that place and what happened loved the metaphor you used thanks for the pm
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Chilling! I actually have goosebumps - scared ones!

What happened? How did she get taken away? Where is he?

And he can't have stopped looking, can he? He wouldn't be the man we met in the first few chapters!

Brilliant words and the pain...I shudder to think this happens for real. Puts your life into perspective, doesn't it?
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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged
i loved the way you used the spider as a parallel to women
the first paragraph was so poetic - i loved it!
but i do have to say im a bit confused
why does she doubt that he even stated looking for?
i wonder what happened
cant wait for the next update to see what exactly has happened
thanks for pm :)
sunshine23 Senior Member
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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
That was a masterpiece..the spider, and the comparison with woman.
The description of her torture..I could see it all in my mind..and I have to say, that it really was quite vivid.
I take back what I said earlier..I will be keeping up with this Fic
Please update again soon! :)

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