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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 5:37am | IP Logged
That was beautiful but deathly. I cant stop feeling bad for her. :(

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 5:44am | IP Logged

That was sad..scary.But beautifully written.
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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 5:59am | IP Logged
awesome updatee...
loved the comparison u drawed btwn woman and spider...
am damn confused wt happenrd to khush..
plzz explain it...
ir wrtings are beautiful...
thnx 4 pmBig smile
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OMG!!!
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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 6:29am | IP Logged
Whoa! This update was..just..PERFECT!
Beautifully written!
The spider & lady thing was so perfect. I'm speechless! I feel like crying!
Khushi has been taken for trafficking? Am I right? But how did that happen?
They were living a happy & beautiful life. What went wrong? And where is Arnav? Didn't he come to search for her?
A lot of questions but no answers! Sigh! I hope we'll get our answers in the next update.
I know I've already said it but I'd say it again- Beautifully written Aashi!

P.S.- Are you a professional writer? You are too good at writing. Brilliant job! :D

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 6:47am | IP Logged
lovely
gr8
continue
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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 7:00am | IP Logged
If it is trafficking that you have written about (I'm not sure, still), then hats off to you for pulling it off with such perfection. Human Trafficking is an issue which needs to get as much general awareness it can manage, and for you to pick a concept such as this, is commendable.

Secondly, drawing an analogy between a Spider and a Woman, is , I don't know, highly creative, and of course, hell poetic. It gives you the shivers, yes, but still its beautiful, in a different mannerism.

I dread how the story is going to move forward now, so continue soon.

And a big hug for you Aashifa <3 
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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 7:16am | IP Logged
The comparison between a spider and a woman was brilliant. I felt for that woman bounded and tortured both physically and mentally. And I couldn't stop myself from crying. Thinking that these things actually happen gave me a shiver, and my heart went out to all those unlucky girls who have been subjected to such torment.
I don't know how these things happen. So I'm very curious to know about how Khushi got into this web.
Looking forward to the next installation of this FF.

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