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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 1:14am | IP Logged
love d way u write... kinda poetic... every bit of ot has this serene elegance...Heart very different...
 
And this part was very sweet... its as if it happened before my eyes...
totally loved itHeart

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 2:03am | IP Logged
nice part dear
plz continue soon

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 2:11am | IP Logged
Yup m a stalker...ws js going thru forum post wen i saw u updated chap 3...its awesome...so he hurtd hr by nt trusting hr bt evrythngs olrite nw...lovely upd8...beautifuly written especialy where u described their voices:-)

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 3:56am | IP Logged
great update...but did this happen immediately the next day after the marriage or was there a leap??? jo bhi ho..glad mu is cleared

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 4:06am | IP Logged
This is awesome!! yes i am a stalker!!! Loved many sentences in this update.Will try to do justice in quoting themLOL

"Honey met cardamom, dry wheat touched the sun as it danced to its tunes, breaths were caught, and eyes were lost, hands met.""Her voice, it was water slipping down a waterfall, wind whistling in sugarcane fields, the sun kissing the depths of the ocean that's what it sounded like."And finally the closing sentence-"This time rippling water met the scorching sun, the moon glinting in certain areas. And even if it weren't intentional his lips found hers, smoothing into its little creases, their fingers touched and twined together, resting besides their heads as they lost each other to mind numbing passion."


You are just too good aashi!

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 4:15am | IP Logged
huh i knew arnav was about to do something foolish which he stopped himself from doing 
he loves khushi believed her cousin gonna marry her but she ran away
arnav deserves it Approve
mehendi searching scene was great
loved the update aashi

and thanks for sneaking on IF and updating the FF ILY dear

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 4:25am | IP Logged
I amore this. (amore means love in espaniol)

Proper comment later!!

Lurrvvv,
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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 4:50am | IP Logged
beautifully written

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